A Foodie's Survival Diary

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~

Do you know why no one is watching? There's not even a decent conflict, **. Love between a strong man and a weak woman is silly and sweet

Isn't the author going to revise the first two chapters? They are too long and should be separated. I think it won't be like this later. The author should come up with a title. Chapters are also difficult to remember, which means it depends on the system memory. If you really can't get up, just cut out the sentences and words from this chapter!

The writing style is still a bit immature, so I can still make do with it when I'm short of books🉐

I finally finished reading it. As a person who is not very determined and a bit lazy, it is not easy to finish reading a book, and I also contributed my first speech. The author's big book is a good read overall, especially the detailed food preparations in the middle that can be used as recipes. The plot is also very attractive. The transition between characters and scenes also gives people a sense of sudden enlightenment. There are still some problems in character portrayal. The characters of several people in the middle are different. The gap is a bit big, and it seems a bit inexplicable. Secondly, I feel that the author's ending seems a bit hasty. It just survived a big explosion and ended ten years later. It still feels like it should be very powerful. The description of a lot of zombies is a bit too simple, which is a bit sudden. At the end, it feels like a sequel. First of all, there is no description of the Buddhist beads that the heroine has carried since she was a child. Then there is no specific description of the death of the heroine's younger sister in the previous life. The mutated mouse that she said was the most unpredictable in the end of the world did not appear. There may also be what the little zombie who died easily said Xiaomi that I didn't see. Later, it was said that Xiaomi was dead, and then the heroine said that Xiaomi was dead. When a piece of jade talisman caused the second spatial mutation, who was the woman who appeared inexplicably after she finished shopping? Then there was the throbbing of grass when they passed by a piece of grass, and then there was the peach tree in the southeast corner of the warehouse when everyone was collecting supplies. There was also the reason why the male protagonist Da Da left the military area inexplicably. What concerned me most was that the life experience of the heroine Da Da was not simple, and that miraculous intuition. Could this be the aura of the legendary heroine? No matter what, I still like this book by the author Dada, and I hope Dada can continue to work hard, come on! Aoli gives!!!! 😰😆

When I see raising zombies, I can't stand it anymore~~

It's a fresh and fresh route, I quite like it.

Finished reading! It's great to be able to keep writing it to the end!