Cosplay in the Game Park

Personally speaking, it was okay before chapter 15. It was a little bit poisonous in three or four places but not enough to kill me. But after chapter 15, the few chapters about kicking the gym were really (I only saw these chapters), poisonous. The protagonist has become a standard Long Aotian type protagonist mentality. He is only allowed to kill people and set fires, destroy your job, and destroy your family (the "you" here are those who work in the gym). But you... Forget it, let's not talk about it, it's boring. I've only read a dozen chapters and I'm not so emotional to write a long review. Can the author read those chapters from the perspective of a passerby and see if he can understand them?

Come on (ง •̀_•́)ง, author of the Great Ear Fire Emperor, let's start over

The Pokemon chapter made me sick with embarrassment. Let's end it quickly and enter the next world!

The protagonist can see through everyone's true nature. He knows that this person is ungrateful and knows that he will stab him in the back, but he just doesn't kill him because the protagonist is a civilized man and a top ten young man. He knows that murder is against the law. Remember, murder is against the law, so don't kill him!

The more I look at the protagonist's costume, the more I want to vomit. How many worlds have I experienced and how many costumes have I worn? The first novice karate world, Bruce Lee's Kung Fu, and also pretending to be cool in the real world, have you got it all? Even his physical fitness has only increased by 70%. The second Ninja Turtle, has Uncle Nine learned all his skills? The paintings and suona I learned are gone. Have you learned all the abilities of Pokémon Ash in the third world? Still not. In the 4th World Ghost Academy Hatchet version, I imitated Xiaozhi for a while and became mentally ill. In the later stage, did I learn all the skills to imitate Yin Shisan? Still not. The next Transformers in the 5th world will imitate Qiao Feng, the Qiao gang leader. Does he know all the Kung Fu skills? Or not? I won't talk about Naruto later. In other people's novel Nine Points and a Line, each world is finished and I can't write anymore. Then I change the world to a new one. The author is pretending to be Nine Points and a Line. Before I finish writing, I will change to a new one as soon as I think of it. If you say that hitting this thing with a hammer is funny, it is not. You said that his strength has increased, is it really that he has learned it? Neither. What is the most vivid metaphor? Find out the groceries when you need them, and throw them in when you don't need them.

Come on (ง •̀_•́)ง

I just read Chapter 51, which is well written, but the special effects system feels a bit messy. Chapter 13 shows: Basic boxing LV1 (passive), each level increases melee attack power by 3%, and slightly increases the proficiency of boxing skills. (Note: For basic skills, LV10-19 is upgraded to proficient quality, LV20-29 is upgraded to specialization quality, LV30-39 is upgraded to master quality, LV40-49 is upgraded to grandmaster quality, LV50-? Insufficient authority and unknown, each time the quality of basic skills is upgraded, the growth will be greatly improved And obtain a characteristic. ) Chapter 20 shows: Basic horizontal training: LV3, increase 150 points of extra defense, increase physical strength by 30%, increase the power of external skills by 9%, basic boxing: LV7, increase melee attack power, boxing skill proficiency. Here it is shown that the main character's basic skills have reached LV7 but there are no special effects Chapter 34 shows: Sorceress, Strength: 5, Agility: 8, Constitution: 7, Intelligence: 18, Charm: 9, Skill 1: I Basic Meditation LV4, 50 points of magic added per level, one point restored every I minute, and magic power increased by 3% per level. . LV4 special effects are full of magic power +300 magic points Here it shows that basic meditation LV4 has special effects Chapter 51 shows: Arcane Ring (+7) Quality: Blue Rare Accessories: Intelligence +5 (+1), HP +200 (+48) Equipment Effect 1: Arcane Barrier, you will get a magic 1 defense shield that can withstand 500 (+100) magic attacks on one side, after it is broken It will be automatically charged and restored within 12 hours; Equipment effect two: refreshed, you will be able to concentrate more easily, magic energy recovery speed 1+100% (+24%); Equipment effect three: Active skill 1 Arcane Missile, which consumes one hundred points of magic energy, and stimulates five automatically tracking arcane missiles outward, causing magic damage of intelligence * 10 (+2.4) (Cooling time is one day) . . LV7 special effect energy gathering: can actively activate the ring to obtain an additional 1000% magic energy recovery speed, which lasts It is shown that the special effect is only available when the equipment is at LV7 In short, the special effects system is a bit messy and a bit confusing.

When I saw Chapter 17, I felt a little embarrassed for no reason. You wrote about the protagonist at the beginning, an ordinary person, but when you told me that the game was over, he went to play in the gym in the blink of an eye. Is this called an ordinary person? Forget about Cosplay. But you obviously forgot that this is a legal society. When you didn't get up, as an ordinary person, why were you so arrogant? This is the first poisonous point I saw…

It's getting better. Come on.

It's natural to be thrown into the street... No comment! There is nothing wrong with being a human being except your brain! Who doesn't know how to assess the situation? The author writes about those little gangsters as if they were ***...