Martial Arts Immortal Boy

The writing below is indeed a bit different, but after all, it is my first book. I still lack experience, but I will definitely improve during the writing process. Thank you all for taking the time to read my book! Thanks!

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I really don't understand. Maybe the pig's feet traveled through time into the game invented by Ye Qingcheng, but Ye Qingcheng reincarnated into reality. Is this a reincarnation?

The protagonist is talking to himself all the time. The character description is exaggerated and he says some words that are consciously funny but embarrassing to watch. Like the idol dramas a few years ago, the author still needs to practice his writing.

Come on, I'm looking forward to how reality and games will intersect.

The theme of the story is very innovative and attractive

Sorry, the timing is so messed up, and the scene jumps so much that I can't tell what you want to express. I can't watch it anymore.

Goodbye, I don't understand what you wrote

There are several personalities that I can't understand at all

The content is very attractive to me, and the plot development is also very good. I will save it and pay attention first.

First, the piano sounds are elegant, but at the beginning, there are some curse words like "I**, Tmd", which gives people the feeling of a gangster wearing a child's skin and being aloof, which is very disappointing.

It's good, come on, it's all self-explanatory.

Look at the clouds and mountains surrounded by fog! What and what...

It's really incomprehensible. There are too many inner dramas for the protagonist. Very messy. It feels like the protagonist has never matured, as if his mind has been suppressed. After reading more than a dozen chapters, I just couldn't stand it anymore. To put it bluntly, I can't understand it.

It's a great book and great literary talent. I took it away from my collection and I'm asking for a return visit to comment.

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As soon as I saw the time travel, I walked away silently

The writing is okay, but a bit messy

You have thought about the outline, and it feels like you are writing whatever comes to mind now.

Come on! 👍

This is the most exciting martial arts novel I have ever read. The world's heroes come out of our generation, and the years rush them as soon as they enter the world. Sure enough, where there are people, there are rivers and lakes. The newcomers encourage each other to support "Poetry of Blue", the plot is full of ups and downs, exciting, collect each other, and pay attention to each other