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I watched it once in the morning and I felt amazing. I watched it again just now and I really liked it. The heroine looks as quiet and elegant as she appears in a painting, but in reality she is playful and cute. The male protagonist seems to be carefree, but he should actually be very affectionate. In particular, the scenery is described in detail, as if a painting is presented before your eyes. The author said that this book is rich in literary writing, and I am honest. His literary skills are really good. I highly recommend it!

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One chapter lasts ten minutes. How many times do I have to read this?

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Well written. Very delicate and very flavorful. Although this genre is my least favorite, because I don't like sadomasochism, it makes me cry too much. This book gave me the desire to read more. . Come on

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Short review: The emotional entanglement between the nine-day fairy and a snake demon, a fairy-tale romance full of fairy tales. [Keywords]: Romance of the Immortal, Nine Heaven Fairy, Renewed Relationship, Treasure Hunt [Book Title]: "Take the Move, Monster" [Author]: Liu Mo [Comments Member]: Wild Fishing [Introduction]: Yunjin is a snake demon. He robbed a fairy. The fairy is a goddess in the heaven and the fiancée of the God. The God threatened several times to beat the snake demon to ashes, but he is still alive and well. But when his luck also ran out, for the last time, he really disappeared into ashes. But it seems that his life was not deserved. When we meet again, he is a person who has lived for five thousand years; the fairy is still the same fairy, but she no longer remembers him. The fairy is looking for medicine for her fiancé, and he is looking for treasures for the demon clan. Although they are not the same kind, they are on the same road. It's just that Yun Jin is too courageous. In order to fool the fairy into helping her find the treasure, she will use any means. One moment he acts coquettishly, the next moment he acts cute, the next moment he acts miserably, and the next moment he threatens his life. The fairy, who was inexperienced in the world, had no idea and was deceived into confusion. After the fairy suddenly came to his senses, he wanted to destroy him again. He crossed his arms and smiled half-heartedly: "Will I, Yun Jin, be destroyed when I meet you?" Book Review Master Viewing Impression] "The emotional conflict is strong, the beginning is about deep sadomasochism, the brushwork is smooth and flowing, and the expression is concise and clear." 1. Emotional conflict: The beginning is cut into the human world, the lady to be married suddenly encounters a snake demon, and the marriage is interrupted. Their identities are gradually revealed from the emotional entanglements between Yue'er (Shaoyin), Yunjin, and Ziying (Xianzun Xihua). Immortals and demons are not allowed to fall in love, so the relationship between the male and female protagonists will naturally have to go through a lot of twists and turns. The second male protagonist is the ideal match for the female protagonist in everyone's eyes, whether in heaven or on earth. Therefore, the emotional conflicts between these three people are relatively clear. 2. Deep sadomasochistic love: Thousands of years ago, Shao Yin acted as a fallen immortal in order to prevent Yun Jin from falling into ashes. Thousands of years later, the male protagonist completed his spiritual practice and offered a snake heart to protect him from the thunder, and faced being destroyed again. The fate of the Queen Mother of the West sheds tears (foreshadowing), and the Yunjin that was wiped out from ashes comes back to life - the heroine thinks about the past five thousand years in the Guanyin Vase, washes away the memory, forgets the past and the past, the snake demon hero becomes a mortal and no longer remembers the heroine. Five thousand years have passed, and there are two emotional high points: (1). The heroine asked the second hero when we will get married. (2). The heroine goes down to earth and meets the hero again, but they forget each other and don't recognize each other. Here is a suggestion: both the male lead and the second male lead have a deep love for the female lead and are unswervingly committed to it, even to the