Longbapiwa Country Music

It looks good, but I feel that the treatment aspect is a bit too exaggerated. The treatment effect can be effective gradually. Besides, this is a farming novel. It should write more about warm daily life and less about pretentious and slap-in-the-face routines. Overall, it is quite good. Come on

Dissuaded by punctuation and fragmented sentences

This book looks too tiring, the paragraphs are too long, and it's easy to get dazzled.

Damn it, can't you tell the difference between words? Just like writing an essay, it's very tiring to read. Take some time to sort it out. Nine out of ten readers will not follow this if they see it. Reading is meant to relax you when you are bored. But your book reminds me of the composition I used to write when I was in school. Come on. 😁

I'm trying to persuade you to quit in stages. I really can't stand it anymore.

It looks so awkward. Can you use punctuation marks properly?

After reading the introduction, I was enlightened: After an accident, three years later Milk Baby was two and a half years old? There is a problem with time! Lao Wang's?

The plot is okay, but there are too many typos that make it uncomfortable to watch.

When will we be able to update two chapters a day? It seems too laborious to update one chapter a day.

Writing about helping others treat their illnesses is very discouraging, don't ask why!

It's very tiring to read⊙⊙Someone must have said it before, it's just a matter of changing the sentences and paragraphs. I think most of them are indifferent, it's very tiring⊙⊙

The paragraph is too long and I can't read it at all. If you can change it into a few more sentences, more people will read it.

Wow, this is such a long paragraph that I feel uncomfortable reading it.

The words are too dense. Please stop being so dense. Break them into paragraphs.

It's a bit difficult to read and the punctuation marks are so confusing.