Dominant Myth

These novels about the revival of spiritual energy and the mastermind behind the scenes are not very immersive and not very reasonable. There is no basic rule. Why is there no sense of involvement? Why is it unreasonable? Don't say that this kind of novel is inherently unscientific and unreasonable. It's just like there is a kind of fruit in a world that will greatly increase your cultivation level after you eat it. If you leave it all over the place and no one notices it, it's unreasonable. You can write it all over the place, but it is reasonable to refine it with a special secret method to have the effect of increasing your cultivation level! To say that this is not immersive, let me give an analogy and say that a person who can fly with a sword suddenly appears in our real world. Everyone's first reaction must be that this is a movie? Not counting the first, but then you may wonder if it is a cultivator. If Americans see someone who can fly, they will definitely think of a superman or a mutant. They will definitely not think of a supernatural being or a mysterious being. Although the names are just different, that way we readers can have a sense of involvement and there will be no barriers when reading. When we see unknown things, the first thing we think of must be those similar things in our memory. What are those things? It must be those in TV movies or novels, which are relatively famous and have a deep impression. When your novel is set in modern society, you should consider how people will react when something appears in the real world, so that you can feel immersive when writing it! Of course, what I write is definitely not as good as yours. I'm just a reader, I can't write! Complaints from a reader

First of all, this book is very good for an old bookworm like me. I hope the author can write better and become popular. Secondly, I have a suggestion for the author, and I hope the author will adopt it: You can choose a devout person on the earth, or a person who is about to die in a car accident, and send him to another world. Give him a task, let him be the agent, and use the advanced knowledge of the earth to let him farm and develop the tribe, mainly to make salt for the tribe, mine and smelt weapons, and protect armor. . The point is just to be a skilled worker. This way you will develop stronger and better.

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Okay, okay, although it's a bit awkward about the combat effectiveness of modern countries, but overall it's quite interesting to pretend to be a ghost in Japan.

Very nice, great, looking forward to updates

What will you write next, author? Is it written that Yu Su conquered all realms after becoming the Emperor of Heaven?

