Taibai Chronicles

Brother, please, can you fucking update it on time? It's the same as squeezing out toothpaste. Even squeezing out toothpaste is better than yours, but you are so hard every ten years.

The writing is good, but since the author set the tone of tragedy, it can only be in vain. Others who can't stand the tragedy should not try to change the author's thinking here, lest it be changed into something nondescript.

The book is captivating at the beginning, the writing is sophisticated and the plot is smooth. I recommend this book in vain. I hope everyone will fall in love with it.

Coming from Diandianquan, first of all, congratulations to the author for signing the contract. Then let me talk about my thoughts after reading three chapters. The writing is okay, it has the flavor of Water Margin, but the characterization is slightly lacking, which may not be felt in reality, but writing novels requires some artistic processing. For example, you cannot expect a small soldier to speak in a casual manner. A small person must have the tone of a small person. For example: The general asked: "How is your relationship with him?" The soldier cannot reply, "General, I am a close friend of him." In this way, it will be difficult to tell who is the general and who is the soldier. To put it bluntly, the soldier does not need to write so elegantly, otherwise it will look strange. There is also the name of the protagonist, which is a bit dramatic. . . Always reminds me of Oriental White. . You know what I mean.

I just started reading this book yesterday. It is very well written and needs to be read slowly and carefully. I hope the author will work hard, keep writing, and sign the contract as soon as possible... By the way, when I was reading the previous chapters, I seemed to see the author saying that he wanted to write a trilogy. Is Sima Bai going to die young? 😭😭😭

Let's briefly talk about Taibai Chronicles and why so few people pay attention to it. I personally think there are three points. First point, after all, the author's wording habits are convoluted, which is in line with the habits of that era, but for people who read the book, they cannot enter this state. If this book can be adapted into a TV series, I believe it will be a rare work. Just like the Romance of the Three Kingdoms, few people can read the novel, but when it is made into a TV series, many people can read it. The second point is the choice of era. Many people who read historical literature now focus on the Qin, Three Kingdoms, Tang, Song and other eras, because these eras have many records in history. However, many people in the Jin Dynasty do not understand that it was a dark era when the Five Hus invaded the Central Plains and the Han people in the north were almost slaughtered. It was not until King Wu Dao was born who killed Hu Ling that the Han people were restored. As a brave and passionate man, I can't wait to experience this war and show the might of the Central Plains. It is difficult for the author to tell such an era and change such a dark era, but here I must support the author to change such an era and make up for the regrets in our hearts. The third point is innovation. The author dares to write about unfamiliar dynasties, and his pioneering spirit has to be admired. It is difficult to innovate in novels nowadays, but it is easy to read novels. Most people like to read things they are familiar with, but many things require a process from unfamiliar to familiar, and it takes a process for readers to open up new horizons. This is what the author is going through now. As long as people can truly understand this dynasty, I believe many people will support the author.

Is it a story about fighting for hegemony? The writing is very good, but the main character is often written as Wu Lie Is it Marquis Wu Lie or Emperor Wu Lie? The writing is so good that I don't want to work for others. Fu Jian can't do it either. It's better to be the one yourself.

Few people have the patience to read a historical novel with more than 30,000 words, and all they pursue is the golden finger of a single soldier. I think your book can be used as a god in the literary era under the banyan tree.

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76W recommended tickets for 29 months?

