Time Travel and Looking for a Hero

I also feel very poisonous. I just read a little bit (about fifty or sixty chapters) and I feel that the protagonist is too useless. I also feel that the whole world is against the protagonist. The chivalrous value-changing moves of this chivalrous system are also very confusing and confusing. You can make do with it, it is slightly poisonous, brothers with high poison resistance are welcome to come and experiment.

I usually like to keep books, so every time I get to a key plot point, I always have no time to express my thoughts. This time I just happened to catch it. To put it bluntly, Bai Bai and Qian may not know who Li Zhiyun is, but Fuxi probably should know. I remember that they must have talked to each other across the air when they were at Xiake Island in Lingyuan Continent. Now that you have spoken, let me add a few more sentences. If the author doesn't like to hear it, just ignore it. It's okay to delete it. This book is quite good, and I admire the author's knowledge very much, especially the research on martial arts, the numerous treasures of martial arts, and the imagination of the transition between science and martial arts. However, I still disagree with many of the author's ideas, especially the author's negative portrayal of ancient celebrities. Li Er won't go into details, there are indeed some stains, but why did the two Fengchen Three Heroes insist on becoming evil, as well as some heroes in Wagang Village. Those people at the beginning were so blackened that I almost didn't want to watch anymore. The most unacceptable thing is that the author has drawn a frame for China. Everything cannot escape the category of Heluo. The Tao Te Ching and Nan Hua Jing are not as good as the Yi Jing. I am not very knowledgeable, and I really don't know whether the Tao Te Ching refers to the Book of Changes, but why do I conclude that the Tao Te Ching is not as good as a pound, and the martial arts derived from them are actually completely graded. Isn't there a situation where something is better than someone's?

The opening chapter is extremely toxic. The three sons of the Li family framed the protagonist for spying on the eldest grandson Queen's bath? Is it possible in this ancient era where chastity was more important than life? There is no logic at all, the story is disgusting

The full name is "Embarrassing Writing", which is so embarrassing that I almost get cancer.

I guess it's because of the bad grades. There are only four posts out of more than 6,000 recommendation votes, and only one post about the first three chapters and this chapter.

The Flame Knife was created by Jiumo Zhizhi, but here it is written that Xiaoyaozi realized it from the Tao Te Ching, which is a bit imaginative.

Can you find an opportunity to finish writing the small role in this book?🙂

The plot is too lame, the protagonist is too stupid, and the writing is awkward. I feel that the author is too young, maybe less than 20, a poisonous weed.

There is no story at all, martial arts, martial arts, where is the knight? It feels like the first ten or twenty chapters are all about a bunch of lunatics.

If the system doesn't work, it looks like a Holy Mother type at first glance. If it can't survive, try another system.

After reading it, I just want to say that my head hurts. It's obvious that the author wanted to write something, but to be honest, he didn't have any sense of the picture in his mind. I can't make up for it with my brain. Come on, write it, it will be perfect when you finish it.

She's so mean and ****, so poisonous that I can't stand it.

I really couldn't stand it anymore, so I decisively gave up the book. I didn't know what it was about 😳

Can you revise Xiao Long Tiao and Xia Wu Da Song? The first time I watched Xiao Long Tiao was wonderful. The second time I watched it was slightly flawed and had many typos. Some of the plots were unreasonable but still wonderful. The third time the plot was far-fetched and unreasonable and there were many things. I have also read "Xia Wu Da Song" 3 times. It is slightly better than Xiaolong Duo, but some plot descriptions are too delayed, and the protagonist's style is slightly biased towards the Madonna. There are fewer and fewer martial arts novels available on the Internet, all of which are fast food (all are invincible within the same level. Challenges of leapfrogging are not a dream, especially martial arts fan fiction) The classification of realms (acquired, innate, etc.) Feels far-fetched and weird when compared with the original work. Lonely Universe is one of the few authors with the ancient style of Jin. I hope the author will finish this novel and write several novels of his own, and write a classic that has the same influence on a generation as Jin Yong!

Lonely Universe, my eyes are almost blinded. There is no second update today. Or are you thinking of a new book? I have an irresponsible opinion. Nowadays, people who write about so-called martial arts don't know the tricks at all. Most of them are: The power of one punch is so terrifying. . . No one dared to look, but after the smoke and dust dispersed, he stood still. . . If anyone knew that he thought this way, their nose would be crooked with anger. , Such a cultivation speed/comprehension/heavy treasure is actually disgusting. . . In the final analysis, these writers are just trying to gain popularity, system, and time travel. Under the premise of fantasy fire. Your advantage lies in your good fighting skills. Why don't you try to become a warrior to enter the world of immortality, the world of magic, and the end of the world? Two flowers bloom.

I've opened a new book. . . Found this on my eunuch bookshelf. . .

How many readers can resist such a system of snake essence? The author is cheating himself.

After reading books for more than ten years, this book is the one that I couldn't put down after reading the first three chapters. Why! First: After time traveling, I faced this bad situation and kept studying martial arts. If you study and study, you will get it. My God, I am one of the best time traveling personnel! Usually events drive the development trend of the story, and then you get something, you won't say what the hell!

The results of this book are terrible. . . . Can the universe hold on? . . . . Alas, the martial arts in the universe is the most martial-arts style I have ever seen in Qidian, but it is not popular, so I can't help it.

Will he become the emperor again later?

The protagonist has been separated from the mortal way of life, and with the advanced civilization of the Vedas, there is no way to survive. Even if you don't do anything, you will still be powerful when the Tang Dynasty is established. The worst possible outcome is to go to the sea and rebuild civilization in the New World.

Why is this the end of the book? Could it be that Li Zhiyun is trapped in the dark heaven like this? This is too miserable. I thought he would let his apprentice train into the Heluo Shrine to save him.

I gave up after watching the beginning! Pig's trotters are so mentally retarded, let alone a reborn person! Not even as good as the original owner! I just woke up and I haven't figured out anything yet. Who do I think I am? The shame has been left to ancient times! If you don't understand it, you dare to make nonsense! Seek death

There is this book about the little actor in the world of martial arts I will wait until you write a work that I can understand I used to be young and had no income, but now I can do it According to the average age, I still have half a century to live How are you? Elder brother

Xiao Long Tao, Xia Wu Da Song, 70, and now only Xun Xia Ji and Future Xiao Long Tao are left... It is not easy to insist on taking photos. Can't those books that are gone be revised and unsealed? This is all hard work