Finally Lurking

Apocalyptic writing? Human beings are enslaved by foreign races. The protagonist travels to another time and space, learns skills, and then travels back to Earth to become the savior. The first two chapters can be discarded and start directly from the protagonist traveling back in time. Then the settings can be described through the protagonist, which will be more concise and clear. At the beginning of the plot, there is not much to say. It reads fairly smoothly and the writing is okay. 7 points, the author is not good at updating, please work harder.

The interspersing at the beginning is a bit fancy. Traveling back and forth between the two ends is already a bit toxic, but when you travel back, there is a sudden change of perspective, which is very confusing to ordinary people. In fact, there is no need to specifically write about the Crystal Clan. Just use the perspective of the protagonist and let the protagonist tell the readers the ins and outs from his personal experience. Writing it like this is self-defeating. I suggest you change it.