The First Assassin in the Canyon

Don't have high hopes for your first book, especially in the early stages.

,,, Come on, I wrote too little, so it's not easy to evaluate.

It's not that no one reads it, and it's not that there's no evaluation. The main reason is that you have written too little and can't say anything. After all, you can't have no outline, and you can't give random directions. You can't give any suggestions in the early stage, and you have to rely on the author to do it himself. Otherwise, from the beginning, the author will The outline is useless, it's just a rubbish to write, so I can only read it later and evaluate it after you have written enough. The main reason is that you have no shortcomings. I don't know if there are typos. Anyway, the writing is not bad, there is really nothing to say (›´ω`‹)

Become a god, become a god, let's get excited together

I am so excited that I can finally speak again. I am the first post where I can speak. I am happy (≧3≦). Come on

Come on, brother, take your time, it will get better and better.

"Avoid All Beings" is here to visit, come on

Let's take a look. I can understand it even if I don't know how to play games. It's not bad.

Come on, come on, let's encourage each other!

I suggest you describe the scenery more and pay more attention to the expressions of the characters (the purpose is to write more words!) There are too few words! ! ! ! One chapter should be at least 2,000 words! ! !

Hold on, we can win! 😰

Come on (≧3≦) and get dry

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