Unreasonable Truth

The author's writing is very fluent, but sometimes typos affect the reading experience; the images of the two main supporting characters stand firm: the male protagonist's growth is obvious, although sometimes his image feels vague; and the plot is really brave to write

The book was released... Crying with joy! ! !

I like the male protagonist very much. To be honest, it is so rare these days to have a male protagonist who is a normal person and is excellent, talented, and supported by seniors. Moreover, it is not a system or time-travel novel. When I read a novel, I usually pick a male protagonist. I don't like the male protagonist, no matter how good the writing is. But I personally prefer a character with a positive outlook, a normal personality, not cold and funny, so it's very difficult to find a starting point for a story that I like. I finally found this one~ I also like the way the author writes about cases. There is very little about daily life in this article, but it's very warm when everyone is solving the case and bickering~

It seems that we were in the first grade of elementary school during evening self-study. One night the school had a power outage, and the teacher asked us to go back. I remember that we had just walked out of the teaching building, and then suddenly there was a call. Everyone was like zombies when they saw a living person, and ran outside like crazy. Looking back now, I still feel so happy.

Not reviewing the book or the author. I just wanted to comment on the comments in the chapter review. The male protagonist and the male counterpart smoke, and the reader has nothing to do with it. In one case, the girl smokes and drinks and talks a lot of nonsense, such as "she smokes, drinks, and dyes her hair, but she is a good girl" and "how can she smoke if she is well-behaved and sensible? She has a problem, maybe she did it." What's going on? I really find it strange. What does smoking, drinking, dyeing your hair, perming your hair, piercing your ears, and tattoos have to do with being a good person? It is very common in this era for men to smoke, drink and even perm their hair, dye their hair and have their ears pierced. Why are there no good men anymore? When it comes to girls, they are like "smokers, drinkers, but good girls". What are you being ironic about? I'm really speechless, you can't have double standards to this extent. I don't mean to start a fight or provoke gender confrontation, but there are really too many comments. Don't say I'm punching. I'm too lazy to punch you. In this age, I hope everyone can look at these things beyond gender.

After reading more than a hundred chapters, I feel that the writing of this book is quite good. The author's writing style is average, and his storytelling skills are only average. It was a bit poor at the beginning, but it got much better starting from the second case. However, the plot of the case itself is indeed very interesting. It not only describes the case itself but also digs into the people behind the case. However, I feel that this book is still a bit lacking. First of all, it is the creation of the protagonist. He is a newcomer, talented but inexperienced. It is nothing in itself, but the position of the protagonist in this book is not clear enough. Although the case itself and the process of solving the case cannot always be related to the protagonist in various ways, it should be described more from the perspective of the protagonist. Then there is also a problem with the creation of supporting characters. The characters are not distinct enough. It is strange that the author can often feel that the characters are very distinct in just a few sentences, but the images of the main supporting characters are not distinct enough. In addition, the protagonist is a rookie and often the final solution to the crime depends on the seniors and captains. The result is a bit overwhelming and unclear. Besides, I have a vague impression of Jin Maosong, but I can't tell Su and Xun apart. I feel like the two characters overlap. Then the entire book is often conducted in the form of dialogue between characters, and the narration of the case is advanced bit by bit through dialogue between characters. There is nothing wrong with this in itself, but don't write it all like this. You can consider using God's vision to describe the circumstances of the victim's murder before the case begins, or how the person who discovered the body discovered the body. For example, Conan often tells the general story of how an unknown black man committed a crime, and then the protagonist reconstructs the story, finds the unknown black man, and then finds enough evidence to convict him. There is another point that the author can consider, that is, there is basically no connection between the cases. This is nothing originally, but if you want to make the book more exciting, you can consider it. It does not necessarily have to be the same criminal who commits several cases, or the old routine of a powerful criminal organization. You can start by considering the relationship between characters. For example, a certain character appeared in the previous cases, but he was a less important role. The previous cases did have nothing to do with him, but he happened to be found, and he himself became the victim or murderer of a subsequent case.

The storyline is good, but it's too draggy. Forty chapters on one case? ? ? There are reasons for poor grades.

Bro, do you have any recommendations for criminal investigation and mystery novels? I just finished reading "Crime and Murder", and this one is too little.

This book is really good. After reading the first case, the dialogue is natural, the plot is exquisite, and the characters are not inconsistent. Awesome

To be honest, I think this book actually has potential for film and television. Do you think it will be similar to Serious Case Group 6?

It's not easy to have a serious crime-solving novel at the starting point. Support it! You still have to pay attention to the author's choice of words and sentences, as there are some typos and awkward sentences.

A very good book, with a tight pace, really no water, and sincere reasoning. Such good books are rare, but they are buried! ! ! This forced me to give a reward for the first time. I really can't bear to see that the monthly ticket is 0. Highly recommended! ! !

What can I say, the plot is okay, but the author's writing skills are really hard to describe in one sentence: pursed lips, opened mouths, smiled bitterly, rolled eyes, dazed... Appear in large numbers, as if the author would not know how to describe without these words. Really unable to complain

I have saved seven or eight photos of this recent case, and the more I look at it, the more depressed and angry I am!

😁😁😁😁 After reading it carefully for the second time, you haven't kept up with the updates... It's unreasonable if you don't add some details to me.

It contains the same amount, but nothing else. It looks pretty good.

It feels so deserted, and it is a rare crime novel. More practical and exciting.

I read it again and I still like Xiao Qi very much 🙂

I read two hundred chapters in one go. . Although I understand that the heroine of this kind of book can easily become a flower vase. But I still want Xiao Qi to find a companion. . 🙂🙂

I really like the logic of this book, and the plot settings are all unexpected and reasonable. The modus operandi is also in line with reality. There are no showy skills or techniques that are difficult or even impossible to achieve. Although there are some minor flaws in the character setting, they seem insignificant in the overall plot. In short, it is a very attractive mystery work, keep it interesting (ง •̀_•́)ง

After reading this novel for so long, let's build a building.

Wow, I haven't seen such a good novel in a long time. I didn't realize it until it was finished. I must support it! The protagonist does not set up cool points just for the sake of fun. It is different from what I have seen recently, but his down-to-earth efforts to grow up can also touch people's hearts. This is the first time I write such a long review. The author must continue to work hard (ง •̀_•́)ง.

It turns out that I have written another book, and it's so embarrassing that that one is gone!

Much better than some domestic physical mystery novels

All booked! ! Looking forward to the author's new book! !

Come and eat the Q version (?) It's an appointment x

On a hot summer day, after a busy day, wouldn't it be nice to sit quietly in the courtyard with a cup of tea and a book, watching the moon and reading?

I don't know if there is any novel like this one, with a tight plot and not the kind of love-making under false pretenses.

A new book has been opened, the link is here

After watching the first case, it was a bit strange. It seemed that among the many people in the entire team who were on the field, the only people who could solve the case were Song Ge and Su Ping plus the male protagonist. They discovered the clues and promoted the case. Are the other colleagues who are out in the field useless? Seeing that these are the same people in the character list, I guess this is how they will be written later. But I feel that solving crimes is a team effort. In addition to the help of the technical team, other colleagues in the field should also be helpful. The characterization is a bit too simple.