DC Knights

First of all, the general environment of the DC world is difficult to write. Just based on movies and TV series, there will be errors in the strength of heroes and villains. In addition, if you don't know much about the relationship between the characters, let alone the complexity of the multiverse, the timeline is very important. It will be very troublesome if some major events are advanced, such as the Blackest Night, the invasion of Dark Batman led by Barbatos, etc. Giving the power of the knight to the hero is an interesting point, but I think it is very difficult for you, the author, to write this now. The local hero forces and villain forces are complicated enough, and now the involvement of Knight World villains and Consortium X will make writing even more difficult. The plot in some chapters is outstanding, but the rest can only be described as mediocre. Take the Doomsday in this book as an example. If it is a real Doomsday, it will not be killed. Once it is attacked, it will immediately evolve the ability to adapt and will only become stronger and stronger. The one in the movie is just a fake, a low-quality Doomsday that can be killed. It is better to write the original name of the knight. Most of the Chinese translations in the new decade are not good. There are not many writers writing about knights, so keep at it.

The author went to read DC's Knights book and look at its settings. The protagonist you wrote is not good, the system is not good, and the belt is not good. There is nothing interesting about it.

Not enough writing, touching dialogue, Bai's potential

I'm curious about one thing, what's the use of binding other belts to a decade's transformer?

The Flash is infinitely faster than Kato

Author, your lack of chapter names is very discouraging...

Adding Kamen Rider abilities to those protagonists is unnecessary! It's like a junior high school student teaching a high school student! Kamen Rider is weaker than Zheng Lian!

I read it for 2 minutes, and my eyes were full of classmates. I said that the book written in this way is so distorted that I don't want to read it. The writing style is not enough, and I can't even make up my mind.

Does The Flash still need toys like Kato?

You brag about a system for 3 chapters. You are so awesome and so good at it.

Can you check for typos? There are so many typos that I didn't see.

The protagonist Adachi doesn't know much about Kamen Rider, so he will be very passive! Also, the Heisei and New Heisei generation knights are different, so the protagonist is going to be unlucky! More bad luck! There are many ways to deal with this kind of little white knight, I won't go into details...

The writing is too messy, one part is Green Arrow, the other part is Batman, you can't do it one by one. It makes my head hurt to watch.

In fact, people with superpowers like Flash Hal Jordan are a lot of rubbish, especially The Flash. In the later period, The Flash casually broke the speed of light.

I felt confused at the beginning! It feels messy, and then the Arrow subverse? You start without explaining anything clearly? Another system failure? Is the monster system used by others to cause trouble for the protagonist? What a world! You may not be able to defeat the local character Knight even if he reaches the top level, why do you want to create a new boss? Still want to fight monsters? Darkseid? Illuminati? I want to eat shit!

It is impossible to comment, and it is impossible to comment in this life. I don't subscribe and I don't read it. Alas, I just came in to say what I like, hahaha. At this time, the author led a group of people on the way to my house. Brothers, if I can say another word after 10 minutes, it will prove that I am still alive. If I haven't said anything yet, call the police immediately.

This author is so perseverant! You haven't given up yet?

I can't stand the name Xiao Tongtong, haha, I'm withdrawing it.

When writing about Kamen Rider, please respect the original setting. It can be modified appropriately and it is not easy to make major changes. Especially Kamen Rider Decade. I don't like to add the power of superheroes. If you add the power of superheroes, the Kamen Rider framework will be greatly changed, and the setting will be confusing and unfinished. Come on author👍👍👍

Knight is a dream and a hope, no matter what, I hope to persevere

Dragon-chan~ Is there a female protagonist in this book? (:[___]←Waiting for reply

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~

The author's writing is very beautiful, but no one reads it. I have a way to get more people to read your book, Weiyaayaa335