Doomcaster

The beginning of the book is not bad, especially with a wife. Like other books, almost all of them are just the protagonist, without a wife or parents. How many of them are really like this? Also, your book is very depressing and uncomfortable to read. Events come one after another, without giving readers a moment to breathe. Readers read the novel just to read it and feel comfortable. It is not purely a refreshing novel. At least it does not look uncomfortable, otherwise who would read it. Also, your writing is too difficult. As you said in the review, the protagonist is like this, let alone the others? How much can you survive in the end?

Stop writing memories. It's all a mess.

Come on, the author (ง •̀_•́)ง!

This author is a person with stories, identification completed

I want to say that the beginning is so difficult. You are alive only because you are the protagonist. Others are not the protagonist. I'm afraid that only one in a million will survive. Moreover, as long as the resources are destroyed, I am afraid that it will directly increase to one ten millionth.

Well, I slightly regret investing in it. There are too many foreshadowings in the novel, the background of the characters is too hard, and there are too many coincidences. This apocalyptic novel is too unsmooth to read. It is recommended to reduce the memories. It is enough to focus on the protagonist in the scene. Other characters can be introduced in the scene of the protagonist. Don't spend a lot of space describing the supporting characters. It is not a historical novel.

I originally had a lot to say, but after reading this lackluster book review, I decided not to say anything. Don't let my personal opinions influence your thinking. I'm not ashamed to say it. You may not care if the book becomes popular, but before it becomes popular, every comment will greatly affect the author's thinking. I also ask all book friends not to discuss too many plot issues.

Too procrastinating The recall plot is too long and there is no interest in it

I have a suggestion for the author: I think it would be better to change "unknown" to "ominous". There is a similar ominousness in "Shading the Sky".

I think that if there is control from a high position, then everyone will face the same difficulty. The protagonist and his party only survive by luck (having been killed so many times), then there should be only tens of thousands, or even thousands, of people left in the world. If they are scattered around the world, a city can only have a few people at most.

You can read everything at a glance, so don't make blind comments that disrupt the author's train of thought. It's quite comfortable to read this way. Write in your own way.

The book is a good book, and the descriptions are quite delicate, but it is not suitable for me to read. It feels very depressing and makes me very irritated while reading. The world is really destroyed (humanity is almost extinct and the environment is completely destroyed). There are only a few isolated islands with dozens of people left. In this way, we still have to face the crisis of being wiped out accidentally, but we still have hope and delusional counterattacks. This background is interspersed with memories from time to time, which makes me feel irritable and depressed. . . I don't want to continue reading

I felt the writing was pretty good. Although the family part was a little irritating at first, the emotional handling was great. I just don't know if the author has written an outline. If you have so many skills in the first ten chapters, it may be super difficult to write in the later stages... So far, it looks great, keep up the good work! (It's just too little, it took less than ten minutes to read it once...)

Taking my wife with me at the beginning is a bit poisonous 😅

The author turned a post-apocalyptic novel into a romance novel, with too many memories.

I quite like this kind of rhythm, including psychological activities and memories, but I don't know how to write it later.

It's so well written that I, a pirate reader, have decided to become a regular reader and support you. Every aspect is very real, both cool and boring. It's about survival in the apocalypse, not a doomsday push. I haven't encountered a doomsday science fiction genre that can give me such a sense of reality for many years. The last time was probably in 2012 when I first watched the doomsday stream. I hadn't read a few novels at that time, and the last time was Tomb Raider Notes and Ghost Blow Out the Lantern. If you want me to evaluate all the books, it is enough to read only one of them.

After shopping for so long, I finally found a book with the protagonist named Zhao

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I would like to ask where the bad reviews are.

One of my favorites. It has always been hard to understand why this is the case. Some novels are very popular even though I can tell what type of plot they are after just a few glances at the plot. I want to say a lot...