Immortality in the World Since Uncle Jiu

The most uncharacteristic protagonist I have ever seen, he insists that he is a so-called hero. A hero can be called a hero only if he has the strength, ambition, and the ability to dominate the world. The article blindly expresses the little foundation he has built in the main world, repeatedly emphasizes his character, and writes about accumulating evil deeds. So the question is? How can a person accumulate virtue and do good in the character of a villain who is plotting and scheming? A person who deliberately sets up a trap for his own benefit at all costs, will Heaven admit it? Maybe, a hero can also do good deeds and accumulate virtue, but isn't that a hero? I don't know how the author wrote the character of this protagonist, but I can see the awkwardness and I will say it

The Great Emperor is the Supreme Humanity. You actually wrote it as Daluo Jinxian. This Daluo is too worthless.

Looking at the title of the book, I thought it was about hugging Uncle Jiu's thighs

The realm of Daluo is now the eternal freedom of all time and space. Even if the true spirit is broken, it can return after endless years. This realm is no longer comparable to the Daluo Jinxian in the previous Honghuangliu novels. This is what is written in "Projection of the Heavens" Very well, Da Luo was just like that at the beginning of Taiyi's Primordial Era, unable to open up the world. After endless years of sublimation, Da Luo is already what it is now. All time and space are eternal and free, and the timeline can be played with at will, and the world can be restarted at will. Therefore, there are still novels in which Da Luo is equal to Emperor Zhetian. Many people think it is very poisonous. In short, the sentence is "Sir, times have changed."

It starts with three chapters of persuading people to quit, a very awkward martial arts style, and then the author positions it as science fiction.

The early stage is so toxic that I can't stand it until the later stage.

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I have read your book and left a few recommendation votes. Please don't dislike it.

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Ambrosia! (Small beep) It's just a bit short...😤

I think the writing is okay for now. Why is the book review section full of criticism? I often look for it in the new book section, and this one is the highest among the fifty or sixty new books published in the past month or so. I must give you some encouragement! Good luck, author. Your book has not collapsed so far. I hope you can maintain it in the future or improve it in the next book. Although I feel that this book will definitely collapse later on. But it can definitely be used as nourishment to improve the author's level. Ask the author to write carefully, so that your next book will be rewarded.

What happened to the author? I haven't read it for half a month and you've only updated Chapter 5?

Very kind in terms of updates, vote for recommendation

The writing was fine in the early stages, but when it came to Zhe Tian, ​​everything fell into chaos. A person who has attained the Golden Immortal Path is actually a great sage. The great emperors have all become Daluo Jinxian cultivators. What do you want the mortal fairies to do? A prehistoric saint? Shi Hao has not yet reached the realm of the Great Dao. Writing like this goes against the readers' common understanding, so not everyone can stand it.

As a single person, I don't want the protagonist to be single in this novel. Of course, I won't tell you. I hope there will be 6 or 7 female protagonists. Mainly because I want to see if the author has the ability to write well. Otherwise, I usually won't say it because some people write female protagonists who are just vicious and it's really hard to arrange.

Seeing now, it was pretty good before, but suddenly the author forced the protagonist to enter Zhetian. In fact, it doesn't matter if you enter Zhetian. The key is that you, a person who has attained the Golden Immortal Dao Fruit and coexisted with the world, went to Zhetian and only had the strength of the Great Sage. Are you kidding me? This level matches, but the difference is panic

Well, there are reasons why the author jumped on the street. First of all, the protagonist's character is a domineering character that has been suffering from illness for 5 years, and has changed. Secondly, while enjoying the benefits of cheats and curing his own ALS disease, the protagonist is worried about the possible side effects and hidden tricks of cheats, and decides not to use cheats to enhance his strength. The secret method "Yin De Secret Technique" is based on the Chinese art of Xingyiquan... Again, I want to say that a big boss who can give you cheats wants to plot against you, a mortal? Or is the author planning to create a protagonist who is the reincarnation of a powerful person from all over the world, whose sworn enemy in the previous life is using plug-ins to plot against the protagonist, and all the fears of the protagonist are instinctive? Finally, let me talk about the common poisonous points of this book: First, the protagonist enjoys the benefits of the cheat while being afraid of the unknown possible side effects of the cheat, and then secretly intends to eat the sugar coating and take possession of the cheat in the form of throwing away cannonballs. Second, in the first world after time travel, the protagonist said that his own martial arts were the foundation and could not be improved with plug-ins. On the other hand, the Taoist skills obtained were insignificant and he tried his best to improve them with plug-ins. Third, the character of the protagonist has changed back and forth several times. One moment, he is childish, another is domineering, one is decisive, one is compassionate, one is saying that he has to learn a lesson, and one is turning around and suffering a loss in a similar place... A bit speechless =_=

