My Apprentices Are All Big Men from Other Worlds

I feel like there's something wrong with the emphasis. The skill of the Great Dream is pretty good, but it's too focused on describing things in other worlds, and I still lost my memory. When the number of words increases in the future, it will become an infinite flow without memory, and so far this plot takes up half of the chapters. Originally, most readers wanted to see master and apprentice falling in love and killing each other, but writing this way may make many readers abandon the book. I originally wanted to see the spiritual energy revive, but ended up coming to Infinite Flow, which was a bit uncomfortable. I'm waiting to see when you, the author, can write back to reality.

I really don't know what's going on behind. I think it's OK in the front. But I'm not interested in seeing it after traveling through the back. It's anticlimactic but ends in a tailspin.

The beginning of "Revival of Spiritual Energy" looks very good and very attractive. Suddenly a dream made me lose my desire to read on! I don't know how much I can dissuade.

The second volume is completely off topic. I initially thought it would be covered in a few chapters. I didn't expect this to be the way to write a volume.

The setting is good. The first volume is good, but the second volume starts to be confusing. Do you have to practice until you die or become the strongest human race? . . . We want to look at the life of master and apprentice rather than survival in another world...

With a turning point, the taste has changed.

It feels like the spiritual energy has revived and become an infinite flow. After reading more than thirty chapters, the protagonist sealed his memory and went to other worlds to experience. Looking at the table of contents, half of the more than seventy chapters are about the protagonist's adventures in other worlds.

，， Then, author, work hard for your world!

No more nonsense, come on, author 🤭

Damn it, hurry up and go back to modern times. If you don't go back, I won't collect it anymore.

I hope the author of Eunuch will start a new book again

After reading ten chapters, I summarized a few poisonous points First: The male protagonist cannot receive the rewards for completing system tasks Second: There is another setting that is not very good: the body absorbs spiritual energy and then accumulates spiritual energy in the body and slowly dies. If you put it this way, how did other people survive without the skills? Third: The female ghost planted grapes that the male protagonist ate, and the female ghost rose several levels after eating them, but the male protagonist refused to eat them (before the female ghost ate the grapes, she was seven or eight levels in the Yellow Realm, and after eating it, she was nine levels, and the male protagonist was level one in the Xuan Realm, but the male protagonist just left it without eating it, and then when he went to kill the female ghost, an alien creature absorbed the female ghost, and the male protagonist killed that The alien creature gets a tentacle, and the tentacle contains the spiritual energy left by the female ghost. Then the male protagonist absorbs the spiritual energy in the tentacle. If he doesn't eat the grapes he has, he must eat the leftovers from others) (realm: Xuanhuang of heaven and earth, other people's realm is sss. Ss. S. A. B. C. D. E)

Not good at all. The apprentice is a woman? Want to have a harem? It's boring.

I just returned to modern times and went back to time, so I digressed review

Wow, hold on, I got a bad grade in a book I read called Eunuch

😅 What the hell is that big dream at the back? And the female anchor feels very awkward watching it. What about you? I'll watch it when the big dream is over. Come on, you guys.

I just started this novel, and the first few dozen chapters were okay. The key is to have a dream and go to the ancient continent. Hundreds of thousands of words have passed by, and only a few chapters have passed since returning. This is very boring. If this is the case, what is the meaning of spiritual energy recovery?

I can't read this novel, I have already collected it, and now I have decided to take it out.

A good book, ruined by the author

This is more than 1 million, and 700 to 800 million are written about the alien continent. Is there any mistake? Where is the plot of Earth? This is the main plot. Okay, protagonist, do you plan to write 10 million words this time? If so, then I'd bother.