Burn It Marvel

As a die-hard Marvel writer. I envy people like you who can sign contracts. After reading a few chapters, I found many obvious loopholes. Readers who are familiar with movies should be able to find it. Advantages: 1. The writing is good. 2. The protagonist's ability setting is interesting 3. The description of the battle scene is excellent Disadvantages: 1. The scene changes too quickly 2. There are many plot holes 3 . Character development is not enough For example: 1. The fight between Tony and Obadiah in Los Angeles was not in New York. When you came back to Manhattan from Queens, you met Iron Man fighting with Obadiah. This is unreasonable. . Obsessive-compulsive disorder is crazy. 2. Palladium poisoning is metal poisoning rather than radioactive infection. Radioactive infection cannot be recovered as quickly as in the movie, although the one in the movie is a bit exaggerated. But at least it can be explained as the function of a new element. If you want an ordinary person to live under radioactive pollution every day, within a month, 100% cancer will occur. Of course, it may also mutate (manual dog head). Encourage each other. Finally, promote your own book This is the first time to promote your own book under someone else's book. Slip away.

You still have to advertise. Originally, the quality of the book was good, but now we are in an era where the smell of wine is not as good as the dark alleys!

No way. . . Really awesome! ?

Detail, attention to detail, this home is located in Malibu Beach, Los Angeles. . It can't be reached in an hour from New York by ordinary transportation. .

Let me tell you, I like the beginning of this book very much, but later on, don't make the protagonist look funny (unless you make him invincible and thousands of years old), don't force his wits down (Cavan can accept it, but I can't stand it), don't write dirty jokes (I've been talking about philosophy lately, it's so disgusting), I don't have enough writing skills to write slowly, and I must have control. Even if it's hundreds of chapters, it's better than a stinky and long one. Try not to have bugs, and don't have mutants in the movie universe. There are also various characters that you need to read more information about, otherwise you will be scolded if you are caught.

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Which, let me ask, is Hela the heroine? I have never read any novels in which Haili is the heroine. If you have any, please give me some introduction.

Well, the story of the Defenders in the Marvel Cinematic Universe started in 2014, two years after the Battle of New York, as mentioned in the first season of The Blind Side.

Visually, there is no heroine. Who can bear JJ's tentacles?

The title is Marvel and the cover is Me 171...

Woc, I've finished this book. It's well written.

Wow, it's so rare to find a good book, Eunuch, and it's so hard to read a good book.

When will it be put on the shelves? Will the merchant add more updates? Those who rely on this book to make a living say. . The student party said that at least it should be fully booked. . . .

I will attach great importance to your thoughts, quack quack quack.

Hello prince, goodbye prince.

Has the author considered writing a new book? I really like your style.

I just read this book? ? ! ? ! !

Hold the grass, are you so stupid? I supported you every day along the way, and you just finished the book without saying anything?

It's a very good novel, but why did it end so poorly? . .

Is the author a eunuch? It seems that I haven't finished writing yet.

Don't fall into the trap, this book is a eunuch

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