I read this book last year, and stopped after the first volume. I thought I would read it later when I had gained some weight, but then I forgot about it... I suddenly remembered this book a few days ago, and it happened to be at the front of my bookshelf, so I read all the books I had read before. The author hadn't signed a contract when I first started chasing him, but now he has signed a contract, congratulations! 😁😁 Personally I quite like this book, and I hope I can continue writing it well and finish it. However, I see that the updates have become weekly recently. This is quite uncomfortable. I guess I can only take care of it slowly. Please keep writing! When I first watched it, my only worry was that Sima Bai would die young and the protagonist would be replaced, but now it seems that there should be no worries in this regard, right? 😥😥 I feel that I am quite tolerant of the plot. The only thing that I can't accept is that the protagonist dies young and then I change the protagonist and write it again, because I still really like the protagonist Sima Bai. It would be really a pity if he died young. I would probably give up the story with sadness. When I re-read it in the past few days, I found that the author's ideas have changed a lot, and now they are probably developing in an imaginary direction. I personally like this setting very much. The protagonist is not a time traveler, but an aborigine. A character who does not exist in history has changed history. Although the template of the Eastern Jin Dynasty was applied, in the end, history was changed by a non-existent character, which is a bit fictitious. I would rather see the plot of Sima Bai turning the tide and dominating the world, dancing on the same stage with many historical figures, but ultimately changing history and reviving the Han Dynasty. This development is still very exciting and refreshing! ! After reading the comment section, it seems that many people don't like Cao Xiaocry very much... Well, I quite like this character. I think the author's design is quite clever. The two names, Cao Xiaocui and Shi Yongjia, represent the girls' different identities, different personalities and pursuits, which is very interesting. She is the only character who can have a beautiful rivalry with the male protagonist. She possesses magical weapons, is resourceful (although she made the male protagonist a wedding dress in the end, which was hilarious), is pretty, and has a tangled love-hate relationship with the male protagonist. I think this heroine is quite interesting, and I personally like it. The duel between the two heroes in Huangshitan and the chapter about the ordinary girl left a deep impression on me. I had a lot of fun reading the chapter about the ordinary girl. The two of them had a feeling of being happy enemies, and I was looking forward to their subsequent rivalry and emotional scenes. 😁😁😁 Personally, I still hope to see a happy ending between Sima Bai and Cao Xiaocry or Shi Yongjia. Come on, author! ! !

The author's writing style is very strong, but unfortunately I have no interest in history. I will give you a thumbs up 😁 The new author is still a history writer. Unless he is really good, it is usually difficult to get ahead.

A first-level trumpet, 800,000 words, 590,000 recommendation votes. The brushing is a bit harsh.

More than one million recommendations, 22 monthly votes, is this the current list?

I wrote a book recommendation post before, please go to the author Taibai Chronicles, the best novel I have ever read that travels through the two Jin Dynasties, a classic in the fictional genre! This book is roughly an imaginary history, and the text is full of power and strategy, but it is not the kind of extremely slow and sophisticated historical text. It is very refreshing. The author has obtained the treasures left by the predecessors, but it is not the kind of brainless white text. Although the pig's feet in the first two hundred chapters seem to be going well, in fact, they always fall into the trap. Among other people's calculations, I hate novels with no brainy technology trees the most. This book borrows the power of fantasy to give an alternative ending to the Wu Huan period. It is really in line with the appetite of a historical literary youth like me. I am not the author, but I have just finished reading two hundred chapters, and I was inspired by it. //Actually, if you think about it carefully, this book is quite new. The history of the Jin Dynasty and the Jin Dynasty is too heavy, and writing about this period is relatively niche. In order to be reasonable, novels that examine the party have to be slow to write, and they have to bear the humiliation in the early stage. The unique feature of this book is that it adds a With a touch of fantasy, the plot of Xiaobai has a basis, and the smooth plot also gives great comfort to readers who know that heavy history In fact, the plot is a bit simple, but the author's ancient prose skills are really good. There are ancient poems at the end of some chapters, and the plot is not bad (￣▽￣)

With your update speed and content, even if you rank first, no one will watch it. It's really disgusting to be in the top three of recommended votes.

It's a good article, with rich characters, good writing, and a smooth plot. The author can use it on his own, and don't pay attention to the comments of a bunch of middle school students and malicious trolls. It is recommended to limit the qualifications to speak, so as not to affect the reading experience and writing mood. When the book is completed and the readers become more and more, everyone will have a fair conclusion.

After reading the first few chapters, I don't know what to say. It's impossible to tell whether the protagonist is a native or a time traveler. The so-called golden finger is also inexplicable. The main line is not clear at all.

Is this vote fake?

Always brushing submission tickets SaaS

What rubbish is written? The language is incoherent and incomprehensible.

After reading the author's previous discussion on routine writing, I particularly agree. In fact, I really like the author's way of writing at the beginning. It feels like the opening of a historical biographical film and television blockbuster. It is not fantasy, not time-travel, and not bloody. This is my taste. There are so many cliches in Qidian. In the name of history, they are all a thunderbolt at the beginning. Modern special forces or screenwriters can travel to ancient times and rewrite the world with just a cheat. It makes me vomit. Literature shouldn't be like this.

A group of trainees, bbbb, the author is great, whoever suggested bb is permanently banned. Don't be soft

Why can't I find it in Qidian? I remembered this book I read before I graduated from college. I searched Qidian but couldn't find it. I searched it on Google and scanned the QR code to read the book before I found it again 😰 Has the author been cheated?