point of being wiped out in ashes. However, the heroine's own peculiarities are not shown. When establishing the character of the heroine, it is best to refine her unique features, otherwise it will not be so affectionate, and it will make people feel that because she is the heroine, everyone loves her. 3. The writing is smooth and flowing: Although the story line at the beginning seems very cruel, when reading it, I didn't feel like I was fed a mouthful of glass slag. Maybe it's because the pace is relatively fast and the emotional foreshadowing is not deep enough, so it reads more easily and brightly. The world of words written by the author is rather light, with a calmness of flowing clouds and flowing water, but it lacks the impact of ups and downs. 4. The expression is concise and clear: I can read this book very quickly, there are almost no obscure parts, the reading pressure is very small, and it is relatively easy to read. [Book title & introduction & chapter label] "The writing style and the title are two different styles." Book title: When I saw this title, my first reaction was that this should be a relatively relaxed and humorous book, but if it is relaxed, it is not humorous. It is more of a "fairy" book. Introduction: The story line is expressed relatively clearly, but it is very sad at first glance (after looking at it, it is actually not that sad). Abuse is not the reason why readers read a book, so it is recommended not to introduce it in such a sad way. Chapter label: This chapter label also belongs to a lively style. This lively style can relieve the reading pressure of readers, but it will also dilute the atmosphere of [fairy and demon sadomasochism] created by the author, and the emotional resonance will not be so strong. Of course, this method of expression is still recommended, but the tone can be adjusted according to the atmosphere conveyed by the article. [Character design] "The changes in the protagonist's mood will be reflected in the character design." Take the heroine as an example: Going down to earth to survive the love tribulation, without the memory of the immortal family (identity: ordinary official lady, peaceful) - learning about the memory of a thousand years (calm and sad) - five thousand years have passed, forgetting the past (easy life) It can be more girlish, but it is not recommended to be silly and sweet, such as the dialogue with the devil) - Regaining memory (character becomes mature, and things are stable) Because this article involves past and present lives, mortals becoming immortals, memory loss and retrieval, emotional rupture and perfection, this character turning point will be more layered if it is handled more clearly. I'm asking a question here. The heroine returns from five thousand years in the bottle and learns that the Queen Mother of the West is dead. The emotions here are handled very peacefully (there should be a small emotional high point.) [Plot] The plot has a clear ups and downs, and the main points of the atmosphere of the book are driven by the separation and reunification of the male and female protagonists. Not to mention the emotional conflict mentioned before, since the two lost their memory together, there are several feelings of expectation here. 1. Their first meeting (high expectations, focus on characterization) 2. The meeting between the male protagonist and the second male lead. (Second highest expectations) 3. The second reunion, the intersection of medicine hunting and treasure hunting, is a good opportunity for emotional collision. Both people are at a blank point in their memory, but since they loved so deeply in their previous lives, there will be a special pull when they get together again. (The expectations of peers are high, the rhythm is sweet, and both parties have no pressure on identity or memory for the time being, so it is easiest to spread sugar) 4. Restore memory again (emotional peak) There is a question here, should there be a time difference between the fairy world and the human world? The heroine has been in the bottle for five thousand years, and the hero has been in the world for five thousand years? The overall readability of the article is quite good. The only big problem is that in addition to the three protagonists, the character design of the supporting characters of the Young Lord of the Demon World and the Princess of the Demon World are relatively weak. It is recommended to optimize it.

