
Douluo Dalu: Xiaoyao Sword Immortal
斗罗大陆之逍遥剑仙
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 375k Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Fan Fiction
- Updated
- 6y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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156Chapters
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Damn, you're wasting your feelings
With all due respect, this is not fan fiction. You don't even have a rough background. Does your story take place in Dou Yi, Dou Er, or Dou San? It's just a soul ring system and Tang San. It's completely unnecessary to call it a fan fiction, and there's no need to call it a Douluo or something. To borrow, aren't there many books on cultivating immortality using the Jindan Yuanying system? I have even forgotten which book first proposed this system. Not to mention the characters, there are so many two-dimensional characters such as Sister Pao, King Da Mao, etc. Do each of them have something like the moon and the super gun? No! What I mean by saying so much is that you are already in a parallel universe. What are you doing with this forward thrust? It is a waste of my feelings.
If you have the surname Long, you should look up to Long Aotian
The author's writing is good. I would like to recommend the book he wrote. Friends who are book-hungry can take a look. Just click on the avatar. It is non-toxic.
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Why do you still use the words "Douluo Dalu" like this? It's just to ride on the popularity.
There's nothing, why don't you write a few fan fictions?
I just want to know one sentence, where did the doomsday era come from? Isn't it full of monsters? What you wrote is exactly the same as the apocalyptic era. There is also a sentence about the sword skills you described. Anyone can use it like this with a sword. Please respect Douluo's setting. Even if I don't respect you, I can at least modify it. The early stage of your novel is basically self-written, the middle stage is basically copying, and the later stage is completely useless. , It is recommended that you position this work as a novice novel, otherwise it will be easy to be scolded.
380,000 Words, more than 50 recommendation votes
You are so awesome, even though I know you are just writing for fun.
I still don't know where the time period of this novel is.