Drunk Hero

Each paragraph is too long and looks uncomfortable

After reading the preface and the first chapter, I read the preface in a daze because it was too long. I read quickly, so I read it back and forth several times. The first point is that the author does not seem to be good at dividing paragraphs, which is understandable. The author should be a novice. Such details are normal. Sometimes a paragraph feels too long, so you can try to divide it into several paragraphs. Second, when I read it, I wanted to curse. This is just a complaint, because one chapter is a bit long. Here I show that one chapter has twenty or thirty pages. When I read the preface, I found that one chapter has more than ten pages, which is about the same number of words as the main text of a chapter in other novels. I have to lament that the author is really an honest person 😅 The main text is quite large for one chapter, but there are too many words for one paragraph. Generally speaking, I think it's okay. There aren't many classical martial arts, and it's half-colloquial and half-literary, so it's easy to understand. The above is just my personal opinion as a poor reader. Don't criticize, I'm not very good at evaluating. Two recommendation tickets are attached, farewell!

Also, I have followed another writer who is very good at writing traditional martial arts: Tian Yuhan. His "Blood Prison Jianghu" and "The First Master of Jianghu" are both very good.

My literary skills are very high. Here, I want to recite a poem. I have accepted it. Come here 😁😁

Come and support us. We are fellow martial arts writers and support each other!

Recommended by a girl, collect it and worship it 😁😁

I have been looking for a martial arts book for a long time. The writing is very good and the ideas are very clear. It is a great book. I recommend it. But I have a small suggestion for the author. There is not much space for traditional martial arts in Qidian. You can appropriately highlight the protagonist while paying tribute to Mr. Jin. Readers of Qidian are still very cold to mild YY. It's just my humble opinion, but the author is really laughing at it.

Come on, I like the book, it has been collected

I love it. It really feels like traditional martial arts. The writing is very good. I have invested in it. Come on!

Please support us by placing your first order, come on!

Sign in, vote for recommendation, and express your feelings!

Mountain man, I finally saved up a monthly ticket and wanted to vote for you, but why did you write Lin Qiuchen... Let me slow down! ! 😰

Monthly votes and recommendation votes have been cast! (Can the author feel at ease?)😜

Awesome, I wrote so many words

Love and justice! ! Chapter 50: What I want in my life: the joy of family relationships, Chapter 160: Moving with my nature, even though my heart is thousands of years old, it's so well written! 👍

Congratulations to the author for completing the book! Please let me know if there is a new book available. I will definitely read it when the time comes. 🙏

Already collected, keep updating, keep going! Mutual receipt.

What? Isn't there an inside story behind the Tumu Fort Incident?