I've seen some stories in novels saying that dragons have a low status. Please, don't be ignorant, okay? Chinese culture is dragon culture. The Three Sovereigns and Five Emperors have a deep relationship with dragons. Aren't dragons powerful? Fuxi has the head of a human and the body of a dragon. Together with Nuwa, he is the earliest creation god in China and the ancestor of the dragon. It was he who created the image of the dragon and was revered as Taihao Fuxi. Lieshan was born to the mother of Lieshan who dreamed of a red dragon at night. Therefore, the Lieshan clan respected the virtue of fire, and inherited the rule of the Fuxi clan [Long Zu] as the king of fire virtue. The earliest image of Pangu was seen in "Guang Bo Wu Zhi" and "Jixian Heaven and Earth Commentary" as a dragon head and a snake body or a human face and a snake body. The high status of dragons in China is beyond your imagination. As for the low status of the dragon clan later shown in Journey to the West and so on, you have to understand that Dragon King is a borrowed term from India, and the dragon in India is a big snake, which is a Naga. You should have watched Indian TV, right? Just like that, and Garuda, the enemy of Naga, eats five hundred Nagas every day. When Buddhism was introduced to China, Nagas were translated into dragons. And don't keep talking about the Twelve Ancestral Witches, okay? This does not exist at all in Chinese mythology. The homonym of Hongjiang in ancient times is agreed, and it all refers to the big river. The so-called Dijiang, which you are all familiar with, is the ancestor Huangdi, including the Central Chaos Emperor. Gonggong, a descendant of the ancestor Shennong, was a figure in Zhuanxu's era. The first sentence of Gonggong's anger at Buzhou Mountain was that Gonggong and Zhuanxu were fighting for the throne. Can you tell me how he got ahead of Shennong? Zhurong, Huozheng official position, many people have held it, generally refers to the two descendants of Zhuanxu, Wu Hui and Chongli. Houtu, a descendant of Gonggong, "Jing of Mountains and Seas·Hai Nei Jing": "Gonggong gave birth to Houtu, Houtu gave birth to Choming, and Choming was born at the age of twelve. "Jing of Mountains and Seas·Dahuang Xi Jing": "Li (Houtu) went down to the ground to give birth to Choking, and it is at the west pole, in order to travel the journey of the sun, moon and stars. " "The Classic of Mountains and Seas·Great Wilderness Northern Classic": "In the Great Wilderness, there is a mountain named Chengdu Zaitian. There was a man named Er who had two yellow snakes. He called the two yellow snakes Kuafu. Later natives gave birth to faith, and faith gave birth to Kuafu. " "Book of Rites: Sacrifice": "The Gonggong family dominated the Nine Provinces, and their son, Houtu, was able to level the Nine Provinces, so he worshiped it as a community. As for the Yanzi, the oldest tribes in China are the Suiren clan and the Yanzi clan. Later, the leader of the Yanzi clan married the Suiren clan, giving rise to the oldest surname in China, the Feng surname. Yizi is also known as the Nine Heavens Yizi Our Lady. Tianwu, ancestor of Wuyue. The one who shot the sun was called Dayi, who was an archer in the Yao era, and Hou Yi was from the Xia Dynasty. Because they were both good at archery, their images overlapped, but Hou Yi was a rebellious minister. Hou Yi was responsible for the loss of Taikang in history, and his wife was a pure fox, not Chang'e. Moreover, during the time of Dayi, the Emperor of Heaven was Emperor Jun, also known as Emperor Ku. Emperor Ku was named Jun when he was born, so he was called Emperor Jun. He gave Dayi a red bow and plain arrows. What I said comes from the "Book of Mountains and Seas", "Zuo Zhuan", "Lu Shi", "Historical Records" and other books are relatively well-known. As for other expressions, I will not go into details. I have no intention to argue with you. Don't come here to show off your IQ and say that there are too many ancient histories. Come on, it's just a way of saying it. Many records in ancient books are contradictory. Moreover, in the Bamboo Chronicles, Yao and Shun did not abdicate, but Shun directly imprisoned Yao. Unless you live for four or five thousand years, does this have any effect? My original intention in writing this is just to hope that everyone can pay attention to it. After all, they are the ancestors of our humanity and the blood source of Chinese culture. It is really not good to wantonly insult them. We can have no faith, but we still have the most basic respect for our ancestors.

The work is very interesting, the beginning is a masterpiece, and although the rest of the story does not have the feeling of the beginning, it is still food. I hope it will be a big hit, and I will order it when it is put on the shelves.

Some settings are borrowed from "Becoming a God Begins from a Primitive Tribe", but it has made innovations in many aspects. (Since the author says otherwise, the author's description shall prevail) I won't talk about other worlds. There is nothing special about it. The writing method of appearing as a god on earth is quite interesting. Although there are still some logical problems and the character creation is quite hasty, the creativity is very good. The only problem is that it breaks down too easily when written this way. The world view is big, but not too detailed. The power level jumps too fast. According to this progress, the map will have to be changed to a power level after 100 chapters. Changing the map is definitely a taboo in novels. Even if you have to change it, there must be at least fifty chapters of foreshadowing to prevent the reader from getting into trouble. There are probably two ways to write bilaterally in the future: ①Contact a higher level of power in the earth and universe (typically risking death to change the map) ②Use the earth as a talent reserve, and then transfer the life to the two worlds to conquer other worlds (the advantage of this writing is that there is no need to change the earth) Picture, but the process is more typical of a farming article, nothing new) Either slow down the pace of strength progress and add branch lines, but if this is not well controlled, it will be a waste... At the moment, the highlight of this book is: gain strength in another world, and show off when you return to Earth. However, according to the author's speed, the cunts on earth will soon be finished. What to do after that mainly depends on the author's considerations. I hope the author can develop something unexpected. If this kind of writing method is not broken, it requires a lot of imagination.