Short review: The emotional entanglement between the nine-day fairy and a snake demon is a fairy-tale romance full of literary style. [Keywords]: Romance of the Immortal, Nine Heaven Fairy, Renewed Relationship, Treasure Hunt [Book Title]: "Take the Move, Monster" [Author]: Liu Mo [Comments Member]: Wild Fishing [Introduction]: Yun Jin is a snake demon. He robbed a fairy. The fairy is a goddess in the heaven and the fiancée of the God. The God threatened several times to beat the snake demon to dust, but he is still alive and well. But when his luck also ran out, for the last time, he really disappeared into ashes. But it seems that his life was not deserved. When we meet again, he is a person who has lived for five thousand years; the fairy is still the same fairy, but she no longer remembers him. The fairy is looking for medicine for her fiancé, and he is looking for treasures for the demon clan. Although they are not the same kind, they are on the same road. It's just that Yun Jin is too courageous. In order to fool the fairy into helping her find the treasure, she will use any means. Sometimes she acts coquettishly, sometimes she acts cute, sometimes she acts miserably, sometimes she threatens her life. The fairy, who was inexperienced in the world, had no idea and was deceived into confusion. After the fairy suddenly came to his senses and wanted to destroy him, he folded his arms and smiled half-heartedly: "Will I, Yun Jin, be destroyed when I meet you?" Book Review Master Viewing Impression] "The emotional conflict is strong, the beginning is about deep sadomasochism, the brushwork is smooth and flowing, and the expression is concise and clear." 1. Emotional conflict: The beginning is cut into the human world, the lady to be married suddenly encounters a snake demon, and the marriage is interrupted. Their identities are gradually revealed from the emotional entanglements between Yue'er (Shaoyin), Yunjin, and Ziying (Xianzun Xihua). Immortals and demons are not allowed to fall in love, so the relationship between the male and female protagonists will naturally have to go through a lot of twists and turns. The second male protagonist is the ideal match for the female protagonist in everyone's eyes, whether in heaven or on earth. Therefore, the emotional conflicts between these three people are relatively clear. 2. Deep sadomasochistic love: Thousands of years ago, Shao Yin wanted to prevent Yun Jin from falling into ashes and annihilating the fallen immortal path. Thousands of years later, the male protagonist completed his spiritual practice and offered a snake heart to protect him from the pain of thunder, and faced annihilation again. The fate of the Queen Mother of the West sheds tears (foreshadowing), and the Yunjin that was wiped out from ashes comes back to life - the heroine thinks about the past five thousand years in the Guanyin Vase, washes away the memory, forgets the past and the past, the snake demon hero becomes a mortal and no longer remembers the heroine. Five thousand years have passed, and there are two emotional high points: (1). The heroine asked the second hero when we will get married. (2). The heroine goes down to earth and meets the hero again, but they forget each other and don't recognize each other. 🌟Here is a suggestion. The second male lead and the male lead both have deep feelings for the female lead and are unswervingly committed to it, even to the point of being wiped out in ashes. However, the heroine's own peculiarities are not shown. When establishing the character of the heroine, it is best to refine her unique features, otherwise it will not be so affectionate, and it will make people feel that because she is the heroine, everyone loves her. 3. The writing is smooth and flowing: Although the story line at the beginning seems very sad, when reading it, I didn't feel like I was fed a mouthful of glass shards. Maybe it's because the pace is relatively fast and the emotional foreshadowing is not deep enough, so it reads more easily and brightly. The world of words written by the author is light, with a calm and flowing flow, but it lacks the impact of ups and downs. 4. The expression is concise and clear: I can read this book very quickly, there are almost no obscure parts, the reading pressure is very small, and it is relatively easy to read. [Book title & introduction & chapter label] "The writing style and the title are two different styles." Book title: When I saw this title, my first reaction was that this should be a relatively relaxed and humorous book, but if it is relaxed, it is not humorous. It is more of a "fairy" book. Introduction: The story line is expressed relatively clearly, but it is very sad at first glance (after looking at it, it is actually not that sad). Abuse is not the reason why readers read a book, so it is recommended not to introduce it in such a sad way. Chapter label: This chapter label also belongs to a lively style. This lively style can relieve the reading pressure of readers, but it will also dilute the atmosphere of [fairy and demon sadomasochism] created by the author, and the emotional resonance will not be so strong. Of course, this method of expression is still recommended, but the tone can be adjusted according to the atmosphere conveyed by the article. [Character design] "The changes in the protagonist's mood will be reflected in the character design." Take the heroine as an example: Going down to earth to survive the love tribulation, without the memory of the immortal family (identity: ordinary official lady, peaceful) - learning about the memory of a thousand years (calm and sad) - five thousand years have passed, forgetting the past (easy life) It can be more girlish, but it is not recommended to be silly and sweet, such as the dialogue with the devil) - Regaining memory (character becomes mature, and things are stable) Because this article involves past and present lives, mortals becoming immortals, memory loss and retrieval, emotional rupture and perfection, this character turning point will be more layered if it is handled more clearly. 