Reborn as an Absolute Superstar

I have read a lot of competitive football novels, and I can be considered an old fan and bookworm. Let me talk about my impressions of this book. Please correct me if I find it inappropriate. Firstly, it is actually the general trend for competitive novels from Qidian to write about domestic competitions. Originally, competitive novels are more likely to have the problem that the plot follows the competition and the plot is relatively dry. If you don't write about China, to be honest, it is better to write about foreign athletes in a parallel world. If you don't write about China, it will be difficult for the novel to be grounded and close to reality, and readers will feel bad. Second, this book has the same flaws as other competitive novels. 1. Characterization. How many chapters have been written, and the heroine is almost Rowling. The portrayal of this female character is like all competitive novels, without any description. What does she look like, have a good body shape, and what shape does her hair have? Couldn't the author have divided the text and let the protagonist and Rowling have a Brazilian barbecue and some rump beef? It is boring to write that Rowling has power and background, but has no depiction of life. I'm not saying that Rowling's character portrayal is dry, but that all characters are like this, but this heroine really can't bear it. 2. Football itself. To be honest, I suspect the author doesn't know much about modern football, or doesn't know much about it. The technical and tactical writing is not entirely based on stealing chickens. The adjustment of the formation itself, the head coach's response, the tradition of Brazilian football, and the development of modern European football are completely absent. It also lacks its own insights into football, which is unqualified for competitive sports novels. 3. The writing is too perfunctory. Regarding the opponent's players and teammates, whether they are big names or weaklings, they completely lack characteristics.

The author's world is either white or black. There is no third color and there is more black.

I don't understand why the author wants to write about China. It's easy to cross the line without mentioning it. Moreover, given the domestic football environment and the protagonist you wrote about, what is the significance of world-class technology developing domestically...

Superstars also go to Brazil to have their hair done and go directly to Europe to make money, and you don't need to learn skills.

It's very well written, and it's worth following now 👍

After reading Chapter 10, everyone except the old Brazilian man is criticizing the protagonist 🙂🙂. It was okay to write like this 10 years ago