My Martial Arts Maker

Hello dear readers, "If you start talking nonsense, you must be pretending to be a gangster." (˶‾᷄ ⁻̫ ‾᷅˵)? ? ? I am the little brother who has been trampled by thousands of people and has a bruised nose and face... Zhuge's little brother. Book title: "My Martial Arts Maker" Author: Wendao Changshengyuan. Commentator: Actually, my name is "Sheep Liangliang". (This book (╯‵□′)╯┻━┻) First impression: When choosing this book, I was actually quite torn between it and another girlfriend story, but the other one is really a bit young (/ω＼). When I saw this book, my first impression was that it was a system setting similar to a martial arts combination, plus simplicity. The world view in the introduction should be a background similar to the ancient world. In terms of writing style, the last sentence of the introduction seems to be biased towards passionate fighting. Introduction: Ye Kun traveled through a world of martial arts But in this world where martial arts is respected, martial arts has long been monopolized. Br> There is no way to obtain martial arts. In this world where there are endless strong men and strange beasts, it is equivalent to leaving your life in the hands of others. Fortunately, time travel comes with a system to obtain martial arts fragments and create martial arts. Story background: Historical martial arts. Style of work: Mortal flow. Brief review: My name is Ye Kun, I am a time traveler and an ordinary person. I traveled to this world where martial arts secrets are regarded as treasures, and I took my system on a journey that makes me afraid. (System function: teach or kill, get points and props, Exchange the skills and strengthen yourself.) Although I have a system, this system is a bit awkward! I have no choice but to rely on some abilities from my previous life and get involved with the little manager. But what I didn't expect is that the source of all this is just an evil memorial! Although I have become a time traveler, how can I change all this? Or, for an extraordinary life, is ordinary wrong? Summary of advantages: 1. The writing style is ordinary and ordinary. To be honest, it is not ordinary. I like the style, but as an ordinary story, this style of writing will take it for granted. So, here is a writing style that readers who are accustomed to the passionate world can try. Theme: A rare ordinary story. I think many people have read this book about mortals cultivating immortality. Xian Ting is similar in that he is an ordinary person who slowly moves towards a glorious legend. Although the protagonist has a system at the beginning, the system itself only regards the protagonist as a tool for upgrading. As for the protagonist, he has no ability and IQ. The only thing he has is "luck". So, for an ordinary subject, there is no chance of changing one's destiny. Some are just ordinary people who travel through time and come to this world, relying on a little wit and the permissions given by some golden fingers. The shortcomings are that there are a lot of typos in the writing. I hope the author will pay more attention to it. The second issue is that the writing style is more serious. In terms of description, it seems very long-winded. That is to say, there are seven or eight chapters in one plot, which is a bit confusing ╮(￣▽￣"")╭ To be honest, the story of the protagonist here. Zhan, a bit too wordy is acceptable, but the point of view of the supporting characters is too wordy, which is a bit annoying (´▽｀). The plot of Puppet, Lao Liu, must have at least eight chapters... ... The direction of the story: It is difficult to predict the direction of the story. Because it is currently 170,000 words, the plot is a bit slow due to description issues. But it is certain that the protagonist will rely on the system to practice more advanced secrets, and then become more and more awesome, and slowly reach the peak of life. Recommended for: readers. In terms of the group, the writing style is recommended for readers who like to read plain, ordinary and everyday books. As for the subject matter, martial arts (future fairy). Final summary: Oh... Before I summarize, I want to apologize (/ω＼), because I misread a word in the introduction and thought it was a "Honghuangliu". In fact, that word should mean to cut off the popularization of martial arts. . To be honest, there is a big difference between this book and my first impression, or the author's last sentence in the introduction is a bit misleading. The character of the protagonist shows that the protagonist should be a coward, similar to a wretched development, I have a system, and I will be defiant in thirty years. But the introduction says. Want to live a wonderful life... To be honest, it's a bit confusing. But having said that, although the introduction is quite misleading, if you like Mortal Cultivation in the Past, you will fall in love with this book. After all, in the online literary circle, stories about mortals are really very rare. So this rare mortal story is worth reading. Of course! You have to understand ordinaryness and learn to be ordinary before you can read this book with peace of mind. Being ordinary in an extraordinary world may be a disaster. > The final explanation is that I am actually quite depressed: According to the setting, the protagonist has a system for time travel, so it means that it is impossible for Lao Luo to arrange something in the protagonist's body, or it will be absorbed if he arranges it, right? The description here feels a bit misleading╮(￣▽￣"")╭

