Qianlong of the Tang Dynasty

😥What about the new book? ? ?

Return to the Ming Dynasty and become a tyrant Visit

Fortunately, I didn't invest, otherwise I would have given up the fee.

A monthly pass, come on the author😡😡😡

I hope that when writing historical fiction, the author will pay attention to details and not make things appear inexplicably. Many descriptions in urban writing are not appropriate in historical texts! Don't use too many modern words! The author can also describe the protagonist's psychological activities and portray the protagonist's image, and the supporting characters can also be described more. To be honest, I haven't painted the image of the protagonist in my mind until now. I just think that the protagonist is very awesome. If he is good at everything, the supporting characters will be called 666. It feels a bit petty! Finally: Come on, author! ! !

When I saw the killing of Yang Kun, I gave up the book. A brigade commander dared to disobey military orders when the war was about to begin. How idiotic was this? Besides, a captain's unit with hundreds of people can find dozens of people who have attacked their comrades, and these hundreds of people have only been away from the battlefield for two months, so the friendship between soldiers is so worthless? In the era of cold weapons, this group of people all rely on each other for survival. They are not just new troops drawn together. It is better to conquer them with battlefield performance!

It looks awkward, using modern words mixed with ancient prose. Did the author write about cities before? Moreover, looking at the dialogue content and punctuation marks, it seems too empty

Is the author's punctuation a bit too casual? ? ?

The author did not do a particularly good job in this task, but it can still be seen

I was discouraged from calling him, it was a mess.

The protagonist is patched up along the way to assist the dim and incompetent Tang Xuanzong. He has poor reading sense, too many yy thoughts, and is chronically poisonous

I'd like to ask if there are any guns or cannons. If so, I'll run away.

Dear author, have you seen the Twelve Hours of Chang'an? You can take a look and get some inspiration.

I can't find your group, author?

The author is Da (da double tone) Rus, not Constant Rus. It seems that you have finished writing the entire war and still don't know the name of the place.

Can you be a eunuch? Author, how many words do you expect the protagonist to become emperor? 🙂

Can the punctuation be improved? It looks awkward.

The author's writing style is too young, and in some parts it seems like he was reading a composition written in a freshman novel and abandoned it.

Oops, I just watched the first one. I read two pages. A look at the Battle of Perpetual Ross. Already finished. I thought in my heart that I didn't want to read it anymore, so I patiently turned through a few more pages. Only then did the discovery begin.

Sometimes it is in the first person, sometimes in the third person. There are also many problems with punctuation. Many dialogues are without quotation marks. I don't know if they are dialogues, psychological descriptions, or statements. I suggest the author revise it.

The update is very slow. Five recommendation votes were cast. I hope the update can be speeded up.