Starting from the First Brother Deyun to Dominate

I'm going -_-||, I haven't read the book yet, but I saw that the heroine's name is Yue Yukun. Why does the image of Xiao Yueyue's version of White Snake appear in my mind 😅

The author is big, the last program is the finale, when the big axis means the finale, the finale is the second to last.

This book can be said to be one of the few well-written cross-talk novels in Qidian! Overall, the content is quite rich. Most of the books are about cross talk that has become popular in recent years. Personally, I like Miao Fu Wang Sheng's cross talk better. I hope the author will write better and better!

I like Lao Guo, so I read this book and was pleasantly surprised. However, I still have some questions that I would like to talk about The first one is: There are two versions of the song "Exploring Qingshui River". One is Lao Guo's, who sang it strictly according to Zhaohuatai tune, and the other is Zhang Yunlei's. The middle transition and the final tail tone have been changed to be softer. But no matter which version "Exploring Qingshui River" is, it is a Beijing ditty instead of Taiping lyrics The second one is the finale: the finale is an opera terminology, which refers to the penultimate performance of a performance, not the last, and the last performance is called Da Zhuo Zi. But there is no need to use this jargon when talking about cross talk. The last scene of cross talk is called cuan (cuan).

The idea is good, keep going. Also, updates are too slow.

It's a pity that I can only vote for two monthly votes, otherwise I would give you all five monthly votes I want to be more refined.

Don't poison me, okay? The more I look at you, the more you look like the heir of Shuiyu. Stop writing the routines you did a few years ago. I really can't stand it anymore. With a good cross talk subject like this, I might as well read another one.

Saw two heroines. I knew this book wasn't for me

Author, first of all, I wish you a great success in your book. I shouldn't have said this. You write the book and I read it. If it's good or not, I'll be happy. It doesn't matter whether I should leave or stay. I came in after seeing the cross talk. The previous writing was also good. I will give you a recommendation vote and an investment. Although it is free, it can be seen that I am more optimistic about this book. But later on, the more you write, the more you write. It doesn't matter anymore. At worst, you have to wait a few days before reading it. I don't even say anything useful in one of the three chapters. Then there is the content. A villain has been prepared for so long and finally killed by the system. . . What has the system been doing so far? OK! I thought it would be okay for you to write an innovative cross talk, but now you start to mess up the plot, start to use routines without thinking, and the content is not good, then delete the book and never see it again. Having said all this, I don't want to start a fight or quarrel with the author. If you feel that this comment affects your book review area, just delete it. I just want to tell you that you have changed. Stop being clumsy and use less routines. If you work hard to bring good things to readers, there will naturally be more readers and the data will increase, so you can take care of yourself.

Well, my personal feeling is that I don't take any position. I personally find it very embarrassing. I read the first few chapters and there are a lot of typos, especially about the job... I, a layman, know what it means. You, a novelist, don't know? Still haven't checked the information? So I'll take my leave first, and you guys go on and read on!

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The more I write, the worse it gets. I still want recommendation votes, but I want to eat shit.

I didn't read it, but when I saw that Yue Yunkun and Yu Qian were the heroines, I knew it was a ** novel

The two heroines shocked me! When I saw the name, I was shocked!

Is the heroine Yue Yukun in the role serious?

Congratulations on the launch, a monthly pass will be given to you

Fake Deyun Club girls (boys). There are a lot of these people now. They are no longer pure. It is better for the older group of Deyun Club fans to be more or less knowledgeable. This thing doesn't know anything and comes here to write nonsense. It is poisonous.

The author deceives consumers! ! ! ! ! I saw two female protagonists click in, and the result was... Big liar! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

I'm a little scared since I haven't read a book. Yue Yun. . . . . 😰😰

Man, I want to watch pure cross talk, no intrigue.

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It looks great, but it feels a little lacking.

No, no, really not. I can't imagine the picture.

This ending is a bit sudden and appendix-y!

This protagonist combines all the advantages and abilities of Deyun Society 😜 It's a pity that the eunuch is

Author, did you know that you are famous on Douyin?

This Yue Yunkun can't stand it anymore. Don't you, Yu Qian, change your name~😰

Can Yue Yunkun's image bring in Yue Yunpeng's?

It was quite beautiful, why did it end so hastily?