Queen Zetian

First of all, the author, your book tells a story, so the character descriptions in your book should have your own understanding, rather than copying and pasting a large paragraph of information. You should refine the content for readers, rather than popularizing science. This is more disgusting than the word count. Secondly, I didn't see that the protagonist and others were time travellers, so the appearance of modern spoken language and Internet slang in those dialogues was a big flaw. Even if you are studying things about the Ming Dynasty, you won't write them in this way. The most important thing! If you want to write a historical article, then you need to have a basic understanding of history. The conversation between Wu Mei and Li Shiji when her father died was terrible. Even if Li Shimin was still the King of Qin at that time, a general could call a child with a yellow mouth by his first name? A child doesn't understand, and a general doesn't understand?

The writing is okay, but the plot is not familiar. It looks interesting. Come on, try not to stop updating, I believe the results will come up after signing the contract. Um, I'm saving it, it's best to update it as soon as possible. By the way, remember to pay attention to each other. Go and collect my books too. Favoring and encouraging each other is not