The Immortal Taoist Priest in the Martial Arts World

The golden finger setting of the author's book is quite interesting, and the writing style is also good. There are basically not many bad points, but the update is too slow. The only bug in the book so far is that the protagonist travels to a parallel world similar to the earth (the year is Emperor Chongzhen and the entry of the Tatars). Even if the protagonist is an earthling who knows the history, how can he predict and determine the exact time of the death of Emperor Chongzhen in this parallel world similar to the earth? The death method is the same as the one on Earth? As a parallel world similar to the earth, it can be explained that the past has similar historical development, but the protagonist, an alien who has just traveled through time, predicts that the Chongzhen Dynasty will die in three years, which cannot be explained. (It would be quite reasonable if you changed it to see the historical process of this world in the next ten years during the time travel) There is another small poisonous point in the book at present. The protagonist leads eight hundred elite soldiers to meet Xuanzhen Taoism, and uses revolver fire to face Wu Sangui's three or four thousand cavalry. You must know that what really scares the cavalry and ends is when the machine gun develops. According to the development of firearms in the book It had just started. The fire system at this time was basically single-shot. The latest revolver only had five bullets at most. It took a minute to fire five bullets, and the power was small. The effective range was about more than 100 meters. In terms of lethality, it was not as powerful as the crossbows at that time. It actually dared to face the charge of three to four thousand batches of armored cavalry. The key was that the cavalry charge could actually stop midway. I almost died from the poison. The ancient style began to develop firearms as soon as it was written. When these Western sects came out, they felt so inconsistent. Here are some suggestions for the author. You can increase the upper limit of extraordinary items in this world. The current limit is too low, and there is no quality at all. Otherwise, based on the current settings of the world's materials, there is no hope for the protagonist to upgrade the foundation-building golden elixir later. According to China's thousands of years of civilization, there are not too many mysterious items attached. For example: The Emperor's Xuanyuan Sword, King Wen's Book of Changes, Yuan Tiangang's Tui Bei Tu, ancestral jade seals and clan jade, China's Kyushu Tripod, Qin Shihuang's Twelve Bronze Figures, Hua Tuo's Green Bag Book, the Ten Famous Swords of the Spring and Autumn and Warring States Period, the Yue King Goujian Sword, the Four Famous Qins, the Buddha's Finger Relics, the Golden Jade Clothes, the Bronze Sacred Tree, and Zhuge Liang's Seven-Star Lantern. Pursuant belongings of the Ten Most Wonderful People in China: Pengzu, Confucius, Laozi, Zhuangzi, Guiguzi, Jiang Ziya, Zhuge Liang, Liu Bowen, Yuan Tiangang, Zhang Sanfeng, Buddha Bodhidharma, Taoist Zhang Daoling, Sect Master Lu Dongbin and other legendary figures. Also, write more about the development of the supporting characters in the other world of Goldfinger and don't want to dismiss it in a few paragraphs. In the early stage, the protagonist only needs to develop slowly in the main world. When the strength increases, the protagonist will use the main body or make a clone to develop in other worlds and resell materials from the two worlds. As for the aura problem mentioned by many book friends, wait until the protagonist's strength is higher. You can use countless spiritual stones to create a spiritual vein yourself. If that doesn't work, check if there are any missing cave treasures in this world. Go to another world to get a spiritual spring heart or a spiritual vein heart seed and slowly cultivate it in the cave.

Everything else is fine, but the writing style is a bit poor and the descriptions are too straightforward. In the ancient setting, especially the fairy tales, it seems inconsistent.

There is a high probability that the new book will be the same as this one. In the mid-term, if the force value is too high, it will start to collapse, and then the data will drop too much🗡️, so let's take a look at the early stage.

After 350 years, the time span reaches the end of the 20th century. Eternal emperors and immortal families are all reduced to a handful of loess. At this time, the earth is dominated by the three pillars of the United States, China and the Soviet Union. Since the industrial revolution is more advanced than in previous generations, it is approximately equivalent to the 21st century 30s. Unmanned cars, unmanned express planes, and general-purpose robots are interspersed in the streets and alleys. People pointed at the air, and the situation-capturing glasses kept returning feedback. Earth's technology actually developed the flavor of flying swords controlled by thoughts in the world of immortality. At the same time, due to Xu Yong's intervention, a trace of the spirit beast bloodline spreads on the earth in the mirror world, and the beautiful hybrid animals are a must-have pet for young girls. In short, this is a world that is similar to the earth in the previous life but also has many differences. Although Xu Yong is sleeping in the cave, he has been sensing technological changes through the insects. The scene shifted to Mars, where a ruins appeared after a storm that spread across Mars. The astronauts who went to explore were missing. Several advanced bases built by humans were constantly lost. Only the Chinese base sent back a few words similar to zombies. Although the Xu family is no longer the home of the emperor, it has never been too far away from the center of power. Naturally, this message was also sensed by Xu Yong. When the newly established Chinese Lunar Space Force Headquarters was discussing whether to set off to Mars, they were notified by their superiors to receive a mysterious package and immediately dispatch the latest unmanned warship to Mars.

