Marvel's Sun Lord

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I don't think it's necessary to have the ability to have a store, just the light of the sun. It's easier to write when you have a store.

Is it enough to have a super seminary? The store looks disgusting and sells genes? ?

I only read two chapters, and it was so poisonous that I almost died on the spot. First, there is no introduction to the world view setting. The book is called Marvel, but there are DC characters in it. Secondly, cheating is just cheating, setting up a plane mall, or relying on someone else's branch. Thirdly, he has the ability of the Lord of the Fierce Sun, but he was fooled by others casually, and was deceived. And he is also the owner of the main store, haha, a wise protagonist. He also gave a reason to fear being regarded as a serious war criminal. When personal power overrides civilization, can we stop using the terms of civilization to define our behavior? This book is solid!

Poison, extremely poisonous, I gave it up, I finally feel happy to say it out

He is said to be the Lord of the Burning Sun, but in fact he is no different from Superman, even more fancy. The timeline is a mess, the author can write whatever he wants

With the super gene of Sunlight, you can stand shoulder to shoulder with Thanos even without the Infinity Stones, right? Detonating galaxies at will, the light of the sun is not as buggy as the Infinity Stones, but its destructive power is definitely something no one wants to mess with. When I looked at the title of the book, I thought it was about the protagonist and the goddess Lena traveling across Marvel and causing trouble in Marvel.

There is no radiation of the sun's light and vampires who do not suck blood. There is no need to eat too many Saiyans. It is called optimization but it is actually weakened.

Is the author a physics novice? Basically everything in real life contains radiation, but most of it is harmless depending on the strength. Only nuclear radiation is fatal. How is it possible to remove radiation from your solar flares, which are inherently high-energy products?

The ability to sense has been greatly reduced. The essence of the super gene in the super god should be a biological dark matter computer, which can control dark matter.

I was so scared when I saw that Jian Jian was trying to persuade me to quit, I didn't even dare to watch.

I thought I was very promising, but after a long time of fussing, another gou licked me

I hope that the protagonist's gene will not be cracked by the people of Marvel Earth. The technological gap of tens of thousands of years cannot be achieved by one or two geniuses. They can't even observe dark energy. How to observe the Kamigawa gene, Deno-3 cannot detect Yan who is not a god, let alone Marvel Earth's technology. People are playing with star drive and concept rewriting, and the earth is still in the pre-nuclear era. Without technological breakthroughs, everything is in vain. There are also some problems with the protagonist's personality, and the rational Shota was interesting when he was a child. Now I feel like I don't appreciate Pan Zhen's muscles.

I found a question, why does every protagonist who travels to Marvel join S. H. I. E. L. D.? Not a single powerful person in Marvel has joined S. H. I. E. L. D., They all serve as guests. At best, it is a leading organization, at worst, it is a group of cannon fodder.

Please stop trolling I deleted the book because from what I saw, the main character was planning to give his cells to others, so forgive me for not accepting it. . . Finally, I wish the author to write better and better

Sun without radiation, light bulb?

I feel like my writing is okay. Only by writing more and accumulating experience can I write better. It is best to have a beginning and an end.

Overall it's pretty good. But some deficiencies can be made up for later. But it would be a pity if you stopped writing.