I Play Games in the World of Xianxia

Even though she is fifteen years old and she still sounds milky, I also accepted it 😅

The man in white and red has killed you twice, but he still won't kill you? After more than ten years, do you still want to reform yourself when surrounded by these people who want to kill you? In fact, seeing the color, he decided to ask his father to cripple their cultivation, and then kill them all once they got tired of it. Since there are so many enemies, just destroy the world and reopen the world. In this way, both sides are really useless.

I just want to know how old the protagonist is mentally. Don't tell me that he only grows his body but not his mind.

I'm a little speechless after reading Chapter 11. They all want to kill you, but they haven't killed you in the end. I advise the author to either make major changes or re-release the eunuch, otherwise it will be impossible to become popular based on this plot. Of course, if you are here to practice, just pretend I didn't say anything.

I think the ones written by the author are quite interesting. But I think I might not be able to accept the relationship with the so-called red-shirted and white-dressed guy? I particularly like Cao Cao. It's because of his words, I would rather let the world down than let the world let me down.

What are you writing about? You can just survive the early stage. I think it takes a very invulnerable person to get through it. There is no main line in the early stage, the secrets are not revealed at all, it is in the clouds, the supporting characters are nc , and the protagonist system does not work at all. Just arrange for the protagonist to kill and kill and that's it. Death from poison. Goodbye👋🏻

Facts have proved that cultivating immortality cannot increase IQ! 😏😏

When I saw the mission to spy on the widow taking a bath, I didn't want to watch it anymore.

Dear author, the plot of your book is good, but I don't know if it's because you are too impatient or because you are too pressed for time. I have a suggestion. Don't use short sentences in each paragraph, which looks very sloppy. You can try more long sentences, with some descriptions of scenery and inner feelings. Sometimes scenery is love, and love is also scenery.

Change it to me being beaten by a game in another world

Familiar with the taste, familiar with the recipe, this is how novels were written decades ago

What can I say about this book? The creativity is still eye-catching, but the writing and plot make people feel exaggerated and embarrassingly exaggerated. But I believe that the author will definitely grow and his writing skills can be improved.

I can't say it's poisonous, I should say it's boring. Generally, the style of the novel is determined by reading the first few chapters, and the audience is also brought into it. However, the style suddenly changed later on, from nonsensical comedy to chivalrous love and hatred, and there was no time to bring it in, making it awkward when watching it. It was also written in the rain and fog, so I couldn't understand it at all. It felt like I was reading this book one second, and then it was another book the next second.

Seeing Fifteen decisively abandoning the pit is poisonous

Passing by by chance, I can only express my admiration. How much perseverance does the author have to use love to generate electricity under such problems?

Come on, author, tell me how old Hua was in 2028?

Come on, I envy the ones on the shelves every day...

Seeing how pitiful you are, I'll give you a few monthly votes.

The article feels very messy

I thought I had read one before. I had also read a novel with this theme before. Pigfoot only found out in the end that this game was built by himself

I am a salty fish, no wonder the click rate of this book is so low.

Shennong---I was unhappy with the image of the protagonist created by the author. He wanted to go out at level 60, and he had to rely on the forces behind the protagonist to come forward to clear out the monsters above level 60, and then use his own unparalleled weapon to defeat low-level monsters. Even though he could develop stably, he insisted on going out to commit suicide and cause trouble for his family. I like the cautious and courageous type, but don't like to see this kind of explosive, spell-binding author. Farewell

As soon as you write well, you start to drift. Isn't it good to make steady progress?

What an embarrassing group. You are still pretending that you are affectionate and righteous. Melon rind. Don't write books for children.