The Devil Wants to Start by Hanging Up

Review time: 2019.7.17 Number of chapters read: 5 Comment: Emmm... I suddenly noticed a cover when I was writing... The title of the book is okay, and the introduction is particularly good. The style is probably to take the simple and funny route. It's pretty good. It's not easy to be criticized, but it's easy to be ridiculed hahaha. Speaking of which, although it is a fantasy novel with a rebirth system, the male protagonist died in a car accident in his previous life, and his origin in this life is still an orphan in an orphanage, but it is quite refreshing to watch. The writing style is OK, there are no typos or anything, so I didn't feel anything. Anyway, I read it smoothly, and it was extremely comfortable to adjust my mood. Woc, I really tried the other ones... And almost died from the poison. What can I say about this book in general... The plot in the first few chapters is very tight, but it is said that the academic chapter will slow down to normal speed later on. Speaking of routines, it's probably quite routine, but I think the setting is pretty good. The setting of the Big Dipper is not new, but I just like these stars very much. Then hang up this... The more funny and novel one is here. After I finished writing, I read some more. The names Tan Shi and Mu Yuan? ? ? Which one is which? One original protagonist and one male protagonist? Then why does Tan Shi appear all of a sudden? Anti-Virus: System System literature is also very bad nowadays. Some book friends are tired of reading it and no longer like reading it. Of course, there are also book friends who just like this. It is hereby marked. PS: Already collected, this chapter talks about benefits in the investment book review.

In the first chapter, two names of the protagonist appear ~ It's embarrassing, isn't it ~ I was persuaded to quit

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Come on newcomers(ง •̀_•́)ง Although the writing is a bit immature, the plot is average, and the protagonist's personality is weird and some things are not very reasonable But I believe that the author will improve I would like to make a slight comment, the plot of just filling in the protagonist's golden finger when something goes wrong doesn't look very comfortable, it's the kind of writing where the protagonist is suddenly given some skills or treasures to deal with the current situation... Although this affects The sound is not loud, it feels like being suddenly stuffed with a piece of fat pork when eating steak... Then the author Jun can try to read his own novel in one sitting, browse it like reading other people's novels, and feel what is more abrupt or inconsistent... But there is no general direction problem at the moment Then there is the problem that the plot is too fast as mentioned by the author Jun himself... Finally, I hope the author Jun will cheer up (ง •̀_•́)ง

The author should update it quickly, the number of words is really not enough...

Personally, I think it would be perfect if there shouldn't be too many female characters, the protagonist should be more decisive, and there wouldn't be any over-the-top supporting characters.

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Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~

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Wow, this book is really good!

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