🌟 Here is a question. The heroine returns from five thousand years in the bottle and learns that the Queen Mother of the West is dead. The emotions here are handled very peacefully (there should be an emotional high point.) [Plot] The plot has a clear ups and downs, and the peak of the atmosphere in the book is mainly driven by the separation and reunification of the male and female protagonists. Not to mention the emotional conflict mentioned before, since the two lost their memory together, there are several feelings of expectation here. 1. Their first meeting (high expectations, focus on characterization) 2. The meeting between the male protagonist and the second male lead. (Second highest expectations) 3. The second reunion, the intersection of medicine hunting and treasure hunting, is a good opportunity for emotional collision. Both people are at a blank point in their memory, but since they loved so deeply in their previous lives, there will be a special pull when they get together again. (The expectations of peers are high, the rhythm is sweet, and both parties have no identity or memory pressure for the time being, so it is easiest to spread sugar) 4. Restore memory again (emotional peak) 🌟There is a question here, should there be a time difference between the fairy world and the human world? The heroine has been in the bottle for five thousand years, and the hero has been in the world for five thousand years? The overall readability of the article is quite good. The only big problem is that in addition to the three protagonists, the character design of the supporting characters of the Young Lord of the Demon World and the Princess of the Demon World are relatively weak. It is recommended to optimize it.

Short review: The emotional entanglement between the nine-day fairy and a snake demon is a fairy-tale romance full of literary style. [Keywords]: Romance of the Immortal, Nine Heaven Fairy, Renewed Relationship, Treasure Hunt [Book Title]: "Take the Move, Monster" [Author]: Liu Mo [Comments Member]: Wild Fishing [Introduction]: Yun Jin is a snake demon. He robbed a fairy. The fairy is a goddess in the heaven and the fiancée of the God. The God threatened several times to beat the snake demon to dust, but he is still alive and well. But when his luck also ran out, for the last time, he really disappeared into ashes. But it seems that his life was not deserved. When we meet again, he is a person who has lived for five thousand years; the fairy is still the same fairy, but she no longer remembers him. The fairy is looking for medicine for her fiancé, and he is looking for treasures for the demon clan. Although they are not the same kind, they are on the same road. It's just that Yun Jin is too courageous. In order to fool the fairy into helping her find the treasure, she will use any means. Sometimes she acts coquettishly, sometimes she acts cute, sometimes she acts miserably, sometimes she threatens her life. The fairy, who was inexperienced in the world, had no idea and was deceived into confusion. After the fairy came to his senses, he wanted to destroy him again. He crossed his arms and smiled half-heartedly: "Will I, Yun Jin, be destroyed when I meet you?" [Book] [Book Review] [Subjective Impression] "The emotional conflict is strong, the beginning is about deep sadomasochism, the writing is smooth and flowing, and the expression is concise and clear." 1. Emotional conflict: The beginning is cut into the human world, and the lady who is about to be married suddenly encounters a snake demon, and the marriage is interrupted. Their identities are gradually revealed from the emotional entanglements between Yue'er (Shaoyin), Yunjin, and Ziying (Xianzun Xihua). Immortals and demons are not allowed to fall in love, so the relationship between the male and female protagonists will naturally have to go through a lot of twists and turns. The second male protagonist is the ideal match for the female protagonist in everyone's eyes, whether in heaven or on earth. Therefore, the emotional conflicts between these three people are relatively clear. 