Falling Rain Sword Shang

Now that the old style of martial arts has declined, no matter how good your writing is, can it compare to Jin Yong Gu Long?

1. Spend so much time on the conflict between the beggar and Shangguan Qingyi just to bring out the past? 2. If you don't know how to change scenes and cut timelines, you can't divide the whole line. Can you give a reminder to readers? 3. I always thought that the male protagonist in Revenge of the Man in Black was the male protagonist, but it turns out that the male protagonist only came out after 14 episodes.

I feel like the story is okay, but the scene changes are a bit confusing? It seems to have changed suddenly without any warning.

Let me judge you. The author is so perseverant. Not many people dare to write about martial arts nowadays.