The Old Man's Gorgeous Turn

This introduction can easily cause misunderstandings 🤭🤭🤭🤭🤭, wuwuwuwuwu, this is the bus to the kindergarten, hurry up and get on the bus

The author's writing style is actually quite good, and the details are well described. However, it can be seen that the author may not have any outline, and the main line seems unclear. If the plot can be more fascinating and there are opportunities to recommend it, then there should be many people who like this book. Come on!

Reminds me of an old article "Reborn Dad Is a Best Friend"

Your book would still have potential if you didn't write about daughters. How many people would like this kind of daughter besides that kind of bt? Why don't you just write about cultivation and urban superpowers honestly? The writing is also good, one character can really ruin a book.

It's quite beautiful. Why are there so few people?

Pay attention to the format, it's so dense, it's very stressful and urgent to read.