To be honest, if you write about the cultivation realms of Zhutianliu according to the levels of Celestial Immortal, Earth Immortal, Golden Immortal, and Daluo, then you should write it well. The description of these realms in your novel is totally unqualified, so you might as well make one by yourself. What is Daluo Jinxian? What is Jinxian? First of all, the Golden Immortal is immortal in nature and has no lifespan limit. What is the Daluo Golden Immortal? It is free in all time and space and jumps out of the long river of destiny. Do you think that the lords of the restricted areas or the great emperors in Zhetian are worthy of the honorific title of Daluo Golden Immortal? They are totally unqualified. If you set Da Luo Jinxian to be a giant of the Immortal King, a quasi-immortal emperor, or an immortal emperor, the Great Emperor Zhetian really does not deserve the title of Da Luo. For Zhutian Liuxian, you can either create your own system, or you can find a system that is similar and use Zhutian Liuxian's system to write about it. Please also look at Renjiaxian's system realm concepts and compare the combat power of each world.

I have only watched a few, and I feel that the protagonist is a bit pretentious. He uses the system, but also dislikes the system and does not trust the system. It is a bit too pretentious.

I suggest you don't write about traveling through the world of online novels. Not everyone likes it. Zhetian himself didn't like it. I couldn't stand Douluo who once blew up to the sky after reading two chapters. I suggest you write White Snake's Journey to the West and Liaozhai to Conquer the Gods. .

The Immortal King is a Golden Immortal, because the Immortal King can be immortal, and the catastrophe of the destruction of the universe has such an impact on him. The world is destroyed but I am immortal. This is something that a real immortal cannot do. This is also a true immortal Golden Immortal; If the world is destroyed, it can exist forever in time. The restraint of time on it is greatly weakened, and it will last forever... Only the Immortal Emperor can be called Daluo. He is not afraid of the influence of the long river of time and can forcibly resurrect people from time. All time is eternal and free. He has reached the other side and is truly the most powerful and invincible.

What are you going to write about this book now? Why should the protagonist take care of the overall situation when he is forced to relax? They are all on the same level, just like Ma Huateng went to acquire Alipay. Ma Yun did nothing and did not resist, and comforted himself by saying that this was for the sake of the overall situation. Figure it out! The character of the protagonist is a hero, isn't he so silly! ! !

They were all persuaded to quit after seeing the setting of Jinxian matching the Great Sage Zhetian. Don't the author reflect on it? Blindly brag about Zhetian, and others should not try too hard. There is a big problem with this setting. Most people can't stand it. Only a small number of Zhetianchui who live in Zhetian novels will take it for granted.

I just saw the new Mr. Zombie, and I was ready to give up. The protagonist must be dead to be satisfied and gain some evil virtue? It doesn't matter whether you can save someone or not, it doesn't matter if you accumulate merit, but do you have to die to save the situation? Would you like to write some plot?

How terrifying! The Great Luo Jinxian took ten meters in one step, and with all his strength, a radius of hundreds of miles was reduced to ashes. He must have an innate treasure nuclear bomb to kill him! Too scary.

This great emperor can compare with Daluo Jinxian, I'm kidding you. What kind of trashy novel did you write?

The Uncle Nine movie is not finished yet, but the main character is too strong, so is it okay to forcefully dissipate his skills? This operation is indeed a bit powerful. Shen Nong tasted hundreds of herbs, but after all he was no match for the Broken Heart Grass!

Worri, it's 2022, and I can actually win the bid. Why do you want the bid to be completed when you are a eunuch? It's so deceptive.

Because I don't like system conspiracy theories, I only read Zhetianjuan. I felt that Zhetianjuan was well written and had the flavor of the original work. Also, in the author's system, the protagonist's Golden Immortal realm was achieved in a broken world, so the realm is only equivalent to the peak of the Great Sage, but his combat power is comparable to the weaker Quasi-Emperor. And the author did not say that the Great Emperor is equal to the Great Luo Jinxian. He only said that there were three thousand gods and demons at the beginning of the prehistoric period. Shi Hao could only barely achieve the realm of gods and demons, and the Immortal Emperor was still a little far away from the realm of gods and demons. But it didn't say that the realm of gods and demons is Daluo Jinxian or something else. The protagonist lived as an emperor for several lives and the author did not say that he was the Great Luo Jinxian. In the end, I think it's totally okay to compare the emperor's combat power to that of Daluo Jinxian. Each of the emperors in Chen Dong's works are heroes who are unrivaled in the world and surpassed through the ages. It takes tens of thousands of years for the entire universe to produce one. Why do some people always think that they are only equivalent to the realm of true immortals that can be easily achieved by joining a good sect, and talking about world level, those in lower worlds are not human beings? How well written is Chen Dong's "Zhetian", but there are always people who think that the emperor in it is just a clone of the upper world's great Luo? If this is the case, I really feel sad for those great emperors who pursue the truth wholeheartedly, compete with all the geniuses, dominate the eternity, fight alone in forbidden areas for the survival of human race, and seek immortality when they are old, but they can't die in desolation.

This is my least favorite author