The Strongest Scout

Master>o<I am here to review the book~ I don't read many novels of this kind, so I can only start based on the basic principles of the novel! First, the segmentation is reasonable and just right. Secondly, the writing style is okay, but it still needs to be improved. The language is simple and unpretentious, and it fits the direction of the plot. It's good! Third, the plot development is great, written with reality and making people think deeply. Although this kind of novel is not popular, it is still very well written! Fourth, the description of details needs to be strengthened! When you portray a character, it's not just language and movement, but also demeanor, subtle changes in expression, etc. Fifth, when I read your novel, I thought it was from the period of reform and opening up, but I saw that you said it was from recent years, which feels a bit strange! After all, in this era, it is impossible for junior colleges to guarantee allocation😱 Sixth, remember to come on (ง •̀_•́)งpersistence!

I'm here to beg for scolding and criticism! If you have any dissatisfaction, please feel free to scold me!

Update quickly, not enough to read 😰

Author changes to editor operation 🙂