Under Jing Ke

I read this book from beginning to end, almost one chapter at a time, and I would like to express my own opinions at the end. Good aspects: 1. Good literary talent. The writing style can be serious or humorous, and there are several scenes that set off the atmosphere particularly well. There are a lot of descriptions of scenery interspersed in the story. The movements and expressions of the characters are so well captured, and the depictions are so delicate and natural that you feel like you are watching a drama. The narrative is not content with the ordinary linear narrative, and uses a lot of narrative techniques, and the form is relatively novel. 2. Logical and rigorous. The plot of the story fits together perfectly, the motivations for the actions are reasonable and clear, the logic can basically withstand scrutiny, and no major flaws can be found. 3. Solid basic skills in history. The familiarity with historical events and folk customs adds to the authenticity of the article and makes reading a lot more informative. Disadvantages: 1. It uses time travel as the theme, but is limited to predicting the future. The protagonist does not bring much modern material or spiritual civilization to ancient times because he comes from the future. 2. The plot is basically written around historical facts, with few overall changes and a lack of freshness. The purpose of writing Han Fei to life and Zhao Gao to death is to consolidate the future rule of the Qin State. The protagonist does not hesitate to use his special abilities to clear obstacles for Yingzheng, and even surrenders. It feels that the author has a deep obsession with the Qin State and has written the most ideal Qin State in his mind, but the overall story It is relatively dull, there are no major ups and downs, the crisis can always be resolved, the main characters basically have a smooth journey until the end (the author also occasionally spoils "Don't be afraid, Brother Xiaojing is here" and so on...), The plot is not particularly fascinating. 3. There are two more personal feelings. One is that Jing Ke persuaded Ying Zheng to believe in him by predicting the future, and the other is that when he decided to kill Zhao Gao, he went to the wine shop and "by coincidence" got evidence of his collaboration with the enemy. These two feelings were handled slightly crudely and were not very convincing to me. 4. This book is not particularly sweet. Although there are audit factors in it, it is not as "deadly sweet" as mentioned in the introduction. It is considered half sugar at most. Personally, I feel that as a new writer who has written two books, the author's strengths lie in his good writing style, vitality of words, strict logic, and solid basic skills. However, the storyline is relatively weak. If the plot is more fleshed out and the characteristics of the time traveler are reflected from multiple aspects at the same time, the work may be better. However, plot design can be cultivated, and literary talent lies in the continuous accumulation of bits and pieces over time. With such hard power and the author's super endurance, I will always be optimistic about her subsequent works, and will continue to read them even if the platform changes. Please continue to work hard, the author. I have been hesitating whether to write this review. The opinions in it are relatively subjective, and there are more shortcomings than advantages... If you feel it is not good or there are other reasons, the author can delete it.

This book is so good that I have read it carefully four or five times! Come on! !

The author is wrong. Where is this male channel? This is obviously a sweet article from a female channel! No more words, tears. Update instructions: Two updates in August, posted at 0:00. Starting two to three updates in September, posted at 0:00. ...... What should I do if the author just loves to write, even if he is obsessed with it? Puffing is healthier... Look at how beautiful my puffing posture is. I will never look back on the road of exploring the most beautiful puffing posture... ... But... For the author's writing motivation and for Ke Ling's sweet daily life to continue, don't forget me with your daily recommendation votes! Every time you encourage me, I can persist for another day. The author doesn't have any skills, he just knows how to survive. If you don't believe me, I'll show it to you 🙂 In addition, if you know a big order owner or other contacts such as Diandianquan, please help to recommend it. The author is relatively shy and is not very good at recommending himself to others. As you can see, I don't often ask for votes, so I am shamelessly rolling around here asking for help (ｰ̀εｰ́) I love you~

The book has a smooth narrative, delicate writing style, sophisticated word choice, and very skillful writing techniques. Each character is given a background explanation at the appropriate time. The character is naturally revealed through dialogue, the characters are three-dimensional, and the behavioral motivations are reasonable and not obtrusive. Although it is a warm daily life of farming, it is also interspersed with many historical allusions, local customs and customs at that time, and some unique insights on how to deal with people are also reflected in the lines. In short, this is a good and light book that is suitable for entertaining and educating in your spare time. If you are passing by, you might as well come in and take a look.

This book is so good. AWSL is so sweet, so sweet, so sweet! Qinghe Tuan is also so delicious! QAQ

Selling dog meat on sheep's heads. Except that the main character is named Jing Ke, he has nothing to do with Jing Ke.

Everyday Life in the Warring States Period, the beginning is quite good, the writing is good, keep reading, but it seems to be different from the swordsman Jing Ke. . . Come on!

Very comfortable writing style, keep it up! 🤭

Finished with flowers (๑❛ᴗ❛๑)

The author's writing is very good, but it doesn't meet my expectations. What I thought was super sweet turned out not to be particularly sweet.

Jing Ke? Where is Tianming? Where is his mother? Who is it? 😂 (Funny, manual)

Why is it that no one reads such a beautiful book

Happy Mid-Autumn Festival! 😁

Why are there so few posts

It's actually going to be an update, I'm going to whip your ass! After eating the Qinghe Tuan, you will be moved to tears and really want to eat one. . .

I'm here, King Lanling! Can we fight in the jungle?