Online Game Island War

It looks good! There are no language problems, the content is fluent, and there are no stomach-churning scenes at present. It is just not enough to watch. The theme and opening are quite novel. I support the update!!

There are many advantages, and the overall plot direction is still stable, but the poisonous points are unbearable. There are no details of the war at all... Up to now it has been all hacking and slashing, with 0 battle damage after cutting. Is the player war just a flying face-mounted beheading? It's really a war of writing and an adventure of reading. Let's not mention game bugs for now. I tolerated being sent a super level at the beginning, I tolerated the crystallization of light with tens of billions of gold coins in Xinsheng Village, I tolerated it, the world's number one didn't even have a decent system (except for 3 legions, what about the supply system? What about the tactical system? Nothing was written about administration, law, logistics, etc.). I also tolerated it. I can't stand it when a player just sees a girl and takes over the attached island. It's like a novice who can earn unlimited treasures and upgrade, so why should I read a book like yours that is disguised as a military strategy? Farewell.

There should be no alien planes, just one plane with multiple continents. Be innovative and creative, not routine and imitative. Downplay the strength training system. Downplay individual combat capabilities. Multi-racial civilizations compete for hegemony. The protagonist can not only use technology, artillery battleships, and steam engines, but also use fantasy racial biological magic to tame Warcraft mounts to form cavalry, tame flying dragons and rocs to form an air force for bombing, and fly biological aircraft carriers to power steam engines. You can conquer girls and their tribes, families, and races, shrink and annex and conquer, form powerful vertical and horizontal alliances to attack far and near, and form a multi-racial sea, land and air alliance camp. Don't develop technologies like airplanes, steel battleships, and tanks. Airships are of limited use. Of course, the air force in the fantasy world must be dragons and birds. Just focus on artillery and steam engines, otherwise it would become a military historical novel. The sea race, battleship artillery, flying race aircraft carrier, and sail battleship are not suitable for aircraft carriers. Steam engines or magical arcane power need to be developed. The technology is limited to artillery and steam engines, and the rest cannot be used. Floating islands, even floating continents, civilization in the sky. There are four major civilization systems: land (human race, giant race, insect race, dinosaur race, ferocious beasts, giant beasts, auspicious beasts, and some flying races), underground, sky, and ocean (offshore amphibious, island amphibious, and pure sea race). Each civilization system has army and air force races. Every civilization has several intelligent races that fight against each other. First it was within one civilization, then two civilizations, and finally all four major civilizations were involved. There are three main points. The first is that there should be no gods, demons, legends and extraordinary things. The combat power level system is downplayed and a real fantasy world is presented. The second is that the emotional plot must be impactful, especially the love plot, which must be titillating rather than nauseating. Third, the rhythm should not be too fast or too slow. There should be no hints of pretentiousness or foreshadowing that a big game of chess is waiting, or that apocalyptic disaster will come. This is very childish and disgusting. There are also ferocious beasts, huge beasts, strange beasts and auspicious beasts. You can draw inspiration from the Classic of Mountains and Seas as well as various Chinese myths, stories, strange stories and novels. To construct a Chinese-style fantasy world, the world view must be deep and impactful. Break away from the traditional binary moral and ethical framework. Race, civilization, beliefs, and interests transcend the flat binary values ​​of morality, right and evil, and enter an objective and macroscopic three-dimensional worldview. I also don't like those dark novels that pretend to be cruel, bloody, violent and terrifying. I really hope for a grand and sophisticated fantasy novel. Naval battles, air battles. Aircraft carriers of flying races, air and space battleships, air fortresses, air and space carriers carrying flying races.

It's very good. It's smooth and refreshing. It looks very comfortable. It would be better if it can be refined.

I would like to ask how many people chose their hair color in the second photo? I'll count to 1 first and follow up downstairs.

I always feel that playing the feudal era on a spaceship is a bit nonsense. In this case, shouldn't all human beings at least play StarCraft?,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, But,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, the,,,,, the,,,,, the,, the, the, the, the, the, the environment,,,,, from the past,,,,,,, the StarCraft,,,,,,,, where all human beings can play,,,,,,,, at least the StarCraft game,,,,,,,, the Starcraft,,,,,,,,, the, the, the, the, the, the environment,,,, that all human beings have to play it,, to at least playing StarCraft in this situation, to play in the feudal era by flying a fighter jet, to learn about combat, and explore various planets to learn about the environment, and so on.

