Looks Like a Big Devil

First of all, I would like to thank Baiyin Alliance for letting me see a good book. This book is funny and interesting, and the various plots are well arranged. Reading slowly, it often makes people smile. You can see the author's intentions, but I hope the author can go further. First, he must have high standards 🤓 (Anti-nuclear) tide part, secondly, you can have other people's tragedies, so that the contrast is more exciting. You can refer to the book (Life Game). The above is my personal opinion. I hope it can give the author some help. I wish the author better results. The author ↖(^ω^)↗

I felt that the author's emotional life showed me the ups and downs, which was more interesting than the book.

Let me share my opinions *I am just a freshman girl in high school, and my ideas may be different from those of adults and boys *This is just my opinion, and it may not be comprehensive, please treat it rationally *If you think my logic is confusing, please respect me and don't use bad words Getting to the point: First of all, the chapter is too short! ! ! Think about whether it's good to be a student party (ﾉಥBenefitಥ), I'm damn sure I'm paying for it all from other people! ! ! Secondly, the people around the protagonist are so good. . . There are only four rules in total, three of which are around the protagonist... This will leave criticism. I suggest that the settings be rectified and the ability settings be expanded, and cannot be limited to those few. Furthermore, although the author said that this book is light-hearted and funny (it seems so), what is the framework of the world? Where is the plot heading? What is the reason for the revival of spiritual energy? What's the purpose? Is this the evolution of all living things or something? Have you ever thought about many deep-seated questions? Emphasizing comedy and pretentiousness while ignoring the plot will provide good feedback in the early stage, but will cause aesthetic fatigue in the later stage and the desire to continue watching will be reduced. Then, this is a personal question. Goldfinger's copy is one thing, but what about the protagonist's own abilities? Where did the sudden golden finger come from? How should the whole book end? Is the origin of Goldfinger also popular - from the future? Finally, I hope the author can persevere. After all, the author is a newcomer, and he is afraid that one day he will suddenly become a eunuch. Come on (ง •̀_•́)ง, we will always support you silently (๑•́ωก̀๑) Love you (❁´ω`❁)

What happened? 😒😒😒😒😒😒😒

Will I be able to upgrade my talent? I've been working on BB, so I can give me some fighting skills.

I'm afraid, it couldn't be the author himself who rewarded it, right? 🤭 Is this going to take off?

"The Legend of Junior Sisters Cultivating Immortality": The country is in trouble, disasters are everywhere, and his parents are killed. The young man can only carry his luggage and start a life of escape by digging wild vegetables and chewing tree bark. When he was about to starve to death, he saw a girl with long hair reaching her waist, a cute girl, and a chicken drumstick in her hand. He shouted:... PS: Serious warning: How come adventures, magic weapons, cheats, and upgrades all belong to my junior sister? ? ? Who is the protagonist? ? ?

You should have a good relationship with an editor in the military classification, right? I thought your book was two-dimensional. Or urban. Actually, a book like this is like a brown candy type. The main thing is which hem you like.

Hey, hey, why did you delete another book? Ant, you look like this. For example, I had a bunch of books in the past that I wanted to order all of them, so I could stock them up and read them slowly. In the end, I just sat back and lost to myself.

No, if you tell me you don't want more semen, you still want to add 🥺

Brother, if I hadn't seen this king, I would have almost forgotten you. Sorry, sorry for not following your latest updates. But now I can finally read your books again, I'm so happy.

Three laws ladao appear around the protagonist

As the author, after seeing the unpolished comment, I am sure that you have polished it by hand. It is very good. I will give you a recommendation ticket and quickly write the plot of beating up the villain and showing off. (´▽`ʃƪ)

Today's essence is all added, you are so powerful, you have commented so much. It's painful and joyful to add them one by one, but I'm actually a little tired... It looks like I really need to find a place to get a helper... Some people are curious about why Lao Niu adds details to each one. I added details to tell you that I have read every one, but it's too troublesome to reply one by one, so I clicked "Add Details" to tell you that I have read it. It's also the book lovers of our book who are so cute. I love you so much. Basically, most of them are words of encouragement to me. A small summary is not disrespectful. After all, you are also serious about the word count 😏😏

Those who watch pirated copies will not read the original version just because you are preventing theft. I don't know what purpose you have in doing this except disgusting the genuine readers.

MD, is there something you don't want to say, author? This is such a confusing update, can you please explain it? If you don't want to write anymore, or it's hard to find time to write, you might as well send a notice! ? We care about this book because we like it, but if you don't even value it, then what's the point of this book? Why is it worthy of our readers' liking? Goodbye┐（─__─）┌

Receive the red envelope Come in and take a look

This introduction... Why is it so familiar?

There are still people like me who guard this book every day, waiting for it to be updated 😭😭😭😢

There have been a lot of 404s lately. The old books I originally read have disappeared inexplicably. Alas

I seem to have seen Lu Xiaoshu😰😰😰

Don't be a eunuch, I just want to gain weight before watching.

Why is it closed? It looks pretty cool!

1.6 Million recommendation votes, I'm afraid it's not just a swipe.

I don't know where the author of Qidian learned the fragments. Anyway, every time I encounter such fragments, I am not in the mood to give a recommendation vote.

This book is trying to make me laugh to death.

Those who report may not necessarily be readers, but may also be other people who are jealous. Pay more attention. The time has only passed halfway, and you have just caught up with the five million words you added this year. Haha Just write yourself! Look at people's elbows and they're still awesome.

What the heck, millions of referral tickets, not a single monthly ticket,

Too watery. Che Zhulun's back and forth words make it seem like the author is too watery.

I accidentally clicked on it while swiping the screen, and clicked back immediately. I accidentally saw the recommendation ticket and clicked in to take a look. Damn, I was scared. Which god's vest? !