The Leisurely Life of a Star

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​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​? ? ? Three golden chapters,,, the poison didn't even reach the second chapter. I persisted for a few more chapters and died directly. Two lifetimes to be a human being? IQ and EQ are not online, I love to show off too much, and I am not very smart, and the point of contact is very poisonous, the plot is blunt, and I am brainless and pretentious Whether it is the entertainment industry or other industries, you should have the minimum respect for your seniors, right? What about manners? A newcomer joins the circle, teases his seniors, shows no courtesy, especially goes to the female guest's room in the middle of the night to scare people? ? ? I c, mdzz, this is the second stroke, and the female guest actually forgives,, forgives. . . It is convenient to use a lighter when cooking, and you have to show off the wood to make a fire. If you write about going out for a picnic, the lighter cannot be used, and then your plot will naturally lead to it?        ，！ At least people can read it without thinking, and you can read it without thinking too! I can't complain, I can't stand it anymore, it's a poisonous weed, mp's heartbroken grass!

Not poisonous after Chapter 38? Where does the confidence come from? Let's just talk about Chapter 64. The Yang family's guns are great, and they are awesome at archery? How many people used guns in ancient times, and which one is not better than the Yang family's guns? I didn't see many people who were good at archery. I really don't know what the author's logic is.

The protagonist is mentally retarded, no, what the hell. It feels like the whole world belongs to you. I felt so uncomfortable after watching Zhang Yang's part, so I stopped watching it.

The subject matter is good, but there are too many poisonous and objectionable aspects, and the writing is a waste.

Hello dear readers, "People who eat watermelon and swallow it like to eat watermelon very much." (˶‾᷄ ⁻̫ ‾᷅˵)? ? ? I am the little brother who has been trampled by thousands of people and has a bruised nose and face... Zhuge's little brother. Book title: "The Longing for a Leisurely Life" Author: Minmetals Sage. Commentator: Actually, my name is "Sheep Liangliang". (This book (╯‵□′)╯┻━┻) First impression: What first attracted me to this book was the perfect cover. Looking at the dazzling background and the characters In the scene, I held an umbrella and the breeze blew my cloak. I entered the scene unknowingly. Combined with the 10 years of dullness in the introduction, it suddenly felt like a sitcom. Finally, the introduction. The description method is interesting. I feel that this book is perfect. In terms of writing style, if I am not wrong, this book will add some emotion, which will be a bit sensational. With the description method in the introduction, it should be relaxed and interesting. Li Xuan, who has been a bit actor in the film and television city for 10 years, traveled to the parallel world of the earth.：，！！，！   ：！！ ： ：++ ：   ，The one who transcended. My predecessor left the world due to my physical and mental fragility, and I came back through the struggle of parallel time and space. I came to this world and merged with the memory of my predecessor. But it didn't matter, I came. Dad gave me a chance to change my life. And because of the system, I grasped this opportunity that changed my life. Opportunity. (System function: Get fan points, draw skills.) From the time I was lucky enough to be selected to join the teacher's team and meet the characters in the show, it felt like my life was slowly getting on the high-speed train. It didn't matter anymore in this circle. The harder you work, the luckier you are. Besides, I am very lucky. Summary of advantages: 1. The writing style is light and interesting. Another daily series about film and entertainment. The protagonist gets some skills at the beginning because of the system. Later, because of his father's reasons and his own attitude, he started to participate in variety shows. And this variety show is the variety show "Longing for Life" that is a relaxed daily series that we see in the modern era. The simplicity shown in the show, the laughter of the protagonist, and the combination of the supporting characters can always make you smile in daily life. A communication. In the process of communication, the author used the symbol "...". Including this symbol in the communication between the two lives in the beginning is very thought-provoking. It reminds me of the death of the predecessor, and I sighed slightly... 3. Story details: The text is not watery and simple friendship. In terms of text, some songs from another time and space are added to the book to add to the meaning. The popularity of the protagonist. What I want to praise here is that after the lyrics of each song are written for the first time, the subsequent songs are basically copied. The simple friendship is because the protagonist has just entered the entertainment industry and no one can call him brother in the variety show! But I want to say that in the rich life, age. If you are older than the other person, you can call him brother, and the character here is called brother, which is too normal. 4: The sense of substitution brought by the character. To connect with it, the characters in the variety show are included in the story, and the performance of these characters is related to some of the images we see in the variety show. For example, the image of Lao Peng as a silly boy. The gangsters. It can be said that these images are very similar to reality, which increases the acceptance of the characters and the overall sense of immersion in the book. If there are any shortcomings, I first suggest you to "check the text"... There are many typos, misshapen words and many details. I strongly recommend that you read it and correct the details after finishing it. Secondly, although the emotion is included in the beginning, I feel that the writing power of this explosion is a bit weak. It is that the control of the plot is a bit low. But then again, it may be due to the style of writing that it is not easy to explode at certain points. Finally, the character of the protagonist feels a bit conflicted with his previous career. The reporter said that the career issues in the past life can be ignored. As for the direction of the story, I feel that it will be based on the current daily series until 500,000 words. In his spare time, the protagonist will rely on the connections brought by variety shows to develop his acting career and singing career. It is to develop in all aspects and become a leader in the entertainment industry. Overlord, like Mr. He. Recommended for readers: In terms of writing style, it is recommended to readers who like relaxed daily life and small interests. In terms of subject matter, the entertainment industry, film and television industry. Final summary: After reading it, I am very happy to finally see a different film and entertainment article. There is no previous intrigue, crazy slap in the face, and fan chasing. Then he became a superstar. All he did was develop steadily in daily life, and then slowly become a successful film and entertainment person. Here, the way the old enemy bought the protagonist was very good. Abandoning the past slap in the face, the boss took action directly, which gave the protagonist more experience on the road to growth. So this book is a book that I highly recommend in terms of writing style. The writing style is relaxed and everyday, and it does not abandon the original pretentious style, and the interesting style paired with the supporting characters. What is left is a moment of relaxation after reading it. Regarding the supporting characters, I can only sigh slightly, "It is a long time to be relieved, and then I can return to reality and race with myself."

