The Game Master Is a Top Student

The protagonist's portrayal is rubbish The protagonist pretends to be cool in the game, but in reality, just anyone can help the protagonist make decisions and decide what the protagonist does. The content of the novel is water, water, water. Say important things three times. Eighty percent of the content of the novel is devoted to the game process, with more than fifty chapters written in four or five games. The only normal plot is a bit confusing. We read novels to see the story and plot, not to see the game commentary. If we want to see the commentary, we can just watch the game video. Why should we read your novel? Finally, readers who like LOL very much and really have no books to read can read it. Friendly reminder: Don't use your brain when watching, and you must have a very strong ability to resist poison.

How to go from prosperity to destruction? The author interprets this sentence to the extreme! It is very responsible to tell the author that a masterpiece has been written to pieces by you! ! Logically speaking, if you don't like it, just don't watch it, but I couldn't help it, feeling heartbroken, regretful, and even a little bit hateful! The subject matter and ideas are so good, and the writing style is also very pertinent. Why do you have to reduce the word count? It's a lot of nonsense, it's full length about the game, it's completely devoid of rhythm, I, a fritter who has been playing League for eight years, can't stand it anymore, I really thought you were advertising for a game platform here! Originally, I planned to invest in it in the early stage, but fortunately, fortunately, I read two to three hundred chapters! I don't know why, I can't say I hate it, I just feel sick to my stomach when I watch it. It's not because of the special content, but it's just uncomfortable! I read forty or fifty chapters in a row while writing about the game. Who do you think can bear it? I really can't think of a plot that I can write to slow down. After all, classics still need to be conceived. It's a pity that you are completely guaranteeing quantity but not quality. You have to think clearly. It costs money for people to read your books. Don't blame me for being harsh. I have the right to comment after I spend money. I can't control what others do, but I want you to see it! The deterioration of the quality of a thing is irreversible, and it is basically difficult to be decent. What a pity! This book resonated with me! So I am very angry! Can't control it!

I really can't stand Zhang Qiang, this kind of mindless supporting character is really poisonous. It's a big deal to do a solo with others, and then call a pig's trotter to show off after losing. This kind of routine has been bad for a long time, and I really can't stand it now.

Do you have to write a stick to disgust people?

After reading 200 chapters, the plot is too confusing. After reading a single chapter of your 400,000-word chapter, you said that the protagonist was abducted by traffickers when he was a child and developed mental illness. This is a game study novel. The main plot is this, not all miscellaneous things can be stuffed into it. I still don't understand the character of the protagonist! Is the protagonist really insane? You explain this and that in a single chapter. Do you want to add scenes to the protagonist later in the plot? With so many realistic plots, wouldn't it be great to read urban life stories? Everyone is reading this book just to watch the game and develop as a top student. If your writing skills are not good, don't write too much and be a little self-aware. Just like me, I just can't read and know that I don't have that ability.

Write an ability gained by playing the game. Played a few chapters and then threw it away. Let you do this or not. Do that or not. Just for the water plot? Have you been playing games for a long time? Then you can do this directly in LOL. Why join Xueba? Seeing the Go game there is really poisonous. The foreigners bullied me to no end. You don't fight. Did you give me a sentence of priorities? ? Just to force the protagonist to go abroad and pretend to be a loser? The reason is particularly refreshing and refined. So drunk

I read it, it's poisonous, you either have to show off to the end, or you hide it from the beginning, act like you're standing up, and feel like you're holding back in the middle of going to the toilet. I rarely post book reviews since I started reading, and you're the first one here.

How should I put it? How to design the background is your business as an author. The concept of version can be vague, but as an author, you can even write the most basic data wrong. You just wrote the last chapter to death, and the next chapter will come with a data of 3/0/1. I just mentioned BO3 and then there will be one. I have already lost two games, so it's time to look at the last one. I don't know if you have never played LOL or something. But you even make the most basic mathematical calculations wrong, and you often make typos in your text, and even make two typos in a paragraph of less than 30 words. You wrote the book so carelessly (even naming it useless), I don't know how it got recommended. I can only say that you can read this book without using any brain, but if you use a little brain, you will not be able to read this book.

Brother, why don't you write it? If you don't write it, just say it and don't lie all the time.

