Brilliant Football Life

Although the writing is a bit green, the protagonist's positive attitude is very touching! It would be better if you don't write the protagonist too young. After all, if you live to be thirty-one in a dream, your character should be more mature. If possible, write more about the protagonist's hard training and meals, and provide a strength growth table. After all, the protagonist is not in the dream. There is no system, such as how many seconds are thirty meters, and how long is one hundred meters. These are what we like to see!

You are awesome. For the preface to chapter 80, I skipped to chapter 80 to read it. Come on.

Book friends, the name of this book has been changed, Gorgeous Football Life, I hope this is a new starting point! !

The pleasure of football novels is to upgrade from 0 to 100. Once you give a skill to your system, you will know it all. You don't know about settings such as training to increase proficiency. I can only say that writing like this is equivalent to abandoning a lot of hard work and hard work in football.

31 Plays professional league. . . . . A little too old

Just don't edit your own posts. It's good, the writing style is relatively immature, but you didn't introduce the players on both sides in a simple and clear way like other authors. Come on, your style is quite suitable for writing online articles.