Liu Liang

Personally, I feel that the emphasis in martial arts is on chivalry, and the story must reflect chivalry. The plot of this book is a bit trivial. It should focus on describing the fighting scenes instead of describing daily life in such detailed and trivial ways as in romance novels. It cannot be called a martial arts novel. In addition, from the character's perspective, it is difficult to connect multiple lines in parallel, and the reading is not very smooth. It is better to focus on the protagonist's perspective. In fact, the introduction of the background, the background of the world, the relationship between the characters, etc. Should not be ignored. I hope the author will write better

Only a handful of people become famous with one article, and only one becomes popular out of a thousand people who rush to the street. The right time, place, and people are all important. Once you write it, you can make money, and if you rush to the street, it is just for fun. If you want to make a living from this, it's best to start by imitating, imitating first and then transcending. The great writer Chen Zhongshi tells us from personal experience that we should find our own way through imitation. Come on!

The introduction is a bit confusing, can you explain it to me?

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