Jianghu Dream Xiaoyao

I found that you really went off the rails. You didn't advance the plot. You just wasted the word count all day long, writing some completely irrelevant and dispensable things. This part of the plot could have been written in one sentence. However, it was just like foot wraps. It was smelly, long, and extremely procrastinating. I was speechless.

The author gives you a big suggestion: You can refer to the character moves of the Golden Puppet Show. In terms of pretentiousness, you are not inferior at all... Ps: Ren Piaomiao/Hei Bai Langjun, one is handsome in swordsmanship and the other is master of yin and yang moves. There is also Shi Yanwen/Hidden Mirror Man's joint move - Attacking the Earth and Conquering the Sky, which is also a display of the power of yin and yang!

Work hard and come on. Already collected. Visiting with "Taikoo Zunxian"

You didn't even report it to xz's nc fans! !

When I read Chapter 6, I found it baffling. The author deleted a small section of the plot.

The author should add some golden characters into it

Why have you changed the introduction? I think the previous one was pretty good, but now this one doesn't match your content at all. I'm afraid you didn't want to change the outline?

There are so few people, so they don't know how to be eunuchs, right? ? ?

Every time I see XZ I am in a state of shock, the writing is not sophisticated enough

Another cliché routine, is it interesting?

I think the author is a bit biased. According to the previous content, it should be about Xiao Zhan, but in the end, the protagonist ran out

This writing 😅 is messy and messy