What I saw was an introduction to China and what I read was foreign content😰😰

When will the author release a new book?

The author overtly and covertly suppresses the protagonist. Players, forget about the system targeting the protagonist. The protagonist has been developing for nearly a hundred years. With such a powerful force, the technology is not separated from other players by several generations. It's ridiculous. Other players have developed in their own way, and there is a huge overlap in R&D. The protagonist's strength is far beyond other players. The investment in R&D should also be far higher than others. The technological strength can easily separate other players by 3 or 4 generations. As a result, the author forcibly evened it out to the point where there is no generation gap.

When others challenge the famous general and have air units, the famous general will return to the city and the challenge will fail. The protagonist brings a famous Phoenix general and keeps fighting! ! ! 🙏🙏🙏Farewell

Lord text, population is the foundation. If the population is suppressed so hard, you might as well write an adventure novel. I guess the author will not describe large-scale war scenes, but will focus on high-end combat capabilities.

The writing is quite good, the settings are relatively comprehensive, and there is no forced intelligence. I just feel that the top level came out too early, and I feel like nothing will come out later.

This novel has basically collapsed. There are many settings that the author must have forgotten or replaced. The author of the realm of cultivation has completely forgotten. The two times of flesh refining and the ultimate challenge of the Tower of Babel. The monsters are projections and cannot be transformed. The author has also forgotten. There is also the island master's competition that is held once every ten years. The system will refresh the treasures every year. There are also life and death fruits. Anyway, it is very confusing.

It feels too watery, and I have to explain in detail what I could have just mentioned in one sentence.

In the island war, are you thinking ahead and considering cavalry so early? Or are you preparing to poison us? Let's see how you round up next

The plot and stuff are okay. The main character is just too funny. I always want to think about it when I have nothing to do. It looks annoying. Stop watching

I could still read this book 15 years ago when Internet writing was just starting out. But now, are you talking about the Renaissance? I have been talking to myself to amuse myself, to add drama to myself, and the whole article is nonsense.

I think the gold coin limit is very unreasonable. You still need to use gold coins for transactions within your own island, which will lead to a sinking of funds. Rich people will stay at home and send out gold coins all the time. The source of gold coins is selling mines and selling wine. If the price of wine is expensive, it is only a fraction of the price inside. They mainly sell mines. On the island, We should issue our own currency. Gold coins are foreign exchange. It doesn't matter if the system doesn't recognize the currency. Also, the protagonist is too stingy. He is reluctant to sell 1% of the mines. He is not like a person who has experienced 500 years and is just starting to be poor. All development on the island is inseparable from gold coins. He knows full well that It has only been 10 years since the population was refreshed and it was stopped. It has also been importing food (fish) from the outside for 10 years. No matter how hard we seize the opportunity to increase the population to tens or hundreds of millions, 900,000 is considered a lot of people. The land area of each country is expanding, and the labor gap has always been huge. Don't brush people away, and don't care much about the affiliated islands. With contract restrictions, immigrants should be sent there to help develop. Administrative personnel are also sent from the main island. No troops are allowed. The main island platoon of troops is stationed there. The owner of the sub-island can just be a noble, providing BUFF and closing the island.

The protagonist's mind is really full of activities, and the author is so clever that it makes me feel upset to watch it.

I have an idea that a sea extends all around. Over time, the water evaporates, and soon a basin below the sea level expands. Although it is full of salt, if it is closer to the mountains, the mountains can be dug and filled.

How can I put it... The plot is indeed good, but you really think too much! No one else! It's you, the protagonist! I am thinking about everything that is available and not available. I am thinking about it before it is put on the shelves, and I am still thinking about it after it is put on the shelves. It makes people feel that it is too watery!

The whole inner monologue, if you ignore these, I am afraid it will be a question whether there are hundreds of thousands of words.

It's like a running account. I wrote 200 chapters of the game in one year, which is ridiculous.

Chapter 126: It's repeated, and they charged me another 10 points

Just... Quite suddenly

New book? ? Where

As a lord, I don't understand why I don't want to learn swords that are good at self-defense and fighting, but instead learn swords that are suitable for battlefields.

The author's self-deprecating humor is really annoying after reading it too much