A few suggestions for new entrants ①The timeline in the article is confusing, but it can be regarded as a parallel world, this can be ignored ②Please click on the poison resistance, the plot, emmmm is hard to describe in one sentence, if you want to click on this chapter, please don't click on it, just read this book for yourself, Don't click on the comments after the plot [I'm here to comment. It's really a low IQ. If you think it's bad, you can cross it out. You must comment on it. Just comment on it. From the beginning to the end, it's just the same person who clicks on the comment. It's really disgusting. Why don't you like what you're reading? ③Nothing, be sure not to read the comments, read the novel content with peace of mind, close it if it is not to your liking, report it if you encounter disgusting people, especially those who say they are disgusting and read later.

It looks good in the early stage, but if a game is too long, I might write about that game for 2-3 days, and the protagonists are all systematic people. Is it still necessary to hide it like this? All the supporting characters appearing now either hide this or that from him or her. Also, I remember there was a paragraph where it was said that the protagonist was abducted and trafficked as a child, and now he has a low self-esteem. I don't think he has a low self-esteem after seeing it now. . . . . Also, based on the current plot trend, I estimate that this book will reach 4-5 million words. A situation without an abrupt ending. .

I feel that later on, it's all about playing games, and every chapter is the same.

The author said that it was the 2nd anniversary of the Alliance. Riven had just been released not long ago, and Yasuo had just been released for a week. Mercy had revised its evolved form, killing swords, explosive fruits, defense tower plating, and elemental dragons appeared at the same time. If you want to use alliances to attract people, can you write well? A smorgasbord in one pot? Write whatever comes to mind, forcefully portray the protagonist, get millions in money and have to live in your cousin's house. What do you think about German orthopedics? The writing is really messy

How to say? Are you a systematic person and still have stage fright? Still want to win the championship? I understand, but it just can't be connected. You can change your personality a little bit, don't hide it. ... One more thing is to update soon...

The emotions here are a mess

After looking at it, it started well. The rhythm was 1 fast, 2 chaotic, and 3 was written without missing the information. The quality kept declining, and then someone must have made a move and started to use routines. . . If you don't get such a popular idea, you have to pounce on it. Novice authors should not think about making money by walking quickly and sorting out the outline and plot one chapter a day. This book is definitely in the top 150 of the monthly ticket list.

The writing is still very good, and the subject matter is the most novel among all the lol fanfics I have read, especially the inclusion of a large number of daily life elements. It's just that the skill CD card is not very accurate, but it's a novel after all. You can understand it and don't go into details.

Halfway through, I felt like the book had collapsed and I gave it up I felt so disconnected from reading it.

Bored to pass the time, or people who are not serious can read it. I will read lol novels, but I can accept it no matter how good the writing is, or if there is a system or something. God's perspective destroys the game experience and balance, and it can be used as a special temporary skill with strict requirements. Then, as written in the book, the directional skills will not be empty? Permanent God's perspective? Forget it if you stay here, I can't stand it anymore. It's just cheating to play games. How rubbish is this system?

I advise the author to quickly find a reason to remove the entire protagonist's picture! There is a saying that has been passed down through the ages in competitive games such as League of Legends and Dota: "Cheating is fun for a while, ***!" This sentence reflects the hatred of ordinary players for cheating players who do not abide by the rules of fair competition! If the author wants to attract a large number of such players to read your book, he or she should make a decision early!

I don't know if the author's writing style is bad or not. In fact, you can't describe a very simple protagonist clearly. You just keep imitating Chen Mu's ordinary appearance. At first, others thought he was ordinary? Does that mean he is really average-looking, and then he is said to be handsome later? When the next dormitory went out to play, I felt that I was the most average among the four. The full text of the running account system will make you angry after reading the next chapter. Moreover, the character of the protagonist is the biggest flaw. He hates trouble and wants to learn more. What next? He would do whatever others asked him to do, and he would not do his job properly all day long. He was just asking, not begging. I hesitated every time before taking it. You will definitely agree. Why are you hesitating? Can you have some self-control? I gave up after watching it halfway and I don't know if it's right or not. If you want to be a professional, you have to create a protagonist who hates trouble. If you hate trouble so much, it's two o'clock and one line every day. Thank you for your daily life, isn't it? There was something that surprised me before? Someone asked you to make up a lesson for 2,000 an hour, but it was a good thing that because the child didn't like studying, you simply took him out to watch games and played games at home, and you still paid for it. If this protagonist were the tutor I hired, I would break his hand and make him never touch games in his life.

