Survival Chat Game

Let me tell you some thoughts. After reading the first volume, the first thing is the problem of text expression. Too many words "" are used, and the writing is too casual, which affects the coherence of reading. This is the key point. Then, the biggest poisonous point in the creation of the protagonist is that the gender identity is cut too quickly. The masculine part is not seen at all, and it is cut directly to the mentality of a loli. There is always a feeling that the author wants to portray her as a wise man, but he is forced to set the middle and middle positions. It is too abrupt and lacks foreshadowing. It should be a lack of writing experience in this area. It is recommended to revise it multiple times.

Is there anyone else? I'm here to visit the grave.

After savoring this book carefully, to be honest in the early stage, it was relatively dull. To put it bluntly, Wen likes to look at the mountains rather than the plains, so there are fewer ups and downs, but the foreshadowing is very worthwhile. The following articles are really more and more exciting, and they completely fascinated me! As long as you watch patiently, you will definitely have a feast afterward. Reading articles is sometimes like life, everything is worth it, no matter crying or joy...

After the first chapter was okay, the second chapter was very inexplicable. I turned to Chapter 8, and I was still in the first similar copy without knowing why. The viewers have absolutely no idea what the protagonist is doing. They put a strange frame on the soul and never come back. They have no interest in reading further. Maybe the author will try to introduce a few chapters after the first chapter and more people will like it, but I will not come back after being persuaded to quit.

Introduction. . . Can the first three volumes be skipped? What's left after skipping it? Hey you bastard! ! !

Cry~ How could I be so bad, and yet I stand up for myself and act like a leading bird?

I think it's pretty good, but there are a few places I don't understand.

I just want to say that they are exactly the same as the **** group in the SF next door. Many things have not been changed. The next door has become a caricature 🥱

It's too much of a stream of consciousness. It's good to have unrestrained imagination, but it reduces the reading experience.

Let's feel nostalgic and visit the grave

"Everything in the world is informed by knowledge." Observe more and settle down. Don't rush to update, you will get better results!

Are you still writing?_(:з∠)_

I have read about half of the book and I feel that the overall plot of this book is very good, but I really want to complain. Everyone in it is a chatterer. Just fight. They insist on loading coins. If you don't introduce your abilities, you will feel uncomfortable all over. They say that the opponent has fallen into a trap. The opponent is in a certain death situation. You have to waste it. The opponent who can take advantage of the opportunity to kill in seconds has to come out and talk a lot of bullshit, and then the opponent will be alive again with one operation. , The so-called perfect preparation is bullshit. You can write two or three chapters for any battle. It takes a long time to write about the battle. Both sides can always survive the very powerful attacks. No matter who they are, they are always inexplicably strong and difficult to kill. It is really uncomfortable to watch. A considerable part of the battles in the book are of no use to the plot except for the word count. It does not affect the viewing at all if you skip the battle 😅

What a fool, you actually locked the sticker

The author's avatar is exactly the same as the one I used before.

I found that the author's book has a similar setting to the comics I read before.

This book is so good. I have never seen such a passionate plot. In order to finish reading this book, I stayed up for two hours, and I still couldn't finish reading it! The pig's heart stays.

It seems like this QQ group is absolutely poisonous.