It's not clean enough. Tang Ming has survived twice. The first time he survived, he became a grand master. The second time the protagonist took action, he still survived. I don't know if there will be a big improvement this time. This kind of writing will be annoying if it's not written well. It's the same as Xiaoqiang's many times. No matter how good the concept is, no matter how good the writing style is, people will be disgusted.

How can the protagonist go far with his current qualifications? There are many resources for cultivating qi and practicing qi in the front, but there are so many resources for forming pills and infants in the back? Others can form a core with two resources. Does the protagonist rely on others to give him 10 times and a hundred times the resources? There are fewer resources as you go up the ladder, so how can you get far with low qualifications?

The power of novels in recent years has become increasingly low, and I don't know who started it.

It's a bit outrageous: Everyone in the weird world knows that there are restrictions on martial arts. The famous sect in the mirror world - the Shenxiao Sect, has no restrictions on the inheritance of its martial arts, and its soul can be easily obtained by others. Aren't you afraid that the martial arts will be targeted? ! It's illogical, outrageous, outrageous!

The author seems to have deliberately made the protagonist look like a loser. After practicing for so long, can't his talent be improved? Are you deliberately trying to make the story too dramatic?

I don't understand if I have to raise corpses. It consumes more resources in vain. There is also the danger of zombies coming back to bite me.

Thinking about the character of the male protagonist, Tao's heart collapsed. There are no human emotions. Practice every day. And then after reaching the top. There is no familiar person, no human desire. No need to eat, drink or have diarrhea. What kind of existence is this?

After looking at it, it's a bit boring. Basically, it's just traveling through a world, squatting there to develop power, and then exchanging materials with other worlds. It's okay at the beginning, but it becomes very boring later. In that evil world, other people's worlds don't seem to have a home field advantage.

I've been too busy recently, and I don't have the amazing feeling I had when I first started reading it. It's time to finish it.

After ten years of cultivation, from the first level to the second level of qi training, and using so many resources, I feel a bit speechless about what to do next.

I've just read a dozen chapters, and I really don't understand how the protagonist's father succeeded in seizing power? Can you seize power by killing a leader? How could those thousands of barbarians recognize you, a Han, if they didn't say they were fighting for you? If you have the strength to show kindness and power, it's okay. If you don't have that strength, how can people recognize you?

This title reminds me of a novel I read a long time ago but didn't finish, Taoist Priests in Jin Yong's World.

The third world didn't persist. Is there anything as unique and extraordinary as this one? If you have an online IQ, don't pretend to be extraordinary. Everyone except your family can help. There are too many mindless books.

After conquering three worlds, when I arrived in the mirror world, I was actually an ant, and I lost all feeling in an instant. This is considered a poisonous point. In the three worlds, people with such high standards do not bother to talk to others. But in the mirror world, it turned out to be an ant. The contrast is too great. I have no desire to watch anymore.

Well written in the early stages. It won't be good after chapter 300. In the mirror world, there are the True Immortal Chiyin and the Immortal Yuluo. The protagonist has just reached the peak of Yuanying. He has to travel through the world to break through the transformation of gods and overcome the pressure of the realm. In the mirror world, you broke the mirror yourself. How come those people from the Zhou family became traitors to the Tao sect again? They don't even know what Taoism is, right? You want to establish a Taoist gate in the mirror world, do you have to reform the world? The world without demons you wrote is so big, how many worlds like Taoism can you build? Can't you just improve your strength? If you don't go to the Mirror Realm if you have the Dharma of Nirvana, you will have so many resources and it will be such a waste.

It's so watery, I don't want to see it at all. The protagonist has to grind to death even if he kills an ant. You chase me and write 2 or 3 chapters. I don't know what you are doing.

I've read that new books are on the new books list. How can I get this book? More updates?

Promise to update again, but the result is not updated, words do not mean it

After the protagonist achieves the achievement of building a golden elixir, his performance methods are average, not magical, and plain, like an upgraded version of the warrior. The protagonist appears most often, and his appearance and age have not changed. Xianfengdaogu is very boring to watch. In fact, it feels like the protagonist's performance is just to live a little longer, and there are cheats, but it is actually very mediocre.

The weird world of cultivating immortals that I wrote before I stopped writing was really long and stinky. I actually continued to write it after picking it up. The tone of the whole book was distorted by the plot of this world.

We agreed to re-update, but now there's not even a trace of it.

It is a novel that I like very much. This should be the second time I read it. The plot is exciting and the writing is sharp, but lacks tenderness. The protagonist wants to practice and become an immortal. But you are still human because there is no possibility of eternal life. It's a pity that Xie Miao was not accepted as a good couple, so in the end the protagonist was left alone to move forward. The ultimate goal of cultivation is to live alone. What's the point? Cultivation is actually about living longer, enjoying a lot of wonderful happiness in the long years, having people you love, and spending beautiful years together instead of making your life more boring, numb, and dim.

First time

After reading the first dungeon, I always felt weird that the protagonist didn't even have any bloodline left behind.

It's beautiful, it's so beautiful. The author should update it quickly, otherwise I won't be able to eat or sleep well.

Take it away without thanks 🙂🙂🙂