Luanjian Chunqiu

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It's pretty good, but I feel like the word count is a bit short.

The author writes very well. The writing style and prose are good, and I feel the rhythm is pretty good too. Let me just give you two opinions. First, typos cause the sentences to not flow smoothly and affect the reading experience. The second is the character design of the protagonist. This is the green vegetable and radish, everyone has their own favorites. I always feel that the protagonist doesn't have that "chic" air and his character is not very stand-alone. My humble opinion, if you don't like it, you can delete it.

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It's a pity that I didn't sign the contract, the writing and stories are quite good.

After reading the first three chapters, it seems that it belongs to traditional martial arts. Traditional martial arts is too restrictive and difficult to perform. The basic routines have been played over by others. Furthermore, it is difficult to make progress if the pearls and jade are first. You can develop into high-level martial arts, or learn the ancient dragon style, and follow the suspense style of fighting wits.