I had a nightmare after reading your novel. The following is the content of the nightmare. The expression may not be very graphic, but it is indeed very scary. What happened was that my friend and I were driving to play, and then my girlfriend happened to hitch a ride with us, in the back seat. Then after driving for about ten minutes and waiting at a traffic light, a car suddenly went crazy and crashed everywhere. We got out of the car immediately and barely escaped the collision, but the car didn't stop and kept ramming forward. It collided with other cars dozens of meters in front, but my girlfriend still followed and looked. I was so angry that I took her hand and ran forward. After passing several cars that had crashed into a ball, I saw a big red thing in the cab, squirming towards other cars. I was frightened and took my girlfriend and my friend and ran to the river below the road to sit down. The boat went back to the dormitory, but there was no boat. I had no choice but to follow the flow of people and run across the river. The river is an underground river that extends in all directions. You can only get up to it from a long way away. In this way, the few of us walked and walked. I don't know how long it took. The scene changed. Half a month after the incident, my girlfriend and I were playing in the dormitory. We both took off our coats. But with a sudden glance, I saw a woman taking pictures of the window at the window of the room. I didn't think much about it at the time. I quickly took my girlfriend and ran over to open the window. When I opened the window, I saw the woman lying on the platform of the window. There was a river under the window. The nearby houses covered the river and there was no place to go ashore. My room was on the second floor. The woman asked us for help in a weak voice: Hurry, pull me up, I haven't eaten for several days, hurry, help me... I couldn't help but reach out to hold her hand, and when I touched her hand, I found it was cold, and my girlfriend was beside me and wanted to hold her other hand. I held the woman's hand with both hands and just tried to force it, but the woman's hand fell off, tmd it fell off! My girlfriend and I were petrified. I stared at the woman blankly, and the woman looked at her whole fallen hand in my hand, and kept repeating the first sentence. Her eyes were full of hope at the beginning, but slowly dimmed, her voice became weaker and weaker, and white hair began to grow rapidly on her face. I was so frightened that I immediately threw my hand out of the window and closed the window. Then, I woke up with a fright! Well, I still have a shadow now!

Writing the system to be intelligent is the biggest poisonous point of Qidian.

My head hurts just looking at it! Goodbye! Good luck!

I would like to make a suggestion, be less mentally active and describe what you get directly. Otherwise, you will get dizzy while reading. It is best to simplify the first few chapters. Nothing is mentioned and there is a lot of verbosity. There are many good gold finger designs.

The protagonist is a hypocrite. Why does he hate the bandits and establish himself on the moral high ground? Why not eat and drink the people's fat and blood stolen by the bandits? He knows that they will kill people and set fire after learning it. He also teaches? Oh, can you teach me if there are any benefits from the plug-in? Are you still pretending to be here? Aren't other people's lives less important than benefits?     ？ Isn't this a crime? Is it not a crime to help commit a crime? Are you nagging me like this? Hypocrites are just hypocrites. They can't bear to kill, but they still eat when they should, right?

I'm so tired of watching it, and I can't understand it either.

With these results and this level, how much does the editor-in-chief of Sanjiang receive?

Are the world's martial arts techniques monopolized? ? , Is it possible? In this technological age, do you think mobile phones are monopolized? Are computers monopolized? Only the core technology is monopolized

This result actually reached Sanjiang?

It's so long-winded, it's several chapters long, and I can't even explain it with a golden finger.

① The monopoly of martial arts means that except for the children of wealthy families, no one else can practice martial arts. ② Since ordinary people cannot practice martial arts and cannot deal with natural disasters and man-made disasters, beasts, insects and snakes, their numbers have been greatly reduced. ③The children of wealthy families can practice martial arts and have a comfortable living environment, and their number has increased significantly. ④ When the number of aristocratic disciples far exceeds that of ordinary people, the low-level aristocratic disciples will automatically become civilians, and these civilians will have martial arts training methods, and martial arts will spread like this. To break this cycle, only 1Aristocratic families restrict births 2Aristocratic families spontaneously protect civilians and ordinary people, and treat civilians well. The result of [1] is that the world's population continues to decrease The result of [2] is that the clan gradually becomes a government-like existence, responsible to the public. It is impossible to maintain a government by blood ties alone, and there will inevitably be internal strife. In order to maintain the balance of power in the government, new forces will inevitably be introduced, which will also lead to the spread of martial arts. —————————————————————— To be fair, I think that guy is too serious. The author's setting is the setting, and the setting is unreasonable. It just needs to be self-consistent. There is no need to correct the logical bugs in the setting...

This novel dissuades readers at the beginning. The protagonist lives like a street rat, and he never feels happy. Not only is the living environment unhappy, but the system is also unhappy. No matter how far-reaching the author's intentions are, he will dissuade most readers from the beginning, which will result in no results. Is it possible to persist until the book is finished?

There is so much nonsense. Who the hell wants to read Liu Changwen's bad things? He even read several chapters.

The protagonist looks like a primary school student

You have low self-esteem. What is martial arts has nothing to do with culture? The higher the martial arts, the higher the culture.

The main character's name is Ye Kun, which is too ugly. If it were called Cai Xukun, it would be a hit. .

It took me a long time to understand that the protagonist is the system

Holy shit, Chapters 43 to 56 are really awesome,

This kind of rubbish books can be sold all over the world. I really gave you money. If I hadn't still had a glimmer of hope in Sanjiang, I wouldn't have been able to read even one chapter of this kind of book in my life. What a waste of my life.