The quality of the book has been declining, and the latest chapter is a standard routine. What is it pretending to be? Is it necessary? You can win if you can, but you still have to hide it from your roommates and others, and then get slapped in the face again? A person with strength, money, good looks, and knowledge, or a person with low self-esteem or lack of confidence? This kind of routine really makes me vomit, I hope the author can give it a try.

How to say it! The book is quite interesting and beautiful, and it has gradually become the subject of academics and lol. But author, neither the title nor the introduction of your book indicates that the game is LoL. If I hadn't clicked in and read a few chapters, I would have thought it was an ordinary web game (relatively boring). It would be best to add the word "Lol" in the introduction, which should attract some readers. You've made an investment, go for it! !

Okay, take a look. I think it would be too buggy if you give money. I suggest you delete the part that gives money.

Disappointed, very disappointed. It is obviously a very powerful golden finger, but it turned out to be a mentally retarded child playing tricks. Normal people should all know the value comparison between game level and knowledge and skills, right? Let me put it bluntly. Compared with the high school knowledge level and above, the game level is not worth mentioning. No matter what kind of professional master you are, playing the game well can only make money, and cheats can make money. The protagonist's golden finger is too wide, and the author himself has no concept of how to control it. Do you know what it means to be a master calligrapher? Do you think that if you write well, you can become a master? It's a joke. Such a treasure is the wealth of the country. Do you think such a person can be cultivated through hard training? A person with the protagonist's abilities cannot naturally belong to only one circle, let alone the gaming circle. Because your gaming industry is too small to accommodate such people. After watching it, you are still playing games in college. It's really ridiculous. The point of going to college is to show off? Who are the people who play games in college? There are just two kinds of people, those who are from a good family and have no ambitions, and those who are not good at studying and social. The layout of this book is really too small. I guess it is because of a lack of skills. The protagonist knows how to show off day by day. To be honest, after you really have a game level that surpasses everyone else, the game becomes boring to you. Have you never cheated? After the game is cleared, who will study the boss's skills? The fun part of this book is originally the academic master, and the game is just an inconspicuous advantage of the academic master.

After reading the introduction, I thought it was about games as a supplement and other things as the main focus, but it turned out that it was mainly about games. Other things are supplemented by writing a game with about ten chapters, and then writing one or two chapters of life and then ten chapters of the game plot. I feel that the author has missed the point.

I can't stand it anymore, there are many typos and the plot is weak. The game version and background are confusing. It feels like from S3 to the current version, whatever version, equipment, and routine comes to mind, and I try to forcibly subdue passers-by and slap them in the face. However, there is nothing exciting about it. It feels like the author is enjoying himself.

I don't know why. I thought it was interesting at first, but since the character Li Juan appeared, I felt more and more annoyed. Until Chapter 55, I couldn't stand it anymore, so I clicked the cross button.

It's for academics, so let's go. This article is basically about using academics to gain popularity. A scumbag is forced to gain knowledge by playing games and becomes an academic. This is not as exciting as the academics' literature. Especially at the beginning, it describes the psychological changes of the protagonist. The protagonist clearly knows that his parents got a humorous family life by studying hard. He clearly knows that studying hard is very important, but he still ends up being a scumbag and not studying hard at all. If such a person can become a top student, I really feel unfair for the person who studies hard but cannot be a top student. This year is not like the routine of 10 years ago, where the protagonist survived a plane crash and the knowledge of all the physicists on the plane was implanted in his mind. Nowadays, everyone wants to read things that are logical and self-consistent. If you play a game, kill monsters, and suddenly gain knowledge for no reason, cool writing is a brainless cool writing.

What is written now? With the system and ability, his character has changed from being confident at the beginning to being timid now, refusing to admit anything he does. Do you want to change from fairy grass to poison? The more I read, the more uncomfortable I feel. The character is obviously so good as before, but why did you write it into something?