Late Night Medical Clinic

First of all, this book is well written. But the inexplicable paragraphing and punctuation in the first chapter made me unhappy. Also, at the end of the first chapter, it is said that the protagonist is a college student, and then in the second chapter, it is transferred to a private high school, and then the description is sometimes the best university, and sometimes he is a freshman in high school... The setting should have been changed in the middle, but at least check it carefully, right? The advantage is that the plot is very smooth and not embarrassing, and everything that needs to be said is explained clearly in the first chapter, and the setting is quite interesting. In fact, the book is good. I just wanted to complain about the confusion of college and high school and the punctuation issues in the first chapter. I hope the author will take the time to change it. After all, the opening chapter is the facade, and the first impression is very important.

The author is probably a student, so you must persist in writing novels during the summer. After writing a few hundred chapters, you will find that someone finally reads your novel. No one will read the novel at the beginning. If you can't persist, give up as soon as possible. Don't write dozens or hundreds of chapters in The Eunuch. This will not only waste your own time but also waste the few readers who will read this book. If you insist on writing, I am here to wish you a popular book and all your wishes come true.

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The writing is good, but the strength of the protagonist is a bit inconsistent. The foreshadowing at the beginning makes people feel that the protagonist is very powerful and can go to the world and the underworld, but he actually looks at a few fierce ghosts or female ghosts in red 😅😅😅