Keep Running

It's almost 40 chapters and I haven't participated in the competition yet. Why don't you write a hammer! Are you preparing for the Golden Three Hundred Chapter?

Dude, it's great if someone is willing to write a marathon, but give me some small suggestions. Training methods aside, does your protagonist never need a massage? Is it all due to his natural talent? And you eat so casually, aren't you afraid of drug tests?

The description is too long-winded. The same fragment always has to be described from two or three angles... It's too redundant and nerve-wracking.

Arrange other plots, a sports novel, develop it into suspense and a bit fantasy, concentrate on writing long-distance running, and later develop short-distance running, wouldn't it be good, the results will definitely be better than now

I am a lazy fat person. I swear every day that I will exercise the next day, but I am still lazy in bed the next day.

I clicked on it with great interest and read a few chapters. The first part was quite satisfactory, but the results became more and more strange. So I clicked on the table of contents and took a look. It was around chapter 87 that I started for the first time... Farewell 😅

Congratulations on the launch! I have been raising it and it feels like it is ready to be slaughtered😁

After reading nearly a hundred chapters, I confirmed that the protagonist is Li Qingchun.

There are too many annoying female characters in this book. It feels like all the young female characters in the book like the male protagonist. Don't worry about the duplicitous ones like Yi Ren who think the male protagonist is not good. In the end, they all fell for the charm of our male protagonist. Is this the rhythm of starting a harem? To be honest, I don't think any of them are worthy of the male protagonist. They are all pretentious. You can't just write a story where the male and female protagonists feel depressed and end up together.

I want to ask the heroine, Ye Minxin was too dissuaded, but Zhao is not bad.

The run started in Chapter 87, and the first marathon is not completely over until it is released. It's clumsy and wordy, and the number of words in a chapter is still short.

It's too watery. When you wring out the water, you'll only get about one-sixth of the dry content. Cut off at least 60% of the water content, otherwise it will look uncomfortable.

This is not going to work and is unattractive. Your protagonist is so awesome right from the beginning. Readers like the development system. In the next book, write about a college amateur runner progressing like a professional runner, with some fun interspersed in the middle, such as going from being alone to joining a running group. Introduce some sports brands. For example, when I first started running, I wore Decathlon shoes, and I gradually transitioned to Li Ningyun, Pegasus, ASICS, Mizuno and so on. This is what makes it interesting. It's too fake to do this at the beginning. The most basic thing about a marathon is running volume.

Isn't this theme a bit boring...

It's a bit confusing, and is the protagonist a robot? He does whatever others ask him to do. People in their twenties who have not been in school for four years are just like a blank slate.

When are you going to write a sprint? There are too few categories in this category. Why don't you write about Liu Xiang's reopening?

Come on! Very few people write about this subject

Tomorrow is Xiamen Horse Racing. Read novels to improve your fighting spirit.

When I read this book, I was still 137 in the half marathon and now I am 118. What a youth.

How does this writing style sound like a mortal cultivating immortality?

First, when you appear, you are a human being at the level of cultivating immortals. It is only reasonable to have talent and train hard, and then reach the top. Second, the pace and heart rate are unreasonable. If he wins immediately, he is almost breaking the second mark, but his heart rate is still so low. So if he runs with a heart rate of 85, which is the limit, he will go to heaven.

There is innovation in the content, and then the characters are established, and progress is gradual. There are also different exciting points in each game. There is no homogenization of game content. Whether the author knows marathons or looks up information, the content written is still relatively professional. But there are also shortcomings. The first is that it is too watery. After each segment of a game, people from all walks of life will comment. The key is that the content of these people's comments in different games is basically the same. There is nothing new and it looks very homogeneous. Secondly, I feel that the author never went to college and his writing is very dramatic. The third business thing is just a bunch of ideas, so of course you can skip it. Fourth, there are a lot of personal things included, and the thoughts of some characters, including but not limited to athletes or coaches, are too abstract and unrealistic. Every one of the women in The Fifth Sense has something wrong with them, and they are not like normal people. Although there are some shortcomings, the main content is still well written, and it can be considered a fine book in this genre. If you weren't so outrageous that I could only skip watching, I would still be willing to subscribe.

It's pretty good But the name is not very attractive 2333 Although there is a guy who writes about running topics who has a bad name and is very popular, no one read his first book at the beginning, mainly because of the name and subject matter Anyway, cheers for the author (*´ｽ)

Very well written, keep up the good work, author!

It's very beautiful. Come on, author.

Horse racing enthusiasts will really like this book.

Congratulations on the launch, keep up the good work!

Just got back from my morning run and caught up with me 😁

It's time for the author to get up and go for a run and update by the way 🤭

Come on, triathletes passing by!