Traveling Through the Huashan Sect: the Unlucky Guy's Turnaround

Lots of nonsense, no plot at all. Once I entered Huashanshui, I talked for a few chapters but didn't get to the practice plot. I was dizzy. The inner struggle of the protagonist is "complicated". I can just talk about my inner thoughts in a few chapters, haha.

If nothing else, this book is a hit.

I read two chapters, extremely poisonous! The whole story is nonsense, and it takes a long time to get to the main point. The protagonist is not a middle-aged person, but completely mentally retarded. The author suggests that after you finish writing, take a look at what you have written.

I really can't help but comment a sentence or two. Author, you are really good at it. It seems that you are going to follow it from beginning to end. I have read more than two hundred chapters now. I will see if it will be the same after more than three hundred chapters.

It's too wordy and affects my mood. Too much nonsense and nothing to say. Talking to yourself, thinking wildly. Endless, never said the same thing. How does the author think of my imitation? I said one sentence four times without repeating it.

The author of this book talks nonsense and abandons the book,

Author NB! ! ! With the author's perseverance, he will definitely not be a thing in the pool in the future. I will be worshiped by my little brother!

The first chapter was full of drama, it was so poisonous that I really couldn't stand it.

Too wordy. I was upset when I watched it. I vomited. The main character is too stupid. I can't stand it. I recommend you not to watch it.

You are really ink. It's so annoying that I can't bear it anymore.

Water for the sake of water, this novel should be deleted, disgusting

Who can watch the mentally retarded protagonist?

I just stopped reading your introduction. I really can't appreciate it. I felt lonely after reading it for a long time.

Why is it that the horse kills the chicken, not the chicken that kills you? ... It's too poisonous!

Is this book also in the selection? How does Qidian editor review

I suggest you find a way to finish this book and start a new book to reach new heights. As the saying goes, a million people can become a god. You already have so much coding experience, and your level is no matter how high it is as a professional online writer. Continue to write this book. The first plot is not to the readers' taste, but no matter how good the second part is, no one will read it, which is better than nothing. Basically no one will read it. If you open a new book, you will definitely be able to write a masterpiece with the master's writing skills!

Really good at water. . . You can see it just by looking at the first chapter. . .

Have you been persuaded to quit by black fans?

Light and clear, not vulgar, great work

It's so long-winded that the preface doesn't match the postscript.

In mainland China, Lu Shaoxia said one word 20 times, Yue Buqun said one word 20 times, and the word "water" was used to cheat money and charge people to see it, but there is no useful information at all.

Come on, author🤭🤭🤭

Yue Buqun taught martial arts and actually wrote three chapters. What did he have to say to Lauderno? It's endless.

Happy Lantern Festival, the author is great

A great read, thanks for the guidance!

This book is in this style, and I remember there is also an infinite book in this style.

According to your specific development, I think it is best to have no female protagonist, because you are like this, it is simply a disaster for other girls. Because I think this matter is a bit worrying, I am really worried about him and his partner.

Speechless, this is just for practice. I write whatever I think. To be direct, just babble. Don't think it's something novel and unpretentious. It makes your head look big. Unless you hypnotize yourself, you will definitely not be able to eat it.