Azur Lane: Starting from Scratch

Alas, the protagonist didn't create the ship girl he wanted, so he talked coldly and had a bad attitude towards the ship girl. He was reflecting on it one moment, and then had an attack the next moment. Sure enough, a dog can't change his attitude.

Chapter 5: Persuading the ship girl to quit. This is totally unlike what someone who values ​​the ship girl as important would do. He is so angry even if he doesn't show his golden skin. He also has a bad attitude towards the ship girl. Anyway, it's disgusting to watch.

I hope you can leave me some comments and suggestions. After all, this is my first time writing and there are many shortcomings. I hope you can point them out.

This book is about to be finished. If you have any suggestions or ideas for the new book, you can leave a message below. Thank you~

I decided to speed up the story a little bit, so this involves the addition of ship girls. I would like to take your opinions into account for this addition. If you have any ship girls you want to see appear, you can leave a message below to tell me. (The selection range of the ship girl is before the different color grid, or she can be the ship girl in the different color grid)

I was passing by and just read the introduction and the first picture. Let me ask two questions first. First: The port area in the introduction has nothing in it and is dilapidated. This problem should not occur in the blue in my image. If it is a ship R, it is possible. However, the technological power in the blue background is unusually developed, not to mention that the final boss Siren is directly in the future science fiction style. Therefore, the port area is in a dilapidated state. This is unlikely. In my judgment, the background technological power of Ship B should be on the level of the display device in Date Live, which builds a building a day, so that it fits the background better. Do you still remember the comfort settings in the back house? Furniture can help the ship girl rest and allow the ship girl to gain more experience. Is this like the energy-gathering formation in ordinary fairy tales? To summarize, ordinary furniture, as a special group of people, should be used by commanders at will. Only special furniture that can increase comfort is truly valuable and needs to be competed for, that is, furniture coins. Therefore, the dilapidated port area in the introduction is not suitable. At least I turned to you for the third time and was a little bored before I came in to take a look. Second: The specific process of time travel is of little significance. In the first chapter, you spend most of the time traveling through water. Who cares how you travel through water? Everyone just needs to know that you are a time traveler. At most, your way of traveling through time should be funny. The protagonist will complain about something and it will be over in two sentences. It is also comfortable to read, and you will not be annoyed because you are always in water and just don't wear it. After all, there is no foreshadowing in your time travel, so what's the point of writing such a long chapter? Do you know the golden three? In the first two sentences, the protagonist travels through time, and then briefly introduces the surrounding characters. In the second chapter, he writes about his character and leaves a first impression on people. In the third chapter, he creates conflicts or suspense to seduce readers to read on. Understand?

Cry, why don't you marry Ming? The protagonist has been rejected by Ming so many times.

The new book "Kyoto Monster Slayer Story", everyone is welcome to take a look~

Cassin is expelled🥵

This is the most satisfying emotional development I have read in a ship-girl novel. The reason is that the protagonist did not mess around because the ship-girls had a crush on him, but seriously thought about his feelings for the ship-girls. This is my favorite part. Hope the author will keep it up. Unlike other similar novels, the protagonist loves the ship girl because he has played games before time travel. In this case, I only think that the protagonist just wants to have sex with the ship girl because she is beautiful.