Traveling Across the Heavens Starting from Douluo

Forgive me for my low poison resistance, I can only see Master Bai. First, if you don't go to the Spirit Hall, you won't go. You can write your thoughts freely. Why do you have to be afraid of Tang San? It doesn't matter if you are not cheating and are afraid of him. There is a system that is so awesome, but you still have to write such a reason. Second, why are you licking your face to worship the master? Do you think he has a better understanding of your martial soul than you do? Don't say you need him to help you hunt for soul rings. With the strength you set now, it's no problem to beat a master. So I can only say, farewell🙏

The other book was 200,000 words long and had no reviews.

Author, I beg you to read the original work. You will dissuade many people according to the comics. I saw that the soul curse recited by Oscar turned out to be stinky tofu and exploded on the spot... I originally thought your idea was very good. The combination of King of Glory and Douluo Continent turned out to be just a draw for skills and equipment. This is really a poisonous point... Then, I originally wanted to continue reading, but I ignored the poisonous point and regarded this as a poisonous point. It's a mindless article, but your loophole is really too big... Just the protagonist's immortal skills can directly make people die on the spot... I think if you design the protagonist's martial spirit to be a hero in King of Glory, there won't be so many poisonous points... In short, come on, my friend is also writing novels at Qidian. Come on!

Why do you still dream of getting good grades if you don't correct typos all over the article?

I will try my best to change it. I guess so.

In that case, I'll satisfy you. I will set up a slightly poisonous plot later. And Master Yu Xiaogang Tang San. Shrek. They separate.

I don't want to say anything else, but I just want a skin. I'm so busy transforming now, but you don't want a skin transformation?

Clothes! ! ! I'm confused! ! ! Goodbye author! Never again!

Who is the heroine? I'm a little confused

When I saw this, I felt that the back part was poisonous. It was clearly written in the front that Xiao Wu was the heroine, but in the back part, it was described that Xiao Wu felt that way about the mistress. I felt scared. I always felt that the back part must be poisonous and I couldn't go on. I have low resistance to toxicity.

Your first 80 chapters are basically no different from the original work. If you write a fanfic, can you just ignore the original work?

This Douluo of yours was modified by a demon, right? The original author can't stand it, so I'll say goodbye

Is it time for the heroine to become Hu Liena?

Originally, I didn't want to comment. I saw four major poisonous spots in Chapter 6. How far is Star Dou Sen from Nodino? Would an ordinary person run that far? At least a month of running time, two years in the Star Dou Forest, a place with so many soul masters, but you haven't even met a single one? You are born with full soul power but no power. If you don't join the Spirit Hall, I won't kill you. Is that okay? You are gifted with full soul power, but you still want to spend gold soul coins to buy a work-study student. You are rich and rich. As long as you hold the certificate, they will treat you like an uncle. No matter how hard you are, you will be a great soul master by the time you graduate. Are you not a fool? Maybe it's a favor from a future titled Douluo. How many innate soul powers are there in Dou Yi? On the surface, there are only about 20 per 100 years, and the writing is average. I have a reason why this book is so unfinished.

You don't have to have the heroine, you don't have to have the god, but you have to have a skin like Li Bai's

Your licking dog is really sweet. Can't you write in a different style when writing Douluo Dalu?

Even if you don't follow Tang San, you don't have to give Xiao Wu away.

They were all scolding me, and there were so many comments. Now there are no comments in there, has it become like they have abandoned me?

Inexplicably, I think of some games about cultivating immortality with words (￢_￢)

Come on! Come on, it looks great! Can I update it?

There are so many damn things about this that are wrong. Isn't Ning Rongrong's martial spirit the Seven Treasure Glazed Tile Pagoda? 🔨🔨🔨🔨🔨🔨🔨🔨🔨[fn =22]😆😆😆😆😆🔪🔪🔪🔪 🔪🔪🔪🔪🔪🎁🔪🔪🔪[fn =54]🔪🔪🔪🔪🔪🔪🔪🔪🔪

And why has Oscar's martial spirit changed?

I don't know whether the author writes the book or the reader writes the book. A book has been changed beyond recognition. It dug a hole as big as Xiaowu's and just said I don't want it.

I was confused after reading more than 90 chapters. Who does Xiao Wu like? What the hell was written? In the previous chapter, I was obsessed with the main character and in the second chapter, I felt like Tang San. Is it so disgusting? -_-||

The main character is so poor. I even smashed a mobile phone while playing King of Kings. No matter how angry I am, I can't bear to smash my phone.

The protagonist wants to absorb a new soul ring. What skills do you recommend? Tell me about it.

Don't lick Tang San. I want to see the protagonist confront Tang San (help Bibi Dong)

Can you change the order of Naruto and Zero

If you can't find it on Baidu, then go to the QQ group to find it. I put it in the group file.