I heard that the author has a soft ear and likes to listen to opinions. I won't give any opinions. I just hope that the author will pay more attention to common sense when writing. If you haven't experienced it, it doesn't matter. You can search it on Baidu. Especially when writing realistic plots, those people's operations are too smart. No one is a normal person, and all of them have low IQs.

If you find any typos in the text, you can directly comment in this chapter and the author will correct them.

Come on! I really like this kind of person who works alone behind the scenes. I hope I don't want to be a eunuch! Please update more and spread more!

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It's not good in the later stage, it doesn't feel exciting enough. I'll check out the book I Won the Sun God again. That book, The Real World, is good.

After reading a hundred chapters, the protagonist has no idea what to do. He doesn't go to the earth to harvest faith, he doesn't help the tribes in other worlds develop, and he has no idea what the author is writing. It's no wonder that this book is so popular.

Am I a god in another world? This sense of déjà vu

It felt good at the beginning, but after I saw a spider god brought to the earth, I couldn't stand it anymore. I didn't even know what to do with the pig's feet. It made no sense. If you want to believe in a god, you will waste the earth's 6 billion people.

After reading more than 40 chapters, I couldn't stand it anymore. At first I thought it was a farming novel. Then it was discovered that it was a two-line plot, and then nothing happened. I just want to complain, why is it that you, a god, relied on that tribe to live and work, but you became a hands-off shopkeeper? Later, when the earth plane gave people faith, why didn't you manage the earth well? You stole the Dragon King of the East China Sea to get the authority of the Rain God, but nothing happened. What about the power system? What about the system of gods? There is no logic at all, and they insist on copying some things to show their appearance. Gan If you don't write about pornography, gambling and drugs, won't you have nothing to do with it? What else is 404? You wrote it but looked forward and backward, so you can't delete it and re-edit it? The running account-style narrative method is really hard to read**

I haven't read it yet. I would like to ask the book friends who have read it whether this is a Chinese series that scorns the major gods. If so, I won't read it. I'm not licking the West. There are many modern novels that reveal the saints and receive faith. I thought it was great when I read it for the first time. But you can't just beat the Western God. The Almighty God has the most believers in the world. It's really embarrassing for you to have more than a dozen in the East.

This book is okay. It's hard to get good grades without a good plot. It's 100 chapters long. There's no point in going to Earth. Apart from pretending to be awesome, I haven't done anything interesting or sexy in the other world. I would say that this book doesn't have many bad points, but it's just boring. I'm afraid of being boring when I read a book. I feel like I can think of everything you wrote, or I won't be surprised.

It would be nice if this book was a new alien world (do not write about the earth mythology system, but write a new alien mythology system), but directly linking it to Chinese mythology does not feel the real atmosphere of the alien world, and the sense of inclusion is not very strong.

I feel like the setting should be pretty good-looking, but seeing that you can travel back and forth, it's boring!

I feel a little uncomfortable with the protagonist seizing the place where beauty brings misfortune and luck. He said that such a thing is not good and he should hold it in his hand. But what does this have to do with you? It has not been approved by others.

When I saw that I could go back and forth, I decided not to read this book!

It was so awkward to bring a god from another world to Earth and let others know the protagonist's trump card. I couldn't watch it anymore.

The protagonist should settle down when he becomes a god. He can see the outside world in that space, but cannot influence it. I feel that the protagonist should not use the living and speaking habits of the earth in another world, affect the development of its civilization, interfere with its civilization process, and encourage its growth. As long as it is ensured that it is passed on and helped to grow slowly (self-strengthening is the main thing, help is supplementary),

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~

Stop updating, oh haha(´-ω-`)

The writing of East and West is not interesting. Once the protagonist becomes a god, it seems that there is nothing to do but just write some insignificant supporting characters. Abandoned

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