Environmental Fisherman

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There are too many inner dramas, I complain about the system, and I can't understand it.

Generally speaking, the protagonist is almost 30 years old, but he is still so childish, and the whole story is full of nonsense. It feels like the author is just enjoying himself, and the desired effect has not yet come out, and the plot is grinding.

Are you sure it's almost 30? Why are you bluffing so many inner dramas, and even telling systematic things? I'm so drunk. I'm trying to persuade you to quit, okay?

New author? The core of what is explained in the first few chapters has not been refined well, it is just a hammer here and a stick here and there.

There are more monthly votes than comments, so there must be something wrong with this book

I just read a few chapters, but they are not suitable for me... Too much nonsense

If it weren't for God's perspective, I would have thought that the blue crab was the protagonist. There are more dialogues than the protagonist. The three golden chapters revolve around the blue crab. Half of the first chapter is nonsense, and there is also a live broadcast that came out of nowhere. I won't watch it anymore. It's not the Pacific but also the Atlantic.

What the hell are you writing? There are long paragraphs, and the main character, Rory, is so verbose. He is as grown up as a child, and the author can't control the rhythm. He keeps writing irrelevant things. It's too watery.

I have been reading for 10 years and I still don't understand this book. What is it about?

A little unrefined, too self-pleasant

I'm convinced, this system is the protagonist, right? There will be punishments for failure, what's the difference between it and those systems that want to kill the protagonist...

When reading this type of novel, I first read the catalog. There are live broadcasts, station B, etc. Sorry to bother you.

In the later stage, he actually didn't care about more than 2 million. I don't know if he was stupid or just pretending. This is boring and unrealistic! Gone!

What is this mess?

I clicked on this book many times and read a few pictures but couldn't get into it. Today I suddenly found it on the bestseller list. I read it again and I still can't stand it. There is no main line and no sense of involvement at all. The little fisherman who writes about daily fishing is more purposeful than you. You are just going here and there. You have no idea what you are writing. This type of popular "Little Fisherman on the Sea" and "Deep Sea Fishing Ground" all have a main line than what you wrote. Tell me something about you. It may sound unpleasant. If you really want to write this kind of novel well, change the outline. Change the golden finger system to another one or the system should not be so dramatic. When the space is closed, you can't see its role at all. Normal farming novels of this kind are either about living a leisurely life while catching up with the sea, or becoming bigger and stronger, fishing in the ocean, and seeking development... The above are personal suggestions.

This is the shortest male protagonist I have ever seen. He is not even 170.

I provide a book title: Everything starts with the live broadcast of the sea. Chapter 1: Have breakfast first. Chapter 2: The live broadcast of the sea. I use a funny style.

I'm so self-indulgent that I haven't finished one chapter. I feel like the main character is a loser. This style makes me look like a novice author.

In the second chapter, this article says that he must not be able to eat. I doubt that the author will starve to death. Aren't the videos of catching the sea everywhere? To write this kind of novel, the author thinks whether text or video is better for making fun of or narrating something, just think about it and you will know! How many people abandon the book directly after seeing the live broadcast? Anyway, I don't care how much it appeals to me, I just abandon the book immediately after the live broadcast!

What on earth is this book about? ? ?

There is still some creativity, but the author's writing style still has a lot of room for improvement. Come on ＾0＾~

I was stunned for a moment while reading this magical book. I had no idea what it was writing. The whole thing was like an ocean.

Really, brother, keep it up

After reading two chapters, I couldn't do it anymore and gave up.

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I've been reading this book for so long, and I've made so much money selling pig's feet, but I haven't seen pig's feet paying taxes. Or is there any special policy?

Dissuaded by the cover! Should the author change the cover?

A dime of water, one chapter is 90% water

Anyone who can read this book is a god! ! ! I can't stand it anymore