2. Deep sadomasochistic love: Thousands of years ago, Shao Yin wanted to prevent Yun Jin from falling into ashes and annihilating the fallen immortal path. Thousands of years later, the male protagonist completed his spiritual practice and offered a snake heart to protect him from the pain of thunder, and faced annihilation again. The fate of the Queen Mother of the West sheds tears (foreshadowing), and the Yunjin that was wiped out from ashes comes back to life - the heroine thinks about the past five thousand years in the Guanyin Vase, washes away the memory, forgets the past and the past, the snake demon hero becomes a mortal and no longer remembers the heroine. Five thousand years have passed, and there are two emotional high points: (1). The heroine asked the second hero when we will get married. (2). The heroine goes down to earth and meets the hero again, but they forget each other and don't recognize each other. 🌟Here is a suggestion. The second male lead and the male lead both have deep feelings for the female lead and are unswervingly committed to it, even to the point of being wiped out in ashes. However, the heroine's own peculiarities are not shown. When establishing the character of the heroine, it is best to refine her unique features, otherwise it will not be so affectionate, and it will make people feel that because she is the heroine, everyone loves her. 3. The writing is smooth and flowing: Although the story line at the beginning seems very sad, when reading it, I didn't feel like I was fed a mouthful of glass shards. Maybe it's because the pace is relatively fast and the emotional foreshadowing is not deep enough, so it reads more easily and brightly. The world of words written by the author is light, with a calm and flowing flow, but it lacks the impact of ups and downs. 4. The expression is concise and clear: I can read this book very quickly, there are almost no obscure parts, the reading pressure is very small, and it is relatively easy to read. [Book title & introduction & chapter label] "The writing style and the title are two different styles." Book title: When I saw this title, my first reaction was that this should be a relatively relaxed and humorous book, but if it is relaxed, it is not humorous. It is more of a "fairy" book. Introduction: The story line is expressed relatively clearly, but it is very sad at first glance (after looking at it, it is actually not that sad). Abuse is not the reason why readers read a book, so it is recommended not to introduce it in such a sad way. Chapter label: This chapter label also belongs to a lively style. This lively style can relieve the reading pressure of readers, but it will also dilute the atmosphere of [fairy and demon sadomasochism] created by the author, and the emotional resonance will not be so strong. Of course, this method of expression is still recommended, but the tone can be adjusted according to the atmosphere conveyed by the article. [Character design] "The changes in the protagonist's mood will be reflected in the character design." Take the heroine as an example: Going down to earth to survive the love tribulation, without the memory of the immortal family (identity: ordinary official lady, peaceful) - learning about the memory of a thousand years (calm and sad) - five thousand years have passed, forgetting the past (easy life) It can be more girlish, but it is not recommended to be silly and sweet, such as the dialogue with the devil) - Regaining memory (character becomes mature, and things are stable) Because this article involves past and present lives, mortals becoming immortals, memory loss and retrieval, emotional rupture and perfection, this character turning point will be more layered if it is handled more clearly. 🌟 Here is a question. The heroine returns from five thousand years in the bottle and learns that the Queen Mother of the West is dead. The emotions here are handled very peacefully (there should be an emotional high point.) [Plot] The plot has a clear ups and downs, and the peak of the atmosphere in the book is mainly driven by the separation and reunification of the male and female protagonists. Not to mention the emotional conflict mentioned before, since the two lost their memory together, there are several feelings of expectation here. 1. Their first meeting (high expectations, focus on characterization) 2. The meeting between the male protagonist and the second male lead. (Second highest expectations) 3. The second reunion, the intersection of medicine hunting and treasure hunting, is a good opportunity for emotional collision. Both people are at a blank point in their memory, but since they loved so deeply in their previous lives, there will be a special pull when they get together again. (The expectations of peers are high, the rhythm is sweet, and both parties have no identity or memory pressure for the time being, so it is easiest to spread sugar) 4. Restore memory again (emotional peak) 🌟There is a question here, should there be a time difference between the fairy world and the human world? The heroine has been in the bottle for five thousand years, and the hero has been in the world for five thousand years? The overall readability of the article is quite good. The only big problem is that in addition to the three protagonists, the character design of the supporting characters of the Young Lord of the Demon World and the Princess of the Demon World are relatively weak. It is recommended to optimize it.

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I haven't read it yet, but I have a question about why there is only the protagonist among the characters and not the fairy in the introduction.

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