The more I read this book, the more I feel that the main character has cerebral palsy, or I do, or everyone does. I am really stupid!

After reading the second chapter, I died of poison 😰

After reading Chapter 27, I really can't stand it any longer. It's a complete waste furnace routine. It's poisonous. Goodbye.

The front part of this book is not very good, but the back part is good and quite creative, but it is unfinished 🔪

I didn't read the first chapter, so I just looked at the table of contents and skipped to the chapter about selling songs, and then I quit. Farewell🙏

Can this be recommended by the city? ? ?

I didn't see any leisure time. . Real.

Is there a female protagonist in the main character? If so, it's best not to be Pang Di, because I came from Feilu and was about to be poisoned to death there.

I was speechless when I saw the Chinese martial art of marksmanship. Why do I have to mention this when writing about entertainment? I really can't stand it.

The writing is okay, I hope the author can work harder. Here is some personal advice from me: I felt that some of the conflicts were very abrupt while reading. There were conflicts when the guests came in the first episode, which is not good! Because you were a group actor who experienced a lot before you traveled through time. Some minor problems are fine, but this kind of impatience should not be there. After all, the protagonist should be very skilled in playing tricks in his previous experience. And later, Teacher He asked you to sing an original song... In reality, he would not say that, but in a novel, this is a poisonous point. Taking out too many original songs too often will make readers feel bored. You need to find suitable reasons and inspiration to explain the origin of your song. Personally, I suggest that the protagonist have the habit of writing notes and reading the news every day. I hope the author will not ask the protagonist to come up with original works too often and take his time, so that you can write more and earn more. There are also emotional scenes that need to be written well, and one should not be ambiguous with the other. So far, this aspect has not happened. Finally, come on, author!!!

Dear guests, could you stop for a moment and give me some writing advice for this book? Thank you 😊!

There are several chapters that are under seal and are being unsealed.

It's not toxic after Chapter 38. If you are interested, you can read it.

Compared with those entertainment novels that start blaming the sky and the earth at the 50th chapter, it is really conscientious. It is very relaxing and comfortable to read. Please update it soon.

The first few pictures are not good at writing, but you can still read them later.

I have read more than 30 chapters... I really can't stand it any longer. The protagonist's performance is really shady. The person who wrote the book has no high emotional intelligence. The female characters are written in a very petty style... Not to mention that the author used a poisonous snake to force the drama... He said that the snake venom should be sucked with the mouth. Just suck it with your mouth... An old Chinese medicine doctor came and called Mr. Zhou... Since the article is about the urban entertainment industry, it should be in line with the speaking habits of modern people... I know martial arts, and then I can do everything. I am very good at chopping and cutting... It's really embarrassing to watch

Toxic or highly toxic. I came to see the "leisurely" life, not to see you pretending to be slapped in the face. I came to see the protagonist interact with others to relax. It was not to see you pretending to be cool all by yourself, and you pretended to be so stiff. It made me feel embarrassed and cancerous. Others see your poor pretense every day, and you still call 666 like a fool. Your book is "The Leisure Life of Longing for Life", not "Missing My Life" "Live a Pretending Life" I read these chapters and I can probably summarize it: You sing in interviews and others shout 666. You light fires and others shout 666 You practice martial arts and others shout 666. You kill wild boars and others shout 666. You compete with others and others shout 666... In short, the summary is that you are pretending to be cool and others shout 666. There is no interaction at all. The whole process is describing how awesome the protagonist is13

The poison test is completed. Read 10 chapters. ①Title, author, your title makes me think that you are an undercover agent sent by the enemy station. If you hadn't clicked it and taken a look, you would have realized that the protagonist is not some reborn god and devil, the richest man in the world, and I would have thought you were an enemy spy who broke into our side. ②Writing style. It feels like the writing is like a running account, and the article is dry (I'm not trying to make you watery). I didn't get used to it at first, but it got better later. ③Golden finger. An old-fashioned but practical popularity draw. But what is the whole national martial arts for? It was developed so early. Are there going to be fantasy elements later? ④ It's just a matter of using the longing for life to attract popularity, but if you say in front of Mr. He that the protagonist's original gardenia blossoms is a bit ruinous to the popularity, after all, there are many Mr. He fans attracted by the longing for life. No matter how you write it, you will be scolded. ⑤ It's a bit outrageous that a newcomer who has never even appeared on the screen before has become a permanent guest. It can be written that after the protagonist appears once, the program team will recruit him to be a permanent guest because of the ratings. ⑥I feel like the author is a fake fan. The three old fans of Longing have gone, leaving Tianba behind. The dogs are not just Little H, but there are also pots and pans!

Looking at the name, I thought it was a daily casual novel, but when I saw it, I was poisoned by the same old routines from ten years ago. Go on a show to kill wild boars and venomous snakes. Are you sure this is something that is included in variety shows? I was convinced to kill a wild boar with a kitchen knife.

On Poison Points Personal Poison Point One: Pig's Foot's Character is Careless Personal Poison Point Two: Pig's Feet's Conversation and Open-mindedness Personal Poison Point Three: Pig's Feet's Behavior Stands Out from the Crowd Personal Poison Point Four: Wild Boar

Chapter 182: A 180-meter person weighs 120 pounds. How skinny is that? A martial arts practitioner, a muscular man? ? ? ? ?

How did this kind of novel get published in Sanjiang?

A bookworm of fifteen years, I persisted in taking 14 pictures! ! ! I will dry this bowl of arsenic first as a courtesy

Trash. He dares to make jokes about popular fried chicken when we first meet him (the kind that foreigners seek death for). He speaks without any brains (he has lived two lifetimes and is 40 years old in total). He is a poisonous weed.