Taking My Daughter into the Apocalypse

The novel, I read it. As a reader, I can tell you the truth about this novel: the writing is novel and the plot is tight. It is a good novel. However, there are still plots from the comic "Brother Corpse" and the game "Honkai Impact 3" in it. This should be avoided in the later stage. The second one is that the entire chapter is too short. Judging from your writing style, you look like a professional writer, not a newbie at all. So you get one chapter, preferably more than 3,000. Of course the above is my personal understanding, come on,

After reading the first two chapters, the writing style is there. The story is also told clearly, without confusing descriptions. It's just that the pace is a bit slow, and there are too many irrelevant things in the first chapter. Or you want to introduce the protagonist's background clearly. In fact, it is not necessary. The reader will always focus on what the protagonist will do, not what he has done before.

At the beginning of the end of the world, the protagonist is relatively powerful and has a mysterious background. The second chapter reveals the origin of Goldfinger, and the background is very grand. The routine is a combination of daddy stories and apocalyptic zombie stories, mixed with trouble-making gods and system attribute cheats. It is very attractive to readers who like Luo, Liyang and Cheng. There are currently no major poisonous points and it is still in the upgrade reserve stage. In terms of atmosphere rendering, it can be seen that the author has dug a lot of holes, and I hope that the subsequent description will be more atmospheric.

I am a stupid person and don't know what to say, so I'll leave it to you readers. Speaking of which, this is my first work. I put a lot of effort into it and conceived it for a long time. Although the writing may not be good enough, I will try my best to write it well and complete the story. Because I am a newbie, I have a new book, I am starting from scratch, and various promotional methods are not available, so the results are very dismal. Here, I hope my readers can support me and like my works. I would like to thank you all 😢 I now need recommendation votes, book reviews and investment. Every bit of support from everyone is very important to me! Thank you!

Come on, keep up the hard work. Bookmarked. Looking forward to visiting again.

Since zombies above level 3 have a certain IQ, what would be the reaction if a high-level zombie was punched in the lower body by the protagonist?

The heroes of the apocalypse rise and leave you.

If zombies are divided into 10 levels, and level 2 swallows a level 2 zombie and evolves to level 3, then wouldn't level 9 swallow a level 9 zombie and become level 10? At least 10 must be swallowed, otherwise there will be tens of thousands of level 10 zombies...

After reading the first four chapters, the author's expressions and descriptions of the characters are very detailed and interesting. I stopped reading and continued reading. Hehe 😁

Reports from members of the Anti-Qing Fuming Tomorrow Association

This is well written. I read more than ten chapters in one sitting in the toilet. Come on, author, I like this daughter very much~

Already collected! This is my first time reading a fantasy novel and I don't know how to evaluate it. But I want to say that most of the paragraphs are too long, and it makes your eyes dazzled. . . . . . . But I still want to say, come on! I wish you will become a god soon! Come on together!

Why can't I read one chapter? What happens if a chapter is missing?

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