Slime from the Marvel Universe

The subject matter is very good, but the author of this writing is not qualified in liberal arts.

It's great. Don't think too much. You can listen to other people's opinions appropriately, but don't follow them blindly. In this way, the world in your mind will not be what you think in your mind and it will not be very different from the reader's mind. It is better to stick to the original path when coexistence is impossible.

Let's add more 😁

The first post is mine hahahaha, the author please give me some credit 🤭🤭

Why write a protagonist in another parallel world? I just collapsed when I wrote that. I forcibly added another version of myself and then merged together, and forcibly added a sister, and the emotional line collapsed immediately. Wouldn't it be better to just go to the earth, and forcibly add drama?

The third chapter of Golden Chapter is a mess.

To be honest, the main character just gave up because of a stranger who was desperate for life and death. Oh my god, it's really poisonous.

Author, when did you make the changes? Tell me and I'll read it again. Remember to delete the previous sister's stuff. It's not necessary. You have to remember that you can have two main lines. One is to take the earth route and occasionally go out of the galaxy to increase the interest. The plot should be reasonable, such as creating a fictional galaxy, a fictional empire or what happened in the alliance. The other is to take the interstellar route and interstellar travel like rockets and others, reasonably adding earth events, or you can combine it with the high-tech route of Star Trek. Marvel, I won't exaggerate randomly, but the setting is time-consuming. You need to have an outline, and then a detailed outline, and then fill in and expand. Since slimes have emotional control, why can't they have emotional control? I didn't read it until I got to my sister. I can guess that it will definitely jump. You have written so many chapters now and you must have forgotten what you wrote before. Have you ever read your own book from beginning to end as a bookworm? Do you feel embarrassed?

The author's naughty behavior now makes me want to delete the book

The author is hopeless and keeps posting revisions. Are you using the number of chapters to attract readers?

The first few chapters were okay, but as soon as the woman came out, the sense of immersion suddenly collapsed. Wouldn't it be better if you just go to the earth and get a few weapons for humans, and then you can write hundreds of chapters? It's boring to make a mess

I was forced to have a sister, and my will was influenced by others (I am no longer the same person in the parallel world). It is extremely poisonous and I can't stand it.

After taking a look, I guess the author is new. The formatting of a large section of text is not good. Please change it.

To be honest, when I saw your introduction, I thought you would use major Marvel events as a starting point to make up for the regrets in the original work, or use the movie universe as the main line to intervene in the plot.

Mili was so cruel that he couldn't watch it any longer.

In a word, selling dog meat on the head of a sheep. Alas, it's rare to find a fanfic that makes up for Marvel's regrets these days.

It's another beautiful day, the pigeons are cooing, the readers are roasting the pigeons, and pigeons like the author should be steamed, boiled and grilled!

Why so much "content reshaping"

It has been transformed beyond recognition. You mentioned Marvel in the title of your book because you wanted to follow the Marvel world view. The introduction also stated that I was mentally prepared for the magic change, but the writing was really shocking and confusing. If you want to change it, write down your core ideas clearly. We are not you. If you don't write your idea clearly, we won't know it. Let me add that this book feels really strange when I read it. I always felt uncomfortable in some places. Maybe my experience is limited.