The Book of the Underworld: Mistakes of Yin and Yang

Retention level: Level 8 The writing style is on the high side, the plot is on the high side, and the packaging is on the high side. This book by the author Xiaohua has a very interesting setting of the underworld, the characters are quite vivid and distinct, and the storyline is not a routine one. Overall, it is very good! Congratulations to the author Xiaohua, Tangtang did not catch your shortcomings~ Summary: It is a very good new book, please keep writing it carefully~ There are not many investors yet, so it is recommended to invest. But the author, Xiaohua, needs to be more diligent (just don't imitate Tangtang), come on~!

I also read the big book, and the writing style often quoted scriptures and was very good. I won't say much else, after all, we are also newbies, so I will talk about one thing that has been greatly ignored or not dealt with in time, that is, Wanwan has started talking at the age of one, and then she is clamoring to go to school! ! As a mortal, it is impossible for such a thing to happen. I hope it can be dealt with in a big way. 🙂

I'm here in Wan Wan, and I'm a slow reader, but this story is still very interesting. Because of a strange combination of circumstances in a book, a series of stories are both interesting and make people sigh for it. The chapter quotes and the poems interspersed in the text are also very charming, but maybe it's just because it's so classic that it sets off Wan Wan you. The writing power will be weaker. Of course, this is a taboo that is easy to commit in ancient times. After all, no one should be able to compare with the predecessors, so you should pay attention to the usage. It will improve the readability of the entire article. But when you are looking for icing on the cake, don't make it self-defeating. However, the image of Kuroko is very good. Interesting, and Diao Chan, sometimes it seems like I'm sorry for the cold fan that Pluto has been chasing for five hundred years. Maybe I didn't understand this character. Just like Yu Yu has an explanation why he is called Yu Yu, but his normal style makes people feel,,, well, forget that word, it's just a bit weird, or Maybe I haven't read that far into the story, so I can't understand his mental transformation along the way. If it's a main character, hiding this depression and completely switching to a joyous style that downplays everything. If there is a turn in the future, burying it like this should deepen the depth of the character. Personal feeling, don't criticize if you don't like it. Newcomer, new book, urban current words, "Love Makes Me Dizzy" I wish you to become a god as soon as possible, welcome all the cuties to flirt with you 😜

The writing is smooth and concise, come on

Coming over to write a review. This is my second time watching this type. As a writer, I think your book, writing style, plot, main line, and sub-line are all very broad, making it easy and comfortable to read. From Yu Yu, Heizi, Wanwan, to the current Xiangnu, they are all very distinct. But as a bookworm for ten years, I think your character setting, plot changes, or digging holes may be a bit unnatural. For example, Heizi, who was a soldier during his lifetime and has always been a subordinate of Pluto after his death, is innocent and simple, likes Xiaoyue, is happy when he is happy, and is worried when he is worried. He pursues Xiaoyue in his mind, and considers Yu Yu as a close friend. But he, who considers himself a rough man, said he was a "bosom friend" twice and was passive and tactful in his pursuit of Xiaoyue. . Soldiers, rough men, must at least show a generous side. Then, every time the plot changes when Diao Chan appears and leaves, I personally feel that although you want to dig deep and cover up the plot, if there is no detailed introduction or side story, it will be a bit unnatural. Of course, I may not have reached this level myself. I can only say that I live up to others and live up to the book, and we encourage each other.                   ——，

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Knowledge point two: About the title of doctor. Before the late Tang Dynasty, the entire Central Plains region called "doctors" "doctor", "physician", etc. Due to the proliferation of official titles after the late Tang Dynasty and the Five Dynasties, the titles of "doctor" and "physician" continued in the north, while the south began to call them "doctor". "Doctor' is a title that began in the south of the Song Dynasty. It is not a foreign word. At first, it only referred to a doctor who treated a certain aspect, and later it extended to all doctors.

Knowledge point 1: The Lantern Festival in the Tang Dynasty lasted for three days, namely the fourteenth, fifteenth and sixteenth days of the first lunar month. During these three days, the curfew restrictions are lifted to facilitate people to enjoy the lanterns, which is called "night release". Within three days, everyone from the princes and nobles to the traffickers and pawns showed up. The roads in Chang'an City are jammed with traffic, crowded with people, and very lively! 😜 Next chapter, see you all tomorrow! Please look forward to it❤️

Without being complimentary, the writing is really good, and it is the kind of thing that a guy like me who writes more narratives than dialogues would envy. Already invested. 😄

Based on the thoughtful comments and my own thoughts, since the next chapter will involve scenes from the Lantern Festival during the Tang Dynasty (spoilers from Yiduidu 😜), preparations are needed, and since the recently signed work has been promoted for the first time, additional updates are needed, and also in view of the author's recent You need to prepare intensely for the exam... So, I decided to stop updating for three days and come back next Tuesday (5.21 😊) At the same time, I wish you a happy 5.20 And 5.21 ❤️❤️❤️

When I'm tired of writing, I take a walk. 🤓

Investing in new books earns more than writing books myself, I am speechless and choked...

This is the first time I read a similar book, haha, it's interesting, the character descriptions are quite detailed, I like it, I don't have any problems so far, I've read the first three chapters, haha! 😜😜

Master, are you secretly changing your vest and preparing to secretly become a god without taking your apprentice with you? 😥

I code every day and don't add chicken drumsticks to me 😟

Hey, long time no see. I'm glad to see you are still persisting. As for me... I was successfully blocked again...

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After reading the beginning, I felt pretty good. I just finished my homework and read a little bit. My first impression was very good, really. Well, I have an exam the day after tomorrow, so I'll continue reading after I finish it. Come on, author!

Wanwan, have you invested in my book? I am considering whether to release it in August or September.

This book is blocked by the bookshelf. It cannot exist on the bookshelf.

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When I read Chapter 6, I can see that the author has worked very hard and is an improvement compared to the previous book. To improve, we need to learn more about lens language and narrative structure. For example, the male protagonist's name is too random, which shows that he is mostly a narrator. If the world view is mixed up, it will obviously not be colored. In fact, as a bystander of history, a tower, a palace, or a tent can be used. A few characters come in and out, and some dialogues can be expressed very simply with some light and shadow. The lens needs to be done well. In addition, unnecessary parts of the narrative structure can be dealt with. For example, the role of Pluto is relatively empty. If you want to make a transition, the big-breasted domineering president is even better. The heroine is too miserable, there is really no need to be so miserable. Ma Mian has always been a minor official, and the role he was given was too important. Overall, I feel that I am too immersed in creation. You can listen to Guo Yuanchao, which will be very inspiring for creation. Come on~ Let's be fans of each other~

Very good, really good, come on! *٩(๑´∀`๑)ง*

Ah, I'm back. Author Da Da. My final grade is very good. I feel good. I had a good vacation. This book is so good 😂😂That's probably all I can say 😂😂😂The writing is very good. Really, by the way, is the author Da Da a high school student?

Oops, I won't finish it in a while, so I'll check in first. I read the first few chapters and found them great😋 Come on, I'll do a book review after I've finished reading them all ( ͡°ᴥ ͡° ʋ )

I really have nothing to say, just keep it for collection and investment. I can only say that my writing style is as steady as an old dog. I am going to work hard. Farewell!

The writing style is incomparable, the character creation is simply classic, and the plot is smooth. I just feel that there could be some foreshadowing in the front, which would make the reading more suspenseful.

Received, I'll come back for a visit! The writing is pretty good and the plot flows smoothly! Come on 🌹🌹🌹

Very simple writing style, collect it and learn from it!