I Will Be the Leader

I gave up the book, and the skills I drew still have an expiration date.

Doesn't the author know that erasure is a taboo in system writing? . . Aren't you afraid of running into the street? Any weird punishment is fine, but it must not be erasure.

This person named Feng Yun is very problematic. If I were the protagonist, I would definitely tell him to get lost. People who speak freely will cause trouble sooner or later. Write it down quickly.

There are not many readers for this book because you describe the characters according to traditional novels, which are too traditional and have no levels. Most readers are now accustomed to the messy hierarchical model of nature, nurture, and soul. They have forgotten that traditional storytelling, even the novels of Jin Yong and Gu Long, also have certain levels of distinction. Or maybe I'm not used to it.

Abandoned the book, the skills I drew still have an expiration date, so I won't read anymore.

I really don't understand why they accept each other as their disciples when they have already defeated them all. If we really want to raise the number of people, we might as well find a few orphans or accept a few trainee disciples.

Why did you add a time travel in front? Does the protagonist look like a time traveler at all? How is it different from the original character? There is no sense of conflict in the middle

A few personal suggestions. After reading dozens of pictures, I think you can change the settings a little: 1. For example, if you draw martial arts, you can set it so that you can draw it once a day. Whatever you draw, you can use this martial arts on that day and reset it the next day. 2. The points earned by completing tasks can be used to draw martial arts, such as 10,000, etc. This kind of martial arts can be learned, and can be upgraded by training or using points. 3. It is also suggested that you should not be too good at martial arts at the beginning. Unless you follow the invincible style, you will know the Nine Yin Manual and the Dugu Nine Swords, and you will feel invincible.

Come on, the author, I see that the author has a lot of thoughts in his heart, and if he writes with spirit, this work will definitely become popular. I have followed and collected your works. I hope you can leave a message in my new game book "Building a World" when you have time. Please vote for it. Thank you...

Not bad, just like listening to traditional storytelling

The work has been collected, please pay attention, please support the author! In addition, my debut novel "Traveling with Sword" is on the shelves. I hope all my friends can take a look and save it. Thank you very much!

If the author is capable, he should not write a system. After all, many such master articles have systems. If you can write a good story without writing a system, then you are awesome.

Obliteration is really a big failure. The rest of the punishments can still allow the pig's feet to fail. The novel can also be more suspenseful and interesting. If you obliterate, will there be any more novels to write? As soon as the task is completed, the readers will know that it will be successful.

End. 😁😁😁😁

Since your book is about traditional martial arts, don't use modern words like ba, ma, etc. It will look really weird and affect the reading experience. You might as well change it to a die-hard girl!

It's finished, so I won't give away the monthly pass (づ ●─● )づ

Also, have you forgotten the three disciples of the Nangong family? They also have martial arts, and they are quite powerful!

The system type, preferably the auxiliary type, don't make it messy, or it will be a lottery once a month or once a week, or it will be a direct exchange type, do not issue tasks and summons, or it may be a treasure in your mind that can help you deduce initiations and the like, and then